Fog Survival Game

If he doesn't know how to write emotional scenes and still writes them, is the author causing trouble for himself?

Don't write about the heroine. This book needs to be upgraded to a higher level

Survival type, you put it here to talk about love?

Actually, I think it's interesting to write about the male protagonist and his childhood sweetheart. There are very few female protagonists in this genre. The main thing is not to write about the ex-girlfriend. As long as the male protagonist and his childhood sweetheart are together and the single female protagonist is not ambiguous, I will decide how much you write. . .

It's okay to have a female protagonist, why do you still have to be a bitch? And it's one of a kind? If you continue to write like this, only a fool will read it. Farewell

I haven't read it, but I'll read the comments first. I miss the protagonist and lick the dog protagonist.

The map structure is good, but it's a pity that I don't like the plot very much. Since it is isolated from reality, there should be no connection. It is understandable that it is to enrich the plot, but it feels that the connection is not big and the conflict is meaningless. I hope that the protagonist will bravely go out alone without too many ties. The above only represents my personal opinion

Is the heroine dead? No, bye.

It wouldn't be nice without a heroine. I can't write but I have to write it.

I personally think that the character of the heroine is quite good, including that the protagonist's outlook on life is very upright. In this weird world, having someone to accompany you is more important than anything else. Some people in the comments said that trading is not good, but in this environment, basically ordinary people come in. If there is no trading market, 90% of people will die. Not everyone has the experience of surviving in the wilderness. You can try to bring yourself into it. How many days do you think you can survive?

Too much useless dialogue, it's honestly so boring

If you agree with the heroine, just be a little tall. If the whole heroine dies, it will be a meteorite escape. At least it is not a stallion story, which is good. Anyway, this is a novel. If you really can't, let's take a look at the key points of the bubble drama to wrap it up. It doesn't have to be the same as reality. The part about the pancreas has been written in, so there is no need to pursue reality.

The heroine is not as annoying as the comments section says, I think it's okay personally. It is also said that the hero licked her, but she doesn't feel it now, and isn't the girl taking the initiative in the emotional scenes? Could it be that what I saw was fake🤔

By the way, what are the three views of the comments? The heroine is indeed a little annoyed, but not to the point you said! Also, those who say that the protagonist is too holy have forgotten that the protagonist was once a soldier or a special forces soldier and attended the military academy. People can be selfish but they cannot be too selfish.

I really don't think the heroine is as miserable as you say.

There are a bunch of single chicks in the comment area, nothing more than YY killing people.

Thanks to Shennong, licking a dog will lead to a good death. Farewell.

To be honest, I haven't read this book. But! Nine out of ten people in the comment area are complaining about the love line, which shows that the love line is really poisonous. . .

Very well written! Author, please continue to update and I will continue to subscribe.