Naruto's Ascension to Immortality

This is like the animation of the prologue of the game is 10 hours long, and I can only put it here to watch the movie; the first paragraph of the high school essay is actually 600 words, a total of 800 words; when you go to a restaurant to eat, the waiter insists on telling you the history of each dish as a documentary, and you won't take your order until you finish listening; when you go to a driving school to learn to drive, the instructor tells you the history of the development of the automobile industry... I vomited.

The last author who so forcibly grafted real Japanese culture and Naruto's world view has already published two books on Eunuch. If you don't write a good orthodox fan, you have to use the original settings as scraps. If you deviate from the market positioning, you are destined to not be popular.

To be honest, I have read this novel a long time ago and read a few chapters at that time because it contains the immortal cultivation system and the chakra system. The sense of separation between the two systems makes it boring and a pity to abandon it. Recently, I suddenly read it again and read it through. The author's writing style is still good. It's very good, the data query is well-founded, and it connects various plots in Naruto (including the theatrical version). Some of the conjectures are also logical. Generally speaking, it is worth reading. For some readers, the fusion of the two systems may feel uncomfortable when reading it for the first time. Above!

This second hypothesis is too long and has too much discussion

Withdrawn, withdrawn, the beginning is okay, after about forty chapters, I can't stand it anymore, but it just doesn't suit my taste, come on, but I feel that you can just regard Naruto as a world view, and don't have to deliberately connect it with Konoha. A seven-year-old kid causing trouble

Personally, I feel that this book should not be read as a Naruto fanfic. It has jumped out of the Naruto framework. Readers who like to read the original Naruto fanfic, please read it! Otherwise, the author will be hated by you. If you don't like it, just leave. Don't leave any bad words about the book. Also, this book has a very long foreshadowing. It was okay before I paid for it, but it won't be so good after I paid. That's it. Let me know what you think of.

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😒What a mess! The character design of the protagonist is really a failure

It's really well written and can be said to be unique. The setting is very novel. But it still suffers from the disease of old writers and young people. The beginning is okay, but in the middle, it suddenly tells the past for nearly ten chapters. This past can be covered in a chapter or even half a chapter or a few words, or even placed in an extra chapter. Of course it's fine as a supplement to the main body of the story, but if you put it here, it will lead to the problem of claiming the throne. You don't have a complete story at the beginning, which is very frustrating and will discourage readers. The establishment is placed in the extra story. The settings are outstanding

I was a little confused at first, but after reading it carefully, it was really well written, but I still couldn't figure out where the main plot was.

The main plot has never been written. What do you want to do? It feels like it was forced together

Come on, this is much more fun than eating fast food.

There are so many inexplicable operations, it's very exciting to watch.

Why is this high-quality article not signed and free of charge? Can't understand. But the author's writing style is really good, I like it👍🌹🌹🌹

Mainly Yin escape: Pupil of the Moon Kuetsu Elimination Level Purple Rinnegan Eye: Yin+Five Release, Six Paths Sage Level Six Magatama Samsara Sharingan: Six Paths Yin+Five Release Blood Stained Snare Level Samsara Sharingan: Yin and Yang + Five Escapes, Skills: Infinite Tsukuyomi (extracting energy), Heaven's First Sphere Space Gao Tianyuan (Creating a Blessed Land/Plane) Mainly Yang Escape: Eye of the Sun Blood Successor Elimination Level Blue Reincarnation Eye: Yang + Five Escapes, Six Paths Sage Level Golden Reincarnation Eye with Six Diamond Petals: Six Paths of Yang + Five Escapes Blood Stained Snare Level Golden Reincarnation Eye: Yin and Yang + Five Escapes, Skills: Infinite Amaterasu (burn out matter), Kill Ash Bones together (erase all things), Brows: What and what eye (I don't know what the name is) Double Blood Successor Elimination Stage The prototype of the Pure Eye, Double Six Paths Immortal Level Period, Pure Eye Double Blood Successor Snare Level Period, the virtual and actual Pure Eye, the virtual creation, the actual destruction, the supreme eye, the eye of God in charge of creation and destruction. Kaguya also only has one Blood Successor Snare, and you have two, which should reach the power of the God of Otsutsuki, and this body also has the chakra training technique based on natural energy that you gave Konoha, which can perfectly coordinate and fuse the Otsutsuki lineage and the sacred tree lineage, and it has the strength to surpass the God of Otsutsuki. But there are divine positions in your book, so I'm not sure if it's possible. The eyes of cultivators are true illusory eyes

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Literary youth disease! Culture needs soil! The same is true for the system. Being divorced from reality is a literary youth

I found it from the library. Logically speaking, I am the fourth reader! Big boost for the author, Aoli! Please reply!

A lot of crap. I almost fell asleep while listening to the book.

Is this a Naruto fanfic? I feel like I'm selling dog meat to someone else.

This book is as uninteresting as the Chronicles of Queba, it's long and boring.

Selling dog meat on a sheep's head, but giving back Shen Nong's health-preserving scriptures? It's better to just name the art of health preservation.

... To be honest, if you have this skill, it's not as good as this one. When reading fan fiction, you usually look for interesting and certain logic. As long as the writing is up to standard, you can definitely write your own story. I've been confused after reading dozens of them, and now I don't quite understand what the main character's methods are, but the writing is really good, but he doesn't adapt to the climate.

How shameless! It's to my liking. The setting is well integrated with Naruto. Except for some logical flaws in some places, I don't care about other places. But what do you say? I like to read it. I was looking for a book in a certain pavilion to read. I thought it was good and wanted to support it with the original version. I didn't expect to comment like this. I saw Chapter 184. My current feeling is: the multi-line narrative is too long. Sometimes the protagonist does not appear after reading several chapters. You don't have to write about Demon Slayer: World of Demons at all. I guess the author himself wanted to make a guest appearance () but no matter what, I feel very proud. I don't have much experience and I can't give appropriate suggestions. The author must insist on a

Author, why haven't you updated for several days?