Rhapsody of the God of Death

He bullies the weak and fears the strong, cheats and kidnaps. The more I look at the character of the protagonist, the more rubbish I feel. I have no expectations for the development of this protagonist. Goodbye.

Vomited, this is the God of Death, Hueco Mundo is such a hopeless place, and Hueco Mundo is such a desperate creature, so you wrote it funny

When characters from other works appear in the work, and the specific origins are not explained clearly, and many settings that are actually unnecessary are used, the book has lost its appeal for readers who want to read an excellent Bleach fanfic...

I think the final evolution of Xu is to find the missing heart to complete himself and make himself a whole person.

Personally, it doesn't look good.

Be a good writer, once the anime of the Thousand Year Blood War of Death comes out, there will be no shortage of traffic for this novel

Here is some information for the author. Aizen's swastika appears in an officially authorized Bleach game called Feng Shui Binzhi. Its ability is that Aizen transforms his spirit into a form similar to wind and water and integrates it into the environment. As long as the opponent enters the space eroded by Aizen, his five senses will be dominated. In other words, his swastika made up for the shortcomings of the original swastika that he needed to be seen to be hypnotized, and it also increased the range of its effect.

Take off directly😏

Attracted by the God of Death, I feel pretty good so far, and the author is also very thoughtful in referencing works other than comics.

You can write about merging the souls of time-travelers, but then kill the time-travelers to death. Once many people see that the protagonist is an aboriginal, they are unwilling to watch themselves, mainly because they have no sense of immersion. This will lose some of the audience

A big taboo in fan fiction, when it comes to paid chapters, write the original work.

Scorpion

Brother, did you make a mistake? It doesn't matter if it's not on the shelves, after all, I didn't pay for it! Just water! At most I took a quick look and found that it was in the water, and it only took a few days. But you are on the shelves! After one or two chapters of fast-forwarding the plot of the original novel, I tolerated it. But count how many chapters are there? Co-author I paid you to read the original work, right? To be fair, I haven't read pirated copies since I graduated from high school and had enough money, but this way of writing forces me to confirm if you have the original before subscribing?

Ichigo: I want to destroy Soul Society

At first, I thought it was quite interesting, but the more I watched, the less interesting it became. In fact, the protagonist should use the power of Death and Hollow to become one, instead of using the power of a certain Death God to become a certain Death.

Sure enough, when writing about the God of Death, both of them are old eunuchs. Basically, they are extremely exciting in the early stage and then the inspiration runs out, and there is no more. They all have one characteristic: they suddenly stop updating for no reason, just once or twice at first, and then they stop updating naturally.

Finally, there is a Bleach fanfic with Kyon as the main character. In the Bleach, there is no high-end combat power. The Bleach has the captain, the Zero Division, and top combat power like Aizen. The Quincy has the friend Habach, and Hueco Mundo is the most miserable.

I just started reading a few chapters, and I'm a little confused. The main reason is that people who eat time travel can gain memories and this and this, and that they have wisdom in the Kilian stage and have been there for decades. This and this. I remember that low-level Hollows only have the desire to eat and the instinct of the body, and only those who reach Aqiukas will have wisdom and some memories. It's okay if you write like this without thinking about it. After watching the anime, I feel like I'm being arrogant.

As a virtual reality, there is a heroine, and the heroine is not Nelu or Harribel. This aesthetic is destined to be full of flaws, what else can there be to watch.

Damn it, a book that was very popular at the time has gone cold as time goes by??? What happened?

I felt like a good book, but when I looked back I found that this book was too good for me...

Among the characters, Kurosaki Masaki's race is Kyon? After the death of the Quincy, the soul will not go to Soul Society, nor will it turn into Hollow and go to Hueco Mundo. The soul will only return to Yhwach and become part of his power. The so-called sanctification is actually Yhwach's initiative to let the Quincy's soul return. There is also a setting about the relationship between the Quincy and the Hollow. The power of the Hollow will cause the Quincy's soul to collapse and lead to self-destruction.

Definition of virtual:

It's a really good book😍

Author, please keep writing, it's really not bad

It's been three months since I stopped updating, and I'm done with TJ!

The protagonist here seems to want to open a training school in Hueco Mundo, and also wants Xu to learn the ghost way. Are you sure this isn't nonsense? What if the power systems are different? The protagonist here comes up with every thought, he is really talented. And about the heroine, the author also has a good eye for choosing the heroine.

Sure enough, the novel has no main plot and focus, and the author himself can't keep going.

Damn it, I feel like I haven't read it in a long time, and it's only less than 40 chapters, and I'm still dying?

The writing is too poor and the plot is very torn. I don't understand where the author got the confidence to start V.