The Laid-Back Life in an Apocalyptic Bunker

The foreshadowing is too great for the author to control. First came a level 9 civilization, then Mother Earth, then a mothership that was suspected to be a clone, then an apocalyptic notebook, and finally there was a system that suspected Pigfoot's former lover. After all, Pigfoot might have been a loser who had been reincarnated for several lives. I said, author, what do you want to do? How many years do you want to write about so many sinkholes? Each of these pitfalls can be used as the main line of a novel.

If you say pig's feet have a worrying IQ, imagine this system. . . . . . It feels like as long as you are not an idiot, you can live like an idiot under the care of the system father. I'm thinking about how a person with low IQ can live for 20 years before being chosen by bad guys as bait.

This name is too hellish.

Write the protagonist to death to liberate the system and start a mechanical craze. The protagonist is a fool!

This is the weirdest name of a novel protagonist I have ever seen, bar none.

That's leisurely🤔🤔🤔Did I get deceived?

I want to ask, your profile says that you are reborn six months before the end of the world. The end of the world, six months, how do you know there will be the end of the world? I haven't read the book yet, so I just looked at the introduction. Your sentence doesn't make sense!

Author, are you being ridiculous? The protagonist must have this name

Change the name. If the protagonist is called this name, there will be a lot less people in the first chapter.

Is there something wrong with the author's outline? So many holes dug in more than twenty chapters? Don't you consider the readers' reading experience at all? You have many settings, so you can dig slowly. Digging out so much at once and rambling here and there only makes me think that you wrote fragments at the beginning.