Working as a Soldier at the Border

It's so hard to write! ! Being played around by the enemy, he just made a few noises and was done without taking action! ! So many people around me have died, and my relatives almost died too! ! Still haven't changed! ! Really speechless

How much did you charge for this book to be considered a high-quality product? Or is it the author's trumpet? I wouldn't say it's poorly written, but it's excellent? Are high-quality goods so worthless?

There is a heroine! It actually said there was no heroine, which made me read so many books!

If you don't have a certain level of military skills, I suggest you not describe any surprise attacks or strategies. It would be embarrassing to read. Moreover, when there is not much disparity in military strength, the battle on the frontal battlefield is never about who has more tricks, but who makes fewer mistakes. Commanders who like to make tricks almost never end well. The Gaolianghe Chariot God, the Military Formation Master, and the Terrain Destroyer have all been dead for more than a thousand years, and they are still being pulled out and ridiculed every day.

Is this Beihuang a winery? Why do spies always appear?

After more than 30 chapters, I really can't stand it. The author's idea is still readable after it's written, but the poison lies in not writing it well. The first point is the problem of spies. The protagonist has been able to communicate with all animals for so long, but he can't solve the problem of spies. There are also problems with the protagonist's thinking. The protagonist written by the author is like playing a game to pass through levels. He is still careless. He solves the levels when encountering them and never thinks about the problems in advance. When he saves people in the front, he can shoot the arrows flying in the air, but when he shoots people in the back, he misses twice. The plot is quite awkward and I can't watch it.

Where is Gou? I saw the protagonist showing off!

I'm speechless. I don't have the writing skills to set up suspense on purpose. I always dig holes and forget to fill them! For example, in the very beginning, Pig's Feet heard the horse say that there was something wrong with the grass he was eating. Forget it, it's useless to say so much. Anyway, it's better than not being able to write it myself.

At first glance, it's okay, but after watching it too much, it feels weird. There's always a feeling that the conflict is too awkward and abrupt.

It looks uncomfortable when the protagonist hides his identity 😥

As the old saying goes, every line is like a mountain. I don't believe it. There are all memes in the world. It's just that China doesn't know about Japan, and Japan doesn't know about Germany. People in a country still know each other's jokes about their own people. Until, I read this book. I can't get the idea, but I still look at two people with one head. For people like me who don't watch live broadcasts or play Dota, LoL, StarCraft, World of Warcraft and many other games, I have no idea what the author is talking about at the beginning 🤫

Wrong author introduction? ? ? Shouldn't the original sentence be: "Wen can bring peace to the world with his pen, but military can use his horse to settle the world"? Forgive me, I haven't read the book, I just read the introduction and commented on it.

Traveling through time without rebellion, using an electric drill as a chrysanthemum! What's more, with the golden finger, unifying the world is just a novice village, and conquering the universe and the infinite universe is just the beginning!

Do you have any other views on "Gou"? What I see is the waste.

There are so many strong men who directly kill the coach. What the hell?

Don't send VIP messages if there is no content. Repeat a piece of content N times. What's going on?

The first chapter is okay, the subject matter is also good, save it first and read it to gain weight.

No wonder there aren't many comments, it's all conspiracies. And it was a conspiracy that was crushed by the barbarians.

Written by a high school student, the writing is okay, but the plot is terrible.

When I saw the amazing effects of Juyuan Dan, I felt that the author knew how to play it. After I took it, I only played with a gun and said no, and then I saw that I read and practice shooting every day. There is a spy in the family who has learned animal language and communicates with horses, thinking that he will find the spy. Then the head of the family asked the military advisor to come back and die directly on the road, or the eighth level of innateness, thinking that the plot required it, after all, the pig's feet should show off their power after the military advisor died. After getting married, he turned into a pig's trotter and was roughly five levels of innate ability to single-handedly kill through the enemy formation and kill a king?

After reading the title of the book, I felt that it changed. It started with a kind of border, and I felt that it was beyond the development of the Three Kingdoms. The skills, mounts, and weapons were almost Zhao Yun's template. It was very interesting to read After changing the map and arriving in the imperial capital, the plot began to make people feel... I started writing a letter home, and when the Necromancer came out and I thought about it, and then Cyclonus One came out to destroy the monsters that came out of the blood pool, I was very helpless I feel that this book has already collapsed. Of course, some people may like it, so I don't mind reading it.

When I recommended it, I thought it was because the background introduction of the website was written backwards, but I didn't expect that when I clicked in, it was actually written backwards.

I can feel that you put a lot of effort into writing this novel, and at least it has an outline. I looked at it, but sometimes the writing is a little immature. I can see it, but I can't point it out, because I am better than you, so I say go for it. If you can write two or three novels, and your writing improves, you will definitely become an excellent author.

It's okay, it just depends on how the author handles the hidden identity of the protagonist.

What does a soldier need so much reward for?

I thought it was something happening behind the scenes, but then it turned into a manifestation in front of people.

I understand a little bit, I understand everything. I know how to order everything, but I'm not good at it. So embarrassing. If I don't know how to make clever calculations, I can choose Lu Bu, but I don't have the strength or the intelligence. What do you think?

Why don't I have a recommendation ticket, only a monthly ticket?

This book has the potential to be a high-quality product, keep it up!