The Little Fisherman Who Scours the Tides

You update at least twice a day, right? Books with the theme of traveling to the sea are basically extinct, because the follow-up is too difficult to attract people. I hope you can have a complete outline and main line. Special reminder: Don't rush to develop the emotional line. People who read your book will not be interested in the emotional line. The most important thing for a new author is to tell a good story. . .

No wonder no one reads it. You keep journals and diaries all day long. Even though he is so good, he still tries his best to improve his abilities and still works on the assembly line all day long. You work in a factory and you have to write down even when you poop or rub your butt, right? This is the starting point. You have written more than a hundred chapters of "Assembly Line" and you are still speechless. The protagonist knows that eating seafood can increase vitality and ability and does not want to try his best to improve it. Yet he still has nothing to do with the room every day, so he just eats whatever he wants. He is really speechless.

I just like novels with the theme of chasing the sea. I hope you don't go astray. I will always support you! Come on, come on, come on

The biggest problem with this book is that the writing is a bit childish and full of nonsense.

You make videos and sign a contract with a platform, why do you want to be an internet celebrity? What a drama at this moment. Maybe it's because I don't like watching online anchors very much.

Normal people who have a golden finger would just make a fortune in silence, but the protagonist did the opposite and brought two dispensable classmates to make a fortune together. He didn't forget the benefits. The two classmates were more filial to their classmates than their parents. They wanted to be Internet celebrities, but the account was not their own. Because they didn't know how to edit videos, they asked two classmates who also knew nothing to become a monk. They taught themselves how to edit and then posted the video to share 30% of the profits. It would be a pity for the protagonist not to become a virgin.

How can I put it this way? This book is obviously a piece of writing. There are too many character dialogues and dispensable ideas, which make the main story line pale and weak. Chapter by chapter is like chewing wax, bland and tasteless. Occasionally, there is a little bit of passion, but it is drowned by a bunch of nonsense!

Giving two of them 30% is a bit much, right? They didn't contribute any money. Even if Long Xiangxiang paid more than 1 million, it would still be 30%, and if Jinxiu Lobster cost more than 300,000, it would still be 30%.

It's live broadcast. I'm sick of watching it. Can you come up with something new? Nowadays, there are too many live broadcasts of routines such as going to sea, surviving in the wild, and video game competitions. The content of the live broadcasts expressed in words is not satisfactory. It is already aesthetic fatigue!

After reading a hundred chapters and being unable to stand it any longer, the heroine came out. I just want to see how you catch the sea, how you catch fish, how you use your plug-in to catch more fish, and catch bigger fish. What do you do? Wet dream just after meeting? Are you a junior high school student? These are college graduates in their twenties. Why don't you say how many? Isn't it normal to study hundreds of books? As for that?