The Enlightenment of the Heavens Begins with Covering the Sky

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Just suppress the protagonist. Whether you admit it or not, the protagonist has lived for thousands of years. Is it interesting to compete with a group of people who are decades old? After returning to Zhetian, he could have reached Immortal 2, but he had to suppress the protagonist to Immortal 1. OK, you said that you want the protagonist to increase his background, which is barely acceptable (although I don't know how you want to increase the protagonist's background. In thousands of years, the Tao has been enlightened, and the scriptures have also been understood. The rest is not just to find opportunities for breakthroughs, but I can break through naturally, but I have to suppress it, but I have seen it. Other fans, some authors said that you need to understand the mystery of each realm. I assume you think so too and find your own reasons so that you can reluctantly accept it.), But later you actually said that you can't use the power of the king for fear of being regarded as a monster by others. I think it's funny. Not to mention that there are many people who know that the holy body has a secret cultivation method (there are definitely many Zhetian passers-by) Everyone knows), Xiang Yufei and Wang Teng were not regarded as monsters when they were in their teens and twenties. Others would only regard them as geniuses. What's more, monster can also be said to be another name for genius, even more genius than genius. You actually wrote that the protagonist is afraid of being regarded as a monster by others and dare not use his own power. If you feel that the protagonist has improved too quickly , then why did you let the protagonist stay in the mortal world for so long in the first place? You could have finished writing the mortal world and then let the protagonist return to the Zhetian Realm, or write about the spiritual world. But now the protagonist has stayed in the mortal world for such a long time, and when you come back, you are afraid that the protagonist will improve too quickly and suppress the protagonist. Aren't you digging a hole for yourself and poisoning the readers?

I don't think the ancient holy body is so powerful. Isn't it supposed to have such a strong combat power after using so many resources? A strong physique should be able to have strong combat power with the least resources.

I forgot what the Qing Emperor's essence and blood does in the original book, but in this book, it takes 9 drops of essence and blood to reach the peak of Life Spring. Why don't you die? 9 Drops of the emperor's essence and blood are worth several hundred kilograms?

Why are they all ancient holy bodies? They are so cliché.

Let me just say that Liu Yunzhi and those people can be killed at will. I have seen many books that are clearly capable of killing them, but they do not kill their protagonists, but instead make them disgusting. As for which classmates are actually only Ye Fan is useful, many of them have to take into account that they pretend to be grandchildren in their hearts, but do not take into account the mood of the readers.

In fact, the popularity of fan fiction nowadays really does not depend on the physique, but on whether the protagonist is strong, innovative or cool, and his operation is cool or not. What is strong is the person, not the physique If you can't follow the plot and the original protagonist, it depends on the author's imagination.

I gave up using swords as soon as I saw them. Zhe Tian and his colleagues used too many swords. I'm tired of aesthetics, not to mention that you, an ancient holy body, are obviously a tank, shouldn't you use guns and halberds? If it really doesn't work, Zhongding can do it.

The black and yellow mother Qi root is used to refine the sword. I am speechless. The Xuanhuang mother Qi root represents weight, so it is more suitable to refine it into a heavy weapon, right? The sword represents sharpness. Why, crush someone to death with a sword?

This is the most rubbish book among Zhetian fanfics.

Can this kind of bullshit and horse writing also be exempted? A waste of free space.

After reading Chapter 48, Zong Ti felt that what the author wanted to write was to "take the protagonist's path and leave the protagonist with no way to go." Because the protagonist of the original work has practiced the skills, magical powers, opportunities, and the path he will take in the future, the protagonist in the book must keep intact. Doesn't this mean that the protagonist of the original work has no way to go!

Nine drops of emperor's blood are the source of life. The Eucharist is awesome. Draining all the blood from Wanqing's heart, which was transformed into the Qinglian elixir, he would probably be able to reach Shenqiao. With all his efforts, he could barely make it to the Taoist Palace. Ten thousand elixirs are not as good as one leg hair of the Holy Body. The Great Emperor's elixir can barely be exchanged for one ten.

As soon as this intelligent system comes out, it will know that it is going to be finished.

It's so poisonous that even the Emperor's heart is so full of blood that you can't even break through to the other side. Xuanhuang Mother Qi Source Root, God, damn your sword practice, you want to kill people with your sword, right?

It's incredible. The Nine Drops of Demon Emperor's blood allowed the protagonist to break through from the sea of ​​suffering to the peak of Life Spring. It's amazing.

I left after reading one chapter. The Holy Body means that if you want to follow a similar path to Ye Fan, you need to constantly seize opportunities for the protagonist. Moreover, not deviating from the original plot also means that there is no new idea.

Can eunuch books be exempted from the upper limit? Absolutely amazing

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I can't read it at all. I'm writing a fanfic, but I'm not an original male pig with bad character. Don't write it if you take the opportunity from others. If you take it, it's still garbage.

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