
Play Time Travel in Zhetian
在遮天玩穿越
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- 1.5M Words
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- Cultivation
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- Male
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- Fantasy Cultivation
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- 4y ago
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- Qidian
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Niu 13, the protagonist ate all the nine elixirs in the ancient holy land and lived in the realm of immortality for more than 20 years! ! ! Niu 13 You can imagine how powerful the protagonist is. You must know that even the peak emperor can live another life with the elixir. Alas, the protagonist can only live for more than 20 years, so you can imagine how powerful he is! ! !
I can't figure it out. The ruthless man and the desolate master are not completely dead yet. Why are they trying to grab the Nine Wonders of the Elixir? The Qing Emperor is still lingering in the desolate tower, squeezing out the emperor's blood? The Qing Emperor doesn't want to give it to you, so with just this drop of blood, it won't be difficult to make Donghuang split open, right? In fact, regarding Shouyuan's problem, wouldn't it be great if you used the golden finger, the ancient tripod, to let the protagonist live a second life? It can not only solve the lifespan problem, but also allow the protagonist to truly get rid of the identity of Nangong Zheng and integrate into the Zhetian universe. What's the difference between this situation now and Nangong Zheng's past, when he wanted to fight for immortality? They all became clowns.
Not to mention that you were able to steal Ye Fan's Nine Wonders of Elixir under the arrangement of the Emperor of Nanling. How could a person who has not yet achieved immortality live twenty years after taking it? Ye Fan first attained the Holy Body and then obtained the Seal of Heaven's Heart to prove that the Heavenly Emperor could live another life with the help of the elixir. The protagonist is not the Second Immortal but the Immortal King, right?
At the beginning, the abuser has nine life springs and eight seals. The life of the remaining one is reduced to three years. The abuse of the master is no longer popular. I don't know what to think
Are you serious? Taking the elixir of immortality will last 20 years? Are you a seriously injured and dying true immortal or an immortal king? And grabbing the Nine Wonders of the Elixir? The ruthless person and the Dacheng Holy Body were so confused that they were awake for a few days. The problem was that this thing was left at her doorstep, and it was of great use specially reserved for Ye Fan 😅 Even a rural aunt can catch you stealing a few green onions from her doorstep.
The Holy Land of Shaoguang cannot control its own imperial soldiers. This second design is too poisonous. If it cannot be controlled, how can a random saint take it away and control the Holy Land of Shaoguang for tens of thousands of years? Think before setting up
In the Holy Ruins, Ye Fengchu has surpassed the Immortal Emperor and reached the Dao Sacrifice Realm, which is at least a higher level than Da Luo. Endless time and space are eternal and free. What you want to tamper with may only be a projection of the past. If you really want to go too far, be careful to welcome attacks from unknown time and space at any time.
Douluo: I, Tang San, will marry Bibi Dong in this life
The protagonist is reborn as Tang San. He refuses to be a master at the beginning, marries Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue's mother and daughter, makes Xiao Wu a licking dog, joins the Wuhun Palace, supports the Wuhun Palace to unify the two empires, and angers his father Tang Hao to death. A different protagonist Tang San, who does not join Shrek, captures Bibi Dong and Qian Renxue, and brutally tortures Yu Xiaogang and Dai Mubai. Come and take a look, just click in to watch.
Making trouble in Xian Ni changes the original plot (history), aren't you afraid that Wang Lin's killing clone will slap him? The protagonist is a person who does not exist in the original history. In order to resurrect Li Muwan, Wang Lin will eliminate all variables, and the killing clone who inherits Wang Lin's memory and is given a mission has a high chance of capturing the protagonist's soul and searching for the reason.
Yes, it's well written. Don't write it next time! 😏
The first time I saw this book, what I noticed was that the book lists were hung up and painted What a magical book!
Laughing to death, Chen Dong wrote about the world of immortality just to slap the prehistoric world in the face. The author actually set the Three Sovereigns, Five Emperors, Pangu, Nuwa and Sanqing Zhunti in the world of immortality to be branded in the prehistoric world? When Chen Keng, whose old age is unknown, saw it, he probably wished he could give the author a colorful red hair.
Most novice authors like to write funny protagonists, because most of them have no writing skills, and funny protagonists can help them improve their word count. The psychological activities and funny behaviors of the protagonist can be written in one chapter. If you want to write like this, why bother posting it? It's just for your own viewing.
It's so poisonous that I can't stand it anymore
Find a factory to make screws. You can earn more than this.
The protagonists of Zhutian-ryu Mugen-ryu are basically unattractive. They basically compete for skills, magical powers, opportunities, and women. They rely on knowing the plot. This is no different from putting the answers in front of you in an exam for you to copy. Looking at the original characters, the protagonists have grown up step by step from being weak and experienced numerous life and death crises and various calculations. It gives people the impression that they are top-notch in terms of character and perseverance. In the end, they are so unsightly in the eyes of the Mugen-ryu protagonists. I really don't feel that these Mugen-ryu humanistic protagonists are so powerful. Many of them write The author of Unlimited Fans is not good at writing. After writing and reading it, it makes people feel like a fat nerd who fantasizes about being Qin Shihuang or even surpassing Qin Shihuang. He does not feel the state of mind and invincible courage that a strong man should have at all. He can only feel self-righteous. Being complacent, seeing that everyone is superior to others, and going out to show off whenever there is a chance. It is really difficult to reach the level of elegance. It is really disgusting for fans of the original book to realize themselves by stepping on the protagonists of other people's books. This is also the reason why Infinite Flow fandom cannot become popular.
After reading Chapter 8, let's take a closer look at the plot I won't say whether the protagonist is a loser or not. A lot of typos can also reflect the author's hard work I, Nangong Dangong, inexplicably cultivated 9 life springs. I was hit by thunder and suffered severe pain. I fought with the calamity with my fists and even rushed into the thunder clouds and walked against the sky. Very hot-blooded. Then I failed to overcome the calamity Then I revived him and inexplicably abducted Liu Yiyi. The protagonist is still dissatisfied with his character? Then why did you turn around This plot really reflects the author's extreme randomness. I suggest you read it after writing it. I really don't know what the psychology of the powerful Nangong Dangong is. One moment, it hurts to be thundered. The other moment, he fights fiercely with the calamity in the thunder cloud. The other moment, "Hey, I don't want to kill, I just want to coexist in harmony with nature." Are you Nangong Clown himself? I hope the author will be more attentive and look forward to the next book
It's just nonsense. Taking the elixir will increase your life span by 20 years, and the dragon-patterned black cauldron cannot be revived without encountering other imperial soldiers. Why are you writing a Zhetian fanfic? You might as well change your skin and treat it as your own original work.
I want to write a Zhetian fanfic, but I don't know what kind of protagonist to choose? Holy Spirit, Divine Body or Overlord Body?
It's really poisonous💩. Even though he was confused at the beginning to overcome the tribulation, he took advantage of Kowloon to pull the coffin into the ancient forbidden land, and sneaked in without telling the ruthless person. The author is really smart.
I want to complain, the protagonist's weapon is a tower, it's ninety-nine floors, it can't be a stick 🤫
It's really not good-looking and badly written. Many of them are based on the original work. Gai Jiuyou can really become the emperor. He has already become the great emperor. Do you really think that he is missing an elixir of immortality? He has a great injury. He is really brainless and disgusting to watch. The characters and protagonists are written like children. Also, it is written to be rotten and weak. Let's talk about this to avoid newcomers falling into the trap.
This protagonist can compete with Zhang Han to see who is fatter. Mader is simply fatter than lard.
Sometimes I follow the original work, and sometimes I create my own. It says in the front that there is a true spirit returning to the emperor level, but later on it turns out that I can't do it as a supreme being. It's quite useless. As expected, I'm worthy of being said to be the peak person when I go online, and I get offline quickly.
Really sucks. Obviously there are so many that we must seal a few. That is,
After reading Chapter 53, I feel a little tired. You have to force yourself to read on, otherwise how will you know what will disgust you next?
It's completely nonsense. You kill the Tao without even knowing what it is. You are awesome. What's even more funny is that the protagonist can become an emperor under the pressure of Gai Jiuyou Dao. It's already good for the protagonist to have the Great Saint Body with his strength! Do you think that every Dacheng Holy Body can be killed by Ye Fan? In the original work, Huang Di and others were all beaten by the Ascended Supreme. You must know that they are the emperor's zombie channelers, not much worse than the Dacheng Holy Body. Even when they faced the Ascended Supreme, they were killed instantly. Why can the protagonist kill the Supreme? Just because you have a big face? Look at those Heavenly Emperor-level experts. Which one doesn't have a strong physique? On the other hand, the protagonist can kill the Supreme Being, defeat the Great Emperor and suppress him to become the Emperor without any physical constitution. Who do you think you are? I think too highly of myself
I was introduced to poison every day! 🤫🤫
A brief discussion on lifespan and complaints about cultivation
What's the fuss about adding more than 20 years to your lifespan? The ruthless man broke the complete Nine Wonders of the Eternal Medicine into nine types of magic medicine with different effects, each of which bore 13 fruits. Eating these fruits will not affect the ability to take the complete elixir and live in the next life. This means that the effect of increasing lifespan has been reduced, leaving different effects that just lay a solid foundation for Ye Fan. Furthermore, whether it is more than 20 years or more than 200 years, the protagonist is able to achieve the third immortality. A breakthrough will increase his life span by at least 2,000 years. There is not much discussion about the doubtful point of life span. What I can't accept is, what is the protagonist practicing? The cultivation level that traveled through time was that of Nangong Zheng, with nine life springs, five Taoist palace gods, spiritual consciousness, and physical body all given by Mopan. The protagonist was confused all the way, and had no control over his "own" spiritual consciousness and gods. The spiritual consciousness gods took it upon themselves to grab the benefits. What are they doing? Rebel against Tiangang? In addition, when it comes to slashing the path, the protagonist doesn't even know what his own path is. As mentioned above, he is confused all the way. His cultivation, physical body, and spiritual consciousness are not his own, and he doesn't even know his own path. He even shouts, "Anyone who blocks my immortality will be killed." Is this the path of killing? Isn't this funny? Except for the pitiful memory and self-will, everything is not his own, and it is simply ridiculous to brazenly shout about immortality. Finally, this is my own opinion. In a fantasy world, especially a high-level world, immortality is just an add-on, especially for those who travel through time. If you can't do it, you can't blame anyone. It's useless everywhere. On the contrary, you should pursue your own way more, like a desolate person who decides for eternity, like a ruthless person who only waits for one person to return in the world of mortals. I think those who cheat on time travel are at least pursuing "where did the cheating come from" and "where did I come from", right? Pursuing immortality? Follow Jiang Taixu's example of investing in Ye Fan, close your eyes and then open them again. Well, your investment target is on par.
The Supreme Being of One Life, the Realm of Immortality, Covering the Sky, God's Tomb, Realm: Celestial Immortal=True Immortal=Ancestral God=Heaven Rank Legend=Immortal King=The King=The Heaven-defying Rank Creation=Quasi-Immortal Emperor=Emperor=The Peak of the Heaven-defying King The Other Shore>Immortal Emperor, Emperor The Supreme Being of One Life: Foundation building, accumulating energy, nine orifices (unity of man and nature, half-step exterior scene) exterior scene of Nine Heavens, Dharmakaya Human Immortal, Earth Immortal, Heavenly Immortal, Legend, Creation, The Other Shore, Half-step Fruit, Dao Fruit Rudiment, Dao Fruit Sacred Tomb: First Level, Second Level, Third Level, Fourth Level, Fifth Level (Peerless Master), Sixth Level (True Martial Arts) , seventh level (immortal martial arts), god king, god emperor, heaven level, heaven-defying level, heaven-defying king level peak Eternal Life World: Mortal Transformation, Consciousness Storehouse, Controlling the Sky, Nirvana, Immortality, Fish Leap, Perfect Human, Thorough Earth, Tongtian (half-ancestor) Ancestral God, Supreme Ancestral God, Stoneman King, Emperor or Emperor Zhetian: Wheel Sea, Dao Palace, Siji, Hualong, Xiantai (immortal half-step almighty master, immortal two almighty saint master, immortal three-level zhandao, immortal four saints, immortal five saint kings, immortal six great saints, immortal seven quasi-emperors, immortal eight great emperors), Hongchenxian = quasi-immortal king = peak of true immortals