The Starry Sky Is Ferocious

I read part of it, but I really can't stand it anymore. I don't want the author to do his job for love, but he'd better do his job well. There are typos all over the place, the characters are written all over the place, and I can't read the sentences. This is no longer about writing ability, it's about attitude. On the one hand, I want to get good grades, but on the other hand, I can't write well. In terms of plot, it's more of a cool story, and the realms are not well defined. You can play at level 5 or level 7 at will. What is your strength? Just because you are the protagonist, you are not good at promoting the plot! I just like the subject matter of this book. It has a bit of a star-like influence, so I will talk about it. As for whether to adopt it or not, it doesn't matter. Typing is also very tiring!

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Come on! Although not many people have read it, and the author may not be able to say that he is motivated by love, he still has hope and thoughts after all. Great God and Platinum also started from Xiaobai. Having good grades is a good thing, but don't be discouraged if your grades are not ideal. As long as you write according to your own ideas, even if you can't become a god, when you are old, you will have a sense of satisfaction when you look at the books you wrote when you were young, the roads you have traveled, and the things you have done, and you will feel that your life is not in vain. Material satisfaction is important, but spiritual satisfaction is even more valuable! I hope the author will get better and better! Come on! ! !

The pace is so fast that people who watched it at the beginning were confused and had no idea what was going on.

It seems a bit confusing, and the overall coherence is not strong. Also, it feels like the big shot in it doesn't look like a big shot. He is making trouble at home. Is this what a big shot should do?

"Nangong Yiyun? Although you are a member of the Galaxy Star Council, you can't interfere with my Sirius affairs at will. My Sirius's things are naturally under the control of our Sirius Council." Zhu Rong threw the things in his hands to the ground angrily and looked at the sweet-looking person in the video communication who was known as the most beautiful member of the council. In the video communication, Nangong Yiyun was not angry when she heard this. Instead, she played with her nails, crossed her legs, and then painted a few nails on her slender and white hands with nail polish. After putting them down, she spoke slowly. "Don't think that your breakthrough to the stellar realm and becoming a Sirian member depends on your own efforts. Without the resources and funding provided by the council, do you think you can reach this position and this realm?" "Or do you think that you will not be able to do it without the council? Sirius Cantilever You can't suppress it after leaving? There are still Nebula of the Sirius tribe in the Sirius cantilever. Even if you are a small corona star, you are worthy." Just when the last word "you" came out, Nangong Yiyun patted the office chair, then stood up and walked to the communication video with her long white legs. "I know you are very uncomfortable. After all, your son has died, and now you have to take away some of your power. But this is not the reason for you to lose your temper with me, do you understand?" "As long as you agree to my request, our Nangong family will give you the resources to become the Red Pill Star, or even the Light Star, or the Photon Star, so that you and your little wife Xu can Yueying gained the ability to take revenge on that family. " "Do you understand? Mr. Zhu Rong, you are a sensible person. I believe you will make the right choice. After all, the galactic law does not stipulate that this cannot be done, right? " "Zhu Rong clenched his fist in anger, and then released his hand, feeling powerless and failed. "I will think about it first and then reply to you." Nangong Yiyun replied with a smile: "Then I will wait for Mr. Zhu Rong's call." After saying that, Nangong Yiyun closed the video communication, and the personal guard on the side was Wan of the clan. Generation Nangong Yi asked: "Elder Yiyun, aren't you afraid that he will report to the Galaxy Parliament?" "Why are you panicking?" Nangong Yiyun glanced at it and said calmly: "He is a smart man. Reporting to the Parliament will cause our family to lose a lot, but the Xia family will definitely suffer part of it. We gave away the rights and resources. Do you think he would do this if the Xia family killed his children? " "Besides, apart from those few forces in the council, the remaining families are more or less dependent on us and listen to us. He has offended the Xia family and wants to offend our Nangong family. How can he live if he offends half of the people?" "He is just showing us how to increase the stakes." On the other side, Xu Yueying appeared from the wall. Xu Yueying held a photo in her hand and looked at Zhu Rong: "It seems that she has seen through your acting skills." "It is already a very poor acting skill. If she can't see through it, why would she be a congressman? But if she sees through it, she will still raise the price appropriately. After all, this thing is originally a transaction. A transaction is used by both parties to bargain with each other on the price." Zhu Rong picked up the things and sat on the chair. Looking at the cute child in the photo frame on the table, Zhu Rong increased the strength of his hand and murmured: "Xia family, if we can't kill you, we can still bite off a piece of meat from you."

The author, please give me some personal opinions, maybe rewrite the plot of Star Lord or develop Dark Star; the author seems to be very passionate about the real-life planet battle, but I just felt very boring and even a little bored while watching it.

In fact, the author's world view and the overall plot of each plot are okay, but each plot filler is a bit uncomfortable to watch, incomplete and jerky, and the character interaction and plot development are not strong enough. I also liked the last book, but the middle and later stages went by like a running account.

To be honest, it's really frustrating to watch.

Is it fierce enough? Is it ferocious enough?

Except for the setting, there is nothing interesting about it. Even though it has written more than 800 chapters, there is actually nothing interesting about it. I don't recommend you waste time and energy. The time you spend reading it is better to find a new book with 300,000 words.

I've read fifty or sixty of them, but I can't figure out what I want to write, what I'm pursuing, the main plot hasn't been published for so long, I'm an old author, just sit down.

Add some finess

I guess it's just a matter of getting so many good reviews. The story is mediocre, and the latest plot has a slight tendency to abuse the protagonist. It's food, right?

The setting of this book is very good but the writing feels useless The writing is very messy and there is nothing exciting so it cannot be popular

Maybe it's because I didn't express it clearly before. Let me say it again. The author will downplay and change the sister, but the sister will not die. The existence of the younger sister is only to set off the protagonist's ability and the change from young master to pillar. There may be temporary discomfort, which can be skipped and does not affect the consumption.

Really well written! I've given you seven monthly passes.

I don't know why, the world view is obviously very good, but it doesn't make me feel happy at all.

My Cao, Yeyueluo is dead? ! Suddenly it was a bit unacceptable.

"It's time to let it go. You don't owe him anything anymore." "If friendship is the same as repaying a debt, then why is there any need for this friendship to exist?" "Hey." An old voice came from the pavilion, and an old man in black was holding a black chess piece, hovering in the air. If you ignore the steaming tea in the teacup opposite the old man, the old man seems to be practicing chess alone. That sigh was very long and clear, and the sigh echoed in the valley until the sound of hey could no longer be heard. "Why bother? This is almost a certain death situation. From the time you helped the boy from the Xu family escape, you have offended almost everyone in the world. You can't get over this hurdle, no matter what your intentions are. If you want to avenge him, they will also think that you are helping the boy from the Xu family." The old man slowly dropped the black chess pieces in his hand. In an instant, only a few of the white chess pieces were swallowed up, and the rest were annihilated in an instant. "This is almost a dead end, why are you still going. I only have you as an old friend." The old man was still talking, but no one answered him. "Why do you all put your lives at the expense of friendship! Why do you go to help each and every one of you when you hear someone is in trouble!" The old man lifted the chessboard and stood up. The voice roared, and the mountains and forests also roared. "Why? Why? Isn't my life my life?" After shouting in an inhuman voice, the old man calmed down. He didn't understand their actions, but they understood him. "In that case, let me go crazy with you. I have always cherished my life and dare not fight for anything. If I am going to die, I will accompany you once." The heat of the tea was still steaming, but the two people playing chess under the pavilion were gone. Only the overturned chessboard, scattered chess pieces, and the two cups of tea were left. After the two people left, the chess pieces, tea, chessboard, seats, and pavilions gradually disappeared. I don't know if it was to cover up the traces or something. In the huge Ye family mansion, the old man in black was at the top, looking up at the stars. "The fourth star district is a place where ancient times and technology exist side by side. I don't know what it means that I am still a star-level practitioner in my life." Then, a bright light appeared in the old man's eyes. "The Yangshen Realm is one step away from Nebula. If I can gain understanding after this life-and-death crisis, and then put my family background on top of it. I may not be able to become Nebula! Leave the fourth star district and see the mysteries of other star districts." The old man looked at it, turned into a stream of light, flew into the starry sky, and ran to another planet, at the location where he knew something was going to happen. Time passed by for a few days. In a small galaxy in this star region, two Yang gods started fighting brazenly. One side was followed by a few people, and the other side was followed by a group of battleships. Battleships were destroyed one after another in the aftermath of the battle in the Yangshen Realm. Several people turned into streams of light and rushed into the battleship group. They wanted to blow up these battleships, but they were stopped by others. "Brother Bai, it seems that you are not having a good time." The old man in black made a voice. He who was originally unnoticed now attracted the attention of countless people. A large number of battleships turned their heads and pointed their guns at him. Ye Han didn't care at all, turning into a stream of light and turning more than a dozen battleships into cosmic garbage with lightning speed. Several Storm Stars and a Sun God Star ran out from the battleship. "Ye Han, I really didn't expect you to take action." "Ye Han!" Ye Han didn't say a word and took action brazenly. Countless battleship wreckage gathered and turned into iron balls and threw them at the battleship group. The Yang Shenxing shook his head and rushed forward. After fighting for a long time, dozens of ore planets died. In a special battleship, a Yang God covered his empty shoulders with his remaining hand, looked into space, and murmured: "It's finally over."

The setting is very good, but it feels like it really lacks a lot of plot, and what can I say about many characters? They are not written in an impressive way, and there are no characters that make people have emotional ups and downs.

Author, although you have to go to work and are a little busy three to four times a day, please pay attention when writing and make fewer typos. Well, you can write less, for example, one chapter less in two days

I am a prostitute, but I personally think that the world view, scene, setting, race, logic, writing style, etc. Of this book in the early and middle period are all very good and quite unforgettable. The time and space in the later period became wild and unconstrained, and then I stopped reading it. I don't think the same world view and the same background are popular nowadays to tell stories in different times, etc. How about restarting this background and writing about it?

According to the author's current situation, there is an 80% chance that the new book will be a eunuch😏

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This typo is just for everyone to find fault with!

Wasted, at least a thousand chapters, but this is what I wrote after becoming a god

What about the new book? Why hasn't it been sent out yet?

I've read your book, now I have 2! When will the new book be released?