The First Fairy of American Comics

There is no death of parents in this book, and the protagonist is not a pretentious person. The plot development is very logical. I think it is very interesting. Why are so many people's words so one-sided? I can't help but want to say something for the author. Complaints are complaints. The premise is that you have read this book carefully.

Knowing that there is a relative named Ip Man, what is the probability that the child will be given this name plus the word ""? And as soon as the name came out, I felt that this book was in line with Long Aotian's novels 😒

The writing is okay, the logic is smooth, but it's a bit too holy. It doesn't have the calm feeling of a monk, and it's more awkward to have to take part in everything to advance the plot. It feels like the protagonist has to show up for everything for no reason.

What did the author say when he wrote about the First Emperor? It was not very well written. Most of the time, the First Emperor would not call himself Zhao Zheng. Zhao was the name he was in Zhao when the Qin army was besieging Handan and his mother's family was trying to please the Zhao royal family. However, Qin and Zhao fought so many battles and even the Battle of Changping. We can't expect the First Emperor to be very good when he was young. Zhao Zheng was actually a shameful name for the First Emperor himself.

After reading a few chapters, I still feel that something is wrong and I can't explain why, so please give it a try, author! Flash first out of respect.

I feel that many authors who write monastic novels end up writing about prehistoric times. I don't think it's strange for other authors, but this author makes me feel a little strange. First of all, it can be seen from the article that the author has checked the information. Since he has checked the information, he should know that there is a big difference between the ancient world and the Dao Zang Myth. In terms of knowledge, philosophy and combat power, the Great Unknown is not as good as the Dao Zang Myth. Although the Dao Zang Myth is not suitable for writing plots, it can be said to be excellent as a background board. There are many things in the underworld religion in the prehistoric era. After all, the prehistoric era comes from the folklore of the Journey to the West. All three have places of underworld religion. At the beginning of the prehistoric period, Pangu had already blackened the three pure states as soon as he transformed them into qi. The leader of Tongtian also It was Lingbao Tianzun who was hacked, and Hongjun, the master of Sanqing, was hacked by Taoism. Although the high-ranking official Honghuang would not write about the thick black Laozi villain Yuanshi Tianzun, there are still too many such writings about Honghuang, and the influence is too wide and it is still equivalent to the underworld Taoism. Since the author is more familiar with Taoism, he should know this, why he still writes about the Great Desolate World? I don't understand. After all, this novel is just a background board for the present. Since it is a background board, isn't the level of Taoist mythology much higher than that of The Great Desolate World? The Sanqing takes action to save the worlds above the wireless multiverse through enlightenment, and the lives of the people in these worlds are as if they are in heaven. What is conveyed in Daozang mythology is also the beautiful side, and the immortals in Daozang world are extremely powerful. There are infinite infinite multiverses infested by demon kings. There are only a few novels on the Internet that can compare with this kind of existence. The immortals in Daozang mythology are instantly comparable, so I don't understand why most Taoist texts have to focus on the prehistoric times.

It's a bit pretty, even prettier than the girl at Station B.

I don't want a heroine! Even if there are, don't ask for foreign ones! And don't let Tingting go! ! !

To be honest, I had high expectations for this book at the beginning, but I still skipped some parts. Personally, I feel that it is best for American comic books not to have anything to do with the country. , It should not be very easy to write later, and then it is a bit too strong to copy the settings of American comics. Since the idea of ​​​​Xian has been added, it is not necessary to copy the settings of American comics, or Marvel, the author can add a new origin for the fairy. Personally, I feel like the setting is a bit nondescript. Secondly, there are a lot of places where the protagonist tries to show off. The supporting characters and villains are slightly silly. In fact, I personally feel that the writing style of this book is quite good. The overall arrangement of the plot is okay, but the details are a bit rough. It's still okay to watch while jumping. It seems like I said a bit too much. In fact, these poisonous places may only be poisonous to me now. Probably seeing too much. For me a few years ago, this book was actually quite good. Forehead. . . . . Okay, that's all for now. Come on.

I think what he said is quite good,

I suddenly thought of a sentence, Da Luo was not born in the prehistoric times, Da Luo was born in the prehistoric times.

It suddenly occurred to me that if I transitioned to the Marvel world, I wonder if it would be a pure Marvel world or a fusion world with the Marvel world as the main body. My personal suggestion is that since it is a fantasy fairy tale, I feel that a fusion world with Marvel as the main body is better. In addition, our mythology is not the myth of the Great Desolate Sky or the Court, but something like Liaozhai. Otherwise, the pure Marvel world will feel a bit sorry for the early foreshadowing. My personal suggestion is that the author can consider it.

I would like to say a few small questions The first one is that the protagonist competes with Ip Man at the beginning. I originally thought that the author wanted to write about Xiaolin Boy or New Oolong Yuan, but it didn't feel right later. I don't know if the author has children at home, or children of relatives. Generally speaking, children aged five or six are only more than one meter tall, and it is difficult to get into bed. No matter how well developed they are, they cannot exceed this limit, right? As a result, it can hit an adult in the chest, that's true. . .                                              There is a martial arts competition with Ip Man and Uncle Jiu. Fighting in the air is okay, but fighting with martial arts may be a bit strenuous, right? One step for an adult is two or three steps longer than that of a child. After that, there are advantages such as long arms, long legs, and height. The protagonist still learns hard skills. Although the strength is similar, it is impossible to compete with adults in terms of physical condition, right? Even in movies, they fight with the help of props and weapons or by moving around. If nothing else, just punching, adults only need to hit the chest, and children can't touch their torsos even if they reach out to death In the end, I understand that the author wants to give the protagonist enough freedom and as much autonomy as possible, but a child, especially a five-year-old child with parents around him, can fight for it The freedom you have is definitely limited, unless the parents have no affection or love for their children. After all, age is an issue. I am not talking about calling brothers and sisters, talking about friendships, etc., But traveling, doing things, and behavior. Even if the parents know how powerful and smart the child is and do not put restrictions on him, they will still let adults follow them or have others assist them out of love and care.

Thank you book friends for your continued companionship and support. This book will not disappoint you! 😊

The author writes well. The author seems to like Mr. Sun very much? I have a little suggestion. I think it's great to popularize the original history to everyone, but you should try not to mention things that the country does not advocate many times at the end, because there is a lot of ambiguity and it will make people think that you are expressing your dissatisfaction with national policies. The country has always respected him, and the Sun Yat-sen Mausoleum in Nanjing has always been well maintained. There are often commemorative activities, but there are strict controls on those who criticize Chiang Kai-shek and the Democratic Party. Mr. Sun was a great man who ended the feudal monarchy. It's not that everyone doesn't like him, but Mr. Sun failed to realize many of his ideals due to the limitations of the times and the compromise nature of the bourgeoisie at that time. Another great teacher's light was too bright, so I personally think Mr. Sun Yat-sen is really respectable and admirable.

Shouldn't I call him Junior Brother? It's written like a monologue! The characters are not vivid!

The free chapter is okay at the beginning, but the popular science and introduction later, isn't the word "water" too exaggerated? Now let's look at the first bill, so I hurriedly come over to talk about it. I hope I won't introduce it later. Half of the chapter is introduced, which is outrageous. I really like this novel 🙏🙏