Pirate Golden Phoenix General

Don't be soft on Luffy just because he is the original protagonist.

I haven't read it yet, but your profile seems very poisonous.

The protagonist is a pirate, but the title is General Jinfeng.

Isn't it good to just write about Suzaku? We already have a blue dragon, so writing about Suzaku isn't very good.

What did I see? Multiple heroines? Oh yo! Interesting 🌚

To be honest, if Luffy wasn't the protagonist, he would have died a long time ago

Jin Feng, one of the nine chicks raised by Feng, is the eldest daughter of Feng and Huang. I drink only the morning dew, eat only fresh bamboo, and sleep only on thousand-year-old sycamore trees. It is precisely because of her delicate temperament that she is deeply loved by the royal family and often appears on the clothes of the queen and concubines to show her nobility. Of course, this is just the golden phoenix in myths and legends, and has nothing to do with this book at all! The "Golden Phoenix" in this book is completely the author's imagination and is original!

And can the name be changed? Don't you think Jin Feng is quite middle-class? Forgive me for being so picky.

After reading the first few chapters, I decided to quit.

The introduction of the book has a strong sense of seeing Long Aotian 😰

I mentioned hard training at the beginning, but the process was not explained clearly, and it felt like a running account.

The plot is okay, but the writing is too poor. It feels like a chronicle novel.

When the protagonist saw Zhu Yuan, his personality suddenly changed. The experience of the past few years was as if it had never happened. It was so sudden and made me feel so uncomfortable. Maybe it was because I had read too many novels and became more and more picky. But come on, the plot is very good. Strengthen your logical turns. I will support you in the next book. Come on.

Mutations? Are the fruits mutated? How many more will turn into steel mode? Also a few golden phoenixes. I didn't know there was a phoenix in the Whitebeard Pirates. It's a contradiction. Looking for scolding.

After reading a few chapters, 🥵 to be honest, there is too much nonsense. I feel like the author is just trying to make up the word count, I'm speechless 🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵🥵

The writing style needs to be improved a bit. Many of the descriptions are quite embarrassing and there is also a lot of nonsense.

Actually, I really want to see a hundred-armed giant, or a hundred-handed Guanyin 100 swords to chop you to death. 😁😁😁

Taotu is so ugly, why choose her as the heroine?

The protagonist is going to be a dog for the Celestial Dragons! Don't tell me that the navy protects the world and protects the weak. It's all nonsense. The navy is just a lackey that protects the Celestial Dragons. If not, where would there be so many pirates? For example, they don't care about auctioning the slave navy, right? Those are just human traffickers, caught from certain places.

There are pirates all over the place. Why is he called General Jinfeng? ?

The golden phoenix brings the boss a fortune

I've only read a few chapters, and if you don't talk about the rest, you're too naive. There are so many useless drawings.

Isn't Kaido still a little boy, the Beast Pirates?

When I saw the title of your book, I was reminded of Sister Feng inexplicably.

The plot is pretty good, but the protagonist becomes a pirate and goes to sea at the age of thirteen. Isn't it a bit young? And the emotional scenes are so awkward that you even have a harem...

After reading a few chapters, the timeline is confusing