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- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 104k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Business & Workplace
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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65Chapters
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Tycoon's Daily Life
ZZ. I couldn't even get through the three scenes.
The name of Pig's Feet has been changed. Are the other plots the same as the previous one?
After reading the first 5 chapters, they are all very fancy, and I feel that there is no logic at all, no context, and the characters are not developed. The three elements of writing are that there is a problem with character creation, the relationship between the characters is confusing, and the relationships between the characters are not clear. The character, language, and actions are not written. The family relationship is not explained, the description of the environment is not good, the background is not explained clearly, the plot has no ups and downs, no reversal, no conflict, no logic, and not even a running account. Just write down an outline wherever you think of it. I suggest you revise it, otherwise it will be easy to quit.