Cultivation of Immortality Begins with Labor Reform

The writing is quite personal! Collected! Take your time and watch! Come on update! Welcome to visit us and give us advice!

Brother, the story is very comfortable. I learned it.

Thanks to the unknown big guy for investing 20 people, my obsessive-compulsive disorder is much better 🙏

Although the code is slow, I will consume my life.

There are two updates today, and one more, which will be delivered in half an hour 🤓

After waiting for most of the day, the author's egg turned black and turned into a preserved egg 😓

The story is good and the writing is fluent, but some areas need more Polishing efforts💪

Hey, this Xianxia type has a strong atmosphere, but I would like to give you a suggestion, that 0.1Cm can be replaced by a unit related to Xianxia. After all, I saw cm as a unit in Xianxia articles. Haha~ Go, go, go! Looking forward to a return visit

In the first chapter, Lin Zang's name suddenly appears, which feels a bit abrupt. Does it need some foreshadowing? In Chapter 2, Lin Mo, Mo Li, and Mo Mo are sometimes the same person? I remember shouting the title three times. At the beginning of the second chapter, it talks about the Immortal Immortal giving a lecture. When he introduces the Taoist temple in the middle, there are only the temple leader, deputy temple leader and handyman. Why is this immortal gone? The atmosphere of cultivating immortality is very strong, and the description of the scene is also good, but the appearance of the cake is a bit abrupt Personally, don't criticize it if you don't like it!

Thank you for your recommendation and support! Working hard on coding, the story of the prisoner in the first volume is almost over, and the subsequent plot will be even more exciting 🌹

Happy Goddess Day to all the nvshu fans out there 🤓