Douluo: I Can Release Control

Chapter 21: Extremely Poisonous. Did the protagonist feel good after just fighting with Tang San? Later, the protagonist commits suicide without thinking and uses the supporting character as a backup. Would Zhuangzi regard such a person as his disciple?

Personally, I feel that the writing in the first dozen chapters is quite high-level, and then it plummets like a cliff.

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 39, 1. The protagonist suddenly said Xuan Yu Hand, Capturing Dragons and Controlling Cranes, and Purple Demon Eyes 2. He stressed that he would not join Shrek Academy, but he also refused to leave (although he knew he wanted to pick up girls, but he was still very vicious) 3. The combat power was not clear.

Zhu Zhuqing's portrayal is very good in both animation and comics. The author likes Zhu Zhuqing and the heroine Zhu Zhuqing is not ashamed. The author and the reader see different things. What the author sees and thinks is only part of what is written. The reader can only see what the author wrote. The author cannot write what he wants to express. He can only give a vague description, which is nothing more than a sentence that is not strong enough. Readers find it unsightly, largely due to aesthetic fatigue. There are thousands of Douluo fans, so there is no need for me to see comments such as "The heroine Zhu Zhuqing, I won't read it" in the comment section of every book. Is it possible that a book like "The heroine Tang San, the heroine Dai Mubai" really needs to be published before I can read it? Douluo fan fiction is nothing more than fast food culture. Can you remember the name of the protagonist in the last Douluo novel you read? Reading a book is enough for a while, there is no need to worry about it.

I still remember the imperial noble man hugging two civilian women on the spot. The women's eyes were full of resentment, sadness, and powerlessness. Tang San said that Wuhun Palace was evil. Is this justice?

The protagonist's birthday is the same as mine. This is the first time I have encountered this kind of thing since I came to Qidian 😆

Is it a single female protagonist? Can it be a single female protagonist?

The heroine is Zhu Zhuqing again. She is the character in seven out of ten books. Do you authors like to steal other people's fiancées so much? , To be honest, I didn't want to watch it when I saw that the heroine was Zhu Zhuqing.

It doesn't follow the main plot line and has no original main line. It keeps wandering around the protagonist group like a follower. The more you watch, the less interesting it becomes. The idea is very good, but the writing is not very good. I hope to see you in the next book by the author.

Cat Baby

I'll go right up there and turn the person into a vegetative state with one blow, making him unable to move. Is this considered forced control?

Big bosses try to reward characters as much as possible, this way you can still get star points, thank you very much! ! !

Go to tama Tangmen, Shrek. Long live Wuhundian≧▽≦

The male protagonist wears a hat, only in this way can he be worthy of Zhu Zhuqing

Regardless of what I said before about not joining, it was actually Tang San and Xiaogang who came to the nanny and licked the dog

Personally, I suggest that you try to downplay the protagonist's emotional line. There are a lot of comments at the beginning of each book asking for a heroine. Many new authors write heroines to take care of these comments, but they don't consider how their own emotional scenes are written. Most of the author's emotional scenes are so rubbish that people who read them will have embarrassment cancer. A good story plus a good emotional drama is the icing on the cake, a good story plus a bad emotional drama is a fly in the ointment, a good story without emotional drama is still a good story, an average story with a good emotional drama is a bonus, an average story without emotional drama can keep interested people reading, and an average story with a bad emotional drama is also bad for the story.

This writing style I think the three young masters of the Tang family are better than you

Zhu Zhuqing has become a bus again

Hurry up and update, otherwise the author will be arrested in the dark room, and I will treat you... Hehehe😏

Didn't anyone who wrote Zhu Zhuqing as the heroine think about it? Will Emperor Xingluo allow his future daughter-in-law to have sex with his son? Will the Xingluo Zhu family allow their own people to violate their agreement with the Dai family? It will definitely not be allowed. What are the consequences? You know, the original work clearly states that the Star Luo Empire is much more powerful than the Tian Dou Empire. Not to mention there are many Titled Douluo, there should be two or three. Even if not, there must be a few soul Douluo-level people from the Zhu family and the Dai family who have soul fusion skills comparable to those of the Titled Douluo! Squeezing a protagonist in his thirties or forties to death would probably take a little more effort than squeezing an ant to death! Why do so many authors just care about having fun? I don't understand, it's just a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't agree, it's just uncomfortable to hold in your heart.

Don't miss it if you pass by ٩(*´◒`*)۶

This is the most rubbish Douluo fan fiction I have ever read, with a rating of 0.1 Stars.

I don't know why, but as soon as I saw Zhu Zhuqing, I didn't have the intention to continue reading. Can you please stop doing the CP of the original work? If you want a girl, create it yourself! You are the author! No matter what kind of woman you want, you have to forcefully dismantle the original work. If the original work was a tragedy, you could just take it apart, but it's not. It just looks very uncomfortable. Abandon the book, bye.

Brothers, stop reading this. This is a dog-licking article.

The first part was okay, but then I felt very confused. In a daze, I followed Shrek to play the game again. I said I didn't want to participate in the game, but I followed Shrek again. I was really confused, and I didn't understand the role of the heroine written by the author. I somehow entered a dream and met the protagonist. He said that he would be inexplicably arrogant if he didn't participate in the competition with Shrek (๑•.•๑). It's better to join directly and help others play the game for free, just mix it up with fairy grass, and it won't have any effect -_-||

Author, come on, invested

Thank you for your support, I have received the signing news and the contract is being printed. Plan to send express tomorrow. So, friends who have already invested can rest assured, and those who want to invest can still make some money.

834444201, If you want to add it, you can come and play

Why do the covers look so similar???

Why can others use the equipment directly without turning it into a soul ring? If there is such an operation, wouldn't it be stupid for the protagonist to turn the equipment into a soul ring? ?