Monster Hunting: Starting from the King of Ellu Cats

Please write well, but don't write intrigues. The world view of monster hunting is actually very pure about hunting and research. The entire base is providing support for your hunting.

Personal opinion After reading more than a dozen chapters, the first few seem quite warm. The impact of the story line is that humans are leading the Ailu cat tribe to become strong and prosperous. I won't mention some minor issues. But in the front, the patriarch and a bunch of Elu cats begged the protagonist to be the leader, and in the second part, I couldn't understand the story of swallowing beads. There was a big twist. The protagonist directly wanted to kill the Elu cats in order to become stronger. Another twist was that he wanted to breed the Elu cats for continued development. The gloomy look was obvious. After the protagonist's inexplicable psychological activities, all the Elu cats naturally felt that the protagonist was trying to harm them. The old leader of the Ailumao tribe started a conspiracy theory, and there are hints on the part of the monster hunter that they are trying to destroy the Ailumao tribe on the protagonist's side. 😅 The most annoying thing is that the tribal girl Ailumao looks down on the tribe, and is a big force with money and power. After the tribe develops, the tribe "hardly" slaps her in the face. To be honest, after more than ten chapters, the style of painting becomes obviously weird. If we follow this process, I won't be surprised if the protagonist directly cultivates immortality and prepares to ascend to the "fairy world". It's really true that Monster Hunter fans are doing these starting fairy tale routines.

I haven't watched it yet, but I like Monster Hunter very much. I just hope it fits the Monster Hunter worldview and doesn't involve any conspiracy or plot about robbing monsters and grabbing materials. These two are very disgusting.

Send out smoke bombs to call NPCs to come over and help...

The new Monster Hunter... I hope it won't be another trap novel, and it will have nothing to do but talk about human beings' conspiracies and conspiracies.

There are no big problems, but there are many small problems. There are no obvious language problems in the writing, but semantic incoherence and weak contextual relevance often occur. Occasionally it seems unclear, leaving the reader a little confused. The character creation is quite distinct, but a bit stiff, and some settings seem to be unaware of the author himself. For example, when Taito Miao asked to join the tribe, he regarded Shion as the leader and showed obvious contempt for the protagonist. This is not the attitude a character should have when requesting to join a group; Shion only reminded Tatou Miao that the protagonist is the leader when he knelt down for the first time, and showed no sign of Tatou Miao's obvious disrespectful attitude. This is not the proper expression of seeing the protagonist as the "king" and "future" from the bottom of his heart. The effect of this expression is to make readers feel that the cats only acknowledge the protagonist as their leader, but in fact they do not appreciate or respect the protagonist, but just use him as an enemy. It is obviously contrary to the Ellu Cat King that the author is trying to portray. A similar plot can be found in the previous article. The hunter regards the leader, the protagonist, as the unit of measurement for the combat power of his Ellu cats (and the protagonist also knows it). This is undoubtedly an insulting behavior, especially for the leader of an independent group that has established diplomatic relations on an equal footing. It means that the other party does not take you seriously at all. The author even wrote a plot where the protagonist expressed his dissatisfaction but was ignored by the hunter. I can understand that the author wanted to create some comedy effects, but I have to say that I couldn't laugh at all from this plot. If you want to show respect, it cannot be superficial. The author's writing style reflects "status" in irrelevant aspects (the room, decoration, etc. Given to the protagonist by the Elu cats are very high-end), but does not care about the "insult" of outsiders to the leader. It is easy for people to feel that the protagonist is a fooled puppet king and an empty airs. If you want to go further, the author still needs to pay more attention to details, and you cannot just "write some plots if they feel interesting" without thinking deeply about their meaning.

There is basically no intrigue in Monster Hunter. If you impose it, it is superfluous. If nothing else, in the history of Monster Hunter, after the black dragon smashed the ancient empire, human civilization turned into countless isolated islands. In the end, it was the survivors who united to reconnect. Human civilization is still hovering on the line of life and death. Do you want to live by engaging in intrigue?

Is there a dark political drama? If there is, don't watch it

It's a bit rigid. It doesn't feel like you've traveled through the world, but into the game. The hook actually has to catch the bug.

I hope my background story for the expansion of Monster Hunter's worldview can be used in the book. Corresponds to the creation of the "Five Dragon Legend" in the monster hunting world. A long time ago, people lived in a silver-white world with five dragons. There, there is only the sun and eternal time. Thanks to the gift of eternal time, although people will not lose anything, they will also gain nothing. Suddenly, people felt puzzled and incredible about this phenomenon that had neither beginning nor end, and asked the dragons why. When the dragons opened their mouths to answer, only water came out of their mouths, not answers. After creating the ocean and sky, he just swam away. The five dragons came to the center of the ocean and turned their bodies into islands. One sank into the sea and turned into land. One looked up at the sky and turned into a mountain. One curled up and turned into a lake, and its scales turned into rain. One fell into a deep sleep and turned into a forest. And the last one flew into the sky and turned into a blue star, hanging high above the island. But people can't figure out why the dragons turned into islands. Soon, in order to find out what happened to the dragons, a young man put on a simple coat and took a boat to sail into the dim sea. The young man finally followed the Blue Star and arrived at Dragon Island. After some time, the young man came back. People came up and asked: "Hey, have you seen the dragons?" The young man replied: "Well, I saw the dragons." People then asked: "So, do you know the reason why the dragons turned into islands?" But the young man did not answer. Instead, he took out five dragon fragments from his coat. After the young man handed the fragments to people, he disappeared. So people left the white world and went to the sea, using four of the fragments to create huge land, mountains, lakes and forests. The single fragment belonging to the Blue Star was called by the Blue Star, and people felt the guidance of the Blue Star. In order to prevent the star that originally guided the youth from feeling lonely, they used the Blue Star fragments to copy the sun and create the bright moon. As a result, the world began to move. The huge landmass blocks the sun, so there is a change between day and night. Mountains, lakes, and forests create seasons. The moon brings tides to the sea. In this way, time was born in the world. Due to the flow of time, people have died and at the same time gained new life. With the flow of time, after people began to live on land, ten thousand days and nights alternated. People forget the origin of time and the dragons. But the island was transformed from the bodies of five dragons, and people returned the five fragments to it, and the island has always been regarded as the most important place in the middle of the sea. No one moved here after that. The island has maintained its original appearance in this way. It seems that everything will go on like this, but with the continuous cycle of day and night, everything seems to be unchanged from yesterday. People will gain and lose; they will live and die. Everything seems to be reincarnating, like a new eternity. People are annoyed and confused about this. People wanted to ask, but found that the dragons were no longer there. People decided to go to Dragon Island. At the same time, dark clouds began to gather around the world. Under the guidance of Blue Star, people came to Dragon Island, retrieved five fragments, and tried to create something with the fragments. At this time, dark clouds had filled the entire sky, and a dazzling white light suddenly flashed - the first lightning fell. People are frightened by lightning, and desire quietly arises. Thunder keeps falling, and among the lightning and thunder, human beings become eager for more, want to get what they have lost, long for eternal life, and refuse to die. What followed was a rioting sun. The exposed flares continue to light up on the surface of the sun, and flowing arcs of red energy are intertwined. It's twisting, it's rioting. In an instant, the entangled red arc split, and a huge amount of energy burst out, violently carrying countless material fluctuations and throwing it towards the earth - a storm was coming. The storm waves hit the earth, and red lightning burst out among the clouds and rain in the sky. The storm passed through the clouds and rain, sweeping across the earth, and the entire earth burned - flames appeared in the world, igniting huge fires and burning the entire world. The world was destroyed, time collapsed, and without the rotation of day and night, people who should have died could not die. After an unknown period of time, the storm finally stopped raging, and the whole world seemed to have reached its limit. At this time, people suddenly discovered that the blue star and the five fragments were missing. The moon was no longer bright, but covered the sun, became pitch black, and merged with it to form a black hole. The black hole begins to absorb everything in the world, and everything is unable to resist and keeps disappearing. Everything fell into the black hole, and finally the black hole shrank and disappeared, and the world became pure white again, just like it was at the beginning. Only this time, even the sun and the dragons disappeared without a trace. Only humans can gain nothing and lose nothing in this eternal white world. I don't know what happened, as if in a trance, everything returned to the moment when the black hole first appeared. The difference is that the disappeared young man appeared in front of people holding five fragments. Blue light appeared again in the sky. In the middle of the huge black hole was the only blue star. Following the guidance of the Blue Star, the young man took the five fragments and sank into the black hole with the Blue Star under the witness of people. In an instant, a large amount of blue clouds appeared in the surrounding space and poured into the black hole. The center of the black hole also continuously emitted blue and red lightning to the surroundings. Under the strange scene, a white figure flew out of the black hole, waving huge wings and came to the people on the ground. People thought of something and stepped forward to ask: "Are you a dragon?" When Bai Ying opened his mouth to answer, he only released a strong air flow, sucking in all the flames in the world. Then he took the flames and flew to Dragon Island. From top to bottom on Dragon Island, he reached the deepest part of the world and released all the flames there. The entire earth began to tremble, all the oceans continued to tremble, and countless flame beams rushed out from the underground and the sea floor, forming volcanoes. Then, Bai Ying flew out from Dragon Island, jumped up, flew back into the black hole, and disappeared. The black hole also shrinks and disappears. The turbulent sun, the bright moon, and the guiding blue stars reappear in the sky. The solar storm is coming, and the Blue Star leads the moon to resist the storm together. The storm struck the moon, shattering it, and half of the moon turned into countless fragments that fell to the earth or spread across the sky. The storm hit the blue star, stirring up thousands of blue threads to wrap the entire sky. The oncoming storm turned into red threads and blue threads, flowing outside the sky around the entire world at extremely high speeds, dragging out a long tail, and at its end, disappeared on the other side of the world. The storm has gone, and there is a blue arc of light in the sky where the threads cross. Under the caress of the arc, the damaged moon returns to its brightness, and countless fragments scattered in the sky turn into stars dotting the sky. The moon and the sun will eat each other and separate; the stars will appear and dim, echoing the uncertain waxing and waning of the moon. This time, the world has been destroyed and many new things have been gained. And people lost everything and gained a new world. Time returns, eternity is completely broken, and the world begins to truly move. I don't know how many "ten thousand days and nights" have passed. People have forgotten the origin of time, the dragons, everything that happened in the world, and the island transformed from the bodies of five dragons. Every moment is a new world, the earth will tremble, the ocean will be turbulent, the sky will roar, and the world will move. What has been lost cannot be obtained after all, and in the long and continuous cycle, something is accumulating, and something new will eventually be born. Perhaps the Dragon Island that people have forgotten has changed. In this way, the alternation of day and night has become countless. After countless experiences of the sun and the moon devouring and the stars and the moon eclipsing, countless independent and strange new breaths began to condense. Under the deep sea, in the waves, on the top of the mountains, between the rift valleys, in the forest, in the depths of the wilderness... When the first high-pitched roar penetrated the crater from the deepest part of the earth A new era of man and dragon began.

Since random naming is not easy to use, I always feel that it doesn't match the feeling of El Cat. So I am collecting the names everyone has given to Ellu Cat in the game. It is best to [name + color] The positions arranged are: the whimsical plant researcher, the stronghold in the large anthill wasteland, the fanatical equipment manufacturer, the wizard who studies draconic alchemy, etc. If you have ideas for other positions, you can directly type them below (I want to copy the readers' ideas. Jpg)

It's a cute cat!

Monster Hunter

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I just read the beginning of it, and it's quite well-written. But the material is really niche to the point that it's not good enough, and the writing doesn't give me any special points. Come on, author, don't be a eunuch.