Xiaxinhaohao

I'm just here to gain experience😏

Come on, you must keep writing.

You have written a lot, come on

The third golden chapter seems to be okay, but needs improvement. Chapter 1, Enlightenment Field, Enlightenment is about convoluted words, like reciting passwords. Chapter 2: My parents are not reluctant to leave my parents to cultivate immortality, so I have to think carefully about it. There is also that person who comes from the same village. The people in the village are simple and honest. People who have played together since childhood suddenly look down on others, which is impossible. Character is reflected from an early age. Or it could be written that he loves to bully people in the village. It's best to change the protagonist's name, it's really too tacky, or give him a new name from the master later.