Head Coach on the Field

Delete that Su Yuqing thing. The protagonist is now physically American, and it would only be embarrassing to have anything to do with China. Not much else to say, in 1999 the Yugoslav Embassy was bombed. As a public figure friendly to China, what did you do? It is better to let the Chinese gods disappear. Anyway, as long as you don't participate in the World Championships or the Olympics, you basically won't have anything to do with China. Yao Ming won't take the initiative to make friends with you, and with the background of the protagonist, he doesn't need to go to China to cheat money.

After more than 200 chapters, I couldn't understand it at all. The back and forth between the system space and the real space was mind-numbing. Is it necessary to make the system's presence so excessive, or is it forced to add drama? Let's just write quietly and occasionally bring in two little surprises, which is also very good. What I don't understand the most is that every basketball book cannot do without Yao Ming. Is he really better in statistics or skills? Most of us viewers can only say that we respect him! Because he is the pioneer for our country to enter the NBA, but it does not have to be him. To be honest, there are many people who are better than him. There are many Hall of Famers who are just famous but not a symbol of strength. There are also many who are better than him and have not entered the Hall of Fame. Not all basketball novels have to have him. He is still licked hard. Is it necessary to tell his importance? ? ? ? Please review the author and correct what I said if it is correct. If it is not correct, just treat it as if I didn't say it! ! ! ! ! ! Thank you A reader who likes basketball novels

Isn't Cole just an open three-point shooter? What's so good about him?

I want to be the number one black fan, the blackest kind

Why did you set the protagonist to be a foreigner? Is the audience for the international version?

After signing the contract, it will be slower. Starting from the recommendation position before it is put on the shelves, it will not be given after 200,000 words. My personal suggestion is to save more manuscripts, ask the editor for the contact information of other authors and recommend chapters, and by the way, make the layout of the first few chapters more comfortable.

What kind of messy writing is this? Isn't it okay to just play ball?

Why are you talking about the Celtics? What does it have to do with the plot? It makes me wonder

Come on, you are already very good as a newcomer. You can improve if you write more.

The creativity is very good, which is why I support watching it. But after watching the card shoot three-pointers for O'Neal 😅😅😅, I really can't stand it anymore. Backed off.

With the 17th pick, Doug Christie, 3D small forward, was also on the All-Defensive Team in 2003. The 41st pick in the second round, PJ Brown, retired from the Celtics in 2006 and was also on the All-Defensive Team. Are these two missing? He doesn't steal the ball either, and it doesn't affect the selection of other stars.

Save some manuscripts, stabilize the update time as soon as possible, and then find a few more chapters to recommend. Qidian's recommendation system seems to have changed now, and it's difficult to gain exposure without actively looking for resources.

I feel that the creativity is good. Long Aotian battles the God of Basketball in the NBA, but there are too many inexplicable plots. A woman appears out of nowhere, and she is a genius.

It's hard to update every day and in the middle of the night

A system that is of no use and always loves to steal the show.

If you don't have feelings, just write about it. Just be as straightforward as those players in reality, just trading money and meat! Nowadays, many people don't know how to write about emotions and insist on writing.

Update every day and midnight? Isn't it good to update in the afternoon😒😒😒

The core internal and external play style of the protagonist + the Sharks is clearly stated. Then the No. 1 Pick is traded away, and two lottery picks are exchanged for Alan Houston and Vin Baker. Or the rookies can be eliminated and the reinforcements can be used immediately.

The writing is good but what can I say, the updates are a bit slow.

I couldn't stand it anymore after reading chapter 20. If the author doesn't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. I felt like I was sitting on pins and needles and had a lump in my throat. It's awkward to write it down.

Let me go to the author, do you dare to write more nonsense? In the front, the organization is A minus the physical attribute, which is a minus. When it comes to the back, it becomes b and b minus.

Brother, it looks weird without the chapter name. If you don't know what to start with, just write a few words. Nothing looks too uncomfortable

One thing to say, this introduction makes people wonder if anyone would actually click on it and read it?

Who knows how much rookie O'Neal weighs? The author gives 147.5 Kilograms. Is it that heavy?

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The author needs to pay attention to rest these days when updating at night. When writing, you need to understand the balance between work and rest. For example, you can update at 11 o'clock and at 5 o'clock. Moreover, the plot of this book is slow and the protagonist is a foreigner. The readership is a bit niche due to the subject matter. Can you write something about running a training camp in China or investing in domestic sports brands (you know, I love you, China.) To trick readers into it first 🤫