The Younger Brother of the Hyuga Family

Reading it is like reading a history book, all the characters are blurred, the plot is passed by in one stroke, and the protagonist only has the beginning and the end of what he does. The entry point is good, but there are no fighting details, no training details, no growth details, no emotional details, and the overall look is very pale. It is recommended that the author revise it to flesh out the characters.

After reading fan fiction for so many years, I have one thought! The Chinese are simply the source of evil and are absolutely self-interested. In order to survive, that is called doing anything. Almost every Chinese time travel represents the destruction of a family. In my opinion, the most important thing in a story is realism. However, there are few novels that are not like games. They write bug-like protagonists while talking about the cruelty of reality and the darkness of the world like powerless ordinary people. Japanese comics are simply extremes. One blends into the darkness and the other resists the darkness.

There is no sense of substitution and it feels very dry.

Emmmm There are many poisonous points, such as revealing the reincarnation eye, reincarnation eye, pure eye, and the Byakugan of the Otsutsuki clan to Orochimaru, and also wanted Orochimaru to clone his own Byakugan...

Look at the author's name, then look at the comment section, I won't say any more

The pace is a bit fast. If you don't have unlimited streaming, I guess this stupid book won't have more than 150 chapters

Do you still need to think about cleansing your eyes? Immortal body or whirlpool bloodline + white eyes