The Fox Demon in Naruto

Do students still write books? Come on for your hobbies!

(Personal feeling, don't criticize if you don't like it) After reading the first few chapters, I felt it was a bit flawed, there were too many dialogues, and it was a bit confusing. Then there was a lack of logic. In the episode of fighting Mizuki, how could the seal scroll show you everything in the first place? , It must have been sealed, leaving only the ninjutsu for you to learn, (please correct it if there are any mistakes) Then there is the plot of transforming into a fox demon. Don't forget that the third generation watched and transformed under his nose, and according to the protagonist's initial transformation, The character shown in people's eyes will exclude the transformation technique. Then the protagonist will definitely be considered as an impostor pretending to be Naruko. According to the vigilant personality of the ninja, you will be interrogated directly instead of leaving it alone It is a bit too poisonous. If it is an invincible text If so, you still need to be logical. You can read more novels written by others to learn and observe. I feel that some of the plots come too suddenly and are a bit poisonous. I haven't finished reading them, so I can only speak a little. Finally, come on, author, and I wish you can write a good novel.