Turns Out I'm the Monster

1. When writing the protagonist sisters, I was also hesitant whether to make them good-looking, because in ancient poor families, it was really difficult to produce beautiful women due to malnutrition, but after thinking about the book, I also considered that in ancient times, poor families did not produce good-looking people. For example, The thin horse in Yangzhou, and the war-torn family, The Xi Shi whose father sells firewood and washes clothes to support the family. And appearance is not only affected by food and clothing, but also by temperament. Just like many people change their appearance after going to college. The three protagonist sisters were all raised by their mothers with the same background and canread and read. 2. And why there are so many sisters. I was really stupid about this. I thought it would be like this in college. It is easy to develop the plot, and it is consistent with some of the theories of the Taiping sect, the protagonist behind me. I really can't change this now. But I guarantee that the current plot has made them all hidden. Finally, I am a newbie and my writing skills are very poor. Please be patient with me. If you have any mistakes, you are welcome to correct me. I will correct it as soon as possible! ! You can also provide some ideas and cheats for everyone to create together. After all, most of the people reading this book are big book fans, and they feel a little sorry for Lime Martial Saint. Thank you everyone for liking it! !

Not my cup of tea, I feel like you are in the underworld. Moreover, you, a Taoist, are destroying everyone's family every day, okay? Is this what Taiping Dao cultivates? It's obvious that the plot is advancing too fast. To write about such a chaotic city, refer to the late Qing Dynasty, or the situation in Colombia and Mexico. You won't feel it at all.

The author has not learned the essence of "Go away!" The hooks are simple and clear, but there are a lot of authors, and there is a lottery. The lottery is so bad. Many works have been ruined by the lottery. There should not be so many hooks. These two points make the novel no longer immersive.

The system of Shifang is broken. On the same map, when the protagonist has not cultivated, his martial arts are awesome. The immortals in the whole world are hibernating. After the protagonist cultivates, there are as many immortals as dogs in the world. It's the world that accompanies the protagonist to grow up😂

What kind of dog is invincible? Can you not label it "invincible"? Tell me what makes the protagonist invincible. The upgrade flow is the upgrade flow, the useless flow is the useless flow, and the ant flow is the ant flow. It is not shameful to write "upgrade", "waste" and "ant" on the label. Why do you write "invincible flow"?

Well written, with the style of getting away from the boss

I was born in a troubled time, and I had to take care of my family while cultivating. Even great people would not dare to write like this. If you don't have some skill, don't write it. Once you write it, it will be poisonous.

🤔 A Wudiliu tricked out three sisters to cause trouble for him, and when he went to save his sister, he got into a fight with the woman in a daze and ended up in a daze 🤔

Although the writing is good, the novel cannot be too divorced from reality. In troubled times, a family is hungry and full. The four children in the family are definitely skinny and sallow. Where can they go? Several of your books have the same problem. They lack logical consistency and cannot justify themselves. Good writing on the subject matter was wasted.

Drawing a tiger is not the opposite of a dog. Have you studied the market? Have you studied the master seriously? It's not exciting at all. You are magnifying all their shortcomings and obliterating their advantages. It's completely the opposite, just like one of your fans commented on the one who saved his sister. It's a failure and a bullshit.

This book is also called "Sisters Defense": What should I do if my beautiful older sister and younger sister are coveted? "A man takes three beautiful girls and a slutty father on a journey of survival in another world"

Does the author really understand the meaning of Yangzhou thin horse? Yangzhou Shouma was really not raised by poor people, but by human traffickers. Even if an ordinary family raises one for money, it will provide them with good food and drink. With so many sisters, they would have gone bankrupt long ago.

If I don't jump in the later stage, I feel like I will become a god with a book.

Not all of the five books are eunuchs. How can I block the author?

Having one sister is enough trouble. Are three of them going to take the romance route and work full-time to build bridges and pave roads for their sisters?

When I read Chapter 7, I was completely speechless. He was a Taoist priest in his previous life. Within a few days after traveling back in time, he became a decisive killer and a master of interrogation. There was no foreshadowing at all. If you say he was a killer in his previous life, it was almost the same. In Chapter 7, he cuts his tongue and curls his nails again. Is this what a Taoist priest should be able to do?

You can only read the first part of the book when you roll it away, and then you can't read it anymore.

You copied too much, and you have no strength and you still like to pretend to compare. You are brainless.

This type of book imitates Get Out, but it is far inferior to the Get Out book. It is the downfall of this type of book that it contains too much nonsense and too much drama.

I feel restless and can't see clearly. The origin of the protagonist is not mentioned at the beginning, and is briefly mentioned later. The system didn't say anything, just wrote two words casually. Martial arts and cultivation are just mentioned casually. I only have this martial arts, I practice it and use it, that's it. The main plot is about family affairs. Sometimes a few people come to take a peek, and sometimes a gang comes to covet you. I can't bear to watch it at all, maybe it's not suitable.

Was it already five years ago for the Martial Saint of the Ten Directions?