King of Liehai: Challenge the Strong Starting from Meteor Street

I read more than a dozen chapters and couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist's character setting may not be to my liking. Every time I see the name of the protagonist, I always think of One Piece. The protagonist is a person who devotes himself to martial arts. The author previously wrote that he is a bit naive and his character is relatively great. After all, he is dedicated to martial arts to that extent. When the protagonist meets Chrollo for the first time, Chrollo feels that the protagonist is bright and like a saint. First of all, let me say that this kind of saint setting is difficult to write, and it will easily collapse if you are not careful. Later, when the protagonist kills the leader of the circus for himself, it feels a bit broken. Even if the leader takes action first, the protagonist still has his own selfish motives for killing him. This is undeniable. From here on, it is somewhat contrary to the character of the protagonist set earlier. In order to revitalize martial arts in his previous life, the protagonist was willing to be a fool and became the modern incarnation of martial arts. Such a person has no selfish desires. All actions are for the revitalization of martial arts, and this action must conform to the justice in martial arts. The protagonist has been like this for so many years, but in the end, his personality changed drastically when he was reincarnated. In order to be with his sister, he went to rob and kill others. Although the others were not innocent, it was not a just act after all. Also, when competing with others, you always talk about Chinese martial arts, which feels fake and empty. You have not done a good job in shaping the protagonist, and it is impossible to replace the protagonist to a point where he can represent Chinese martial arts. Moreover, the main character is too weak, and he competes with a group of minions. In the end, he even said something like letting others experience Chinese martial arts. It feels like the level of martial arts has dropped drastically in an instant. Although I understand that this is not as good as the ability to read, but he still has the superb skills of beating enemies, which makes people's blood boil. The martial arts written by the author only reminded me of a street gangster, you punch me, I will hit you back at this low level. In order to develop the plot, the author wanted the protagonist to stay in the troupe. As a result, the character setting did not match the troupe at all, and it also did not match the personalities of most of the characters in Full-Time. Only Xiaojie, the more important character in Full-Time, was naive, and the rest of the characters had some darkness. I don't believe that the protagonist you wrote would be someone who would devote himself to martial arts and would turn a blind eye to the indiscriminate killing of innocent people around him. I originally wanted to support the author, but after reading some of them I just couldn't stand it anymore. I felt like it was poisoning me, so I just left after writing a review. [😅

This book is mainly based on the setting of the full-time hunter world. The fighting aspect will refer to the settings of more blades, and there will be some intrusion of JoJo characters. The manuscript is now at chapter 30. I will reply to chapters discussing the plot and book reviews. Normally, reviews will not be deleted.

I feel like everyone is not familiar with King of the Sea, let me give you a brief introduction. King of the Sea is a character from the Japanese fighting comic Saba. He is one of the protagonist members. The prototype is Bruce Lee. King of the Sea is a title obtained by reaching a certain level of martial arts. King Liehai studied martial arts at Bailin Temple since he was a child. He is a martial arts wizard who has integrated 5,000 years of Chinese martial arts at a very young age. He is a master of Chinese martial arts. In terms of performance, I mostly read comics or anime. The strength is between T1 and T2 in the original work. Under the guidance of Guo Haihuang, who is on the skill ceiling, he has learned perfect attenuation. Like feathers in the air, ordinary attacks cannot hurt him no matter how strong they are. In the fourth Blade Tooth Path, he first lost a leg in the battle with Peak who was hunting the Tyrannosaurus Rex at the ceiling of power. Later, he fought with the resurrected Miyamoto Musashi and died in a fatal battle with Qiu Ren. In terms of strength, in terms of martial arts alone, I think Lie Haiwang is not even inferior to President Netero. The perfect dead force can be regarded as a low-end martial arts version of vector control. And according to the setting of the protagonist group getting stronger as they fight, Retsukai King should have surpassed himself again after fighting Musashi. In terms of martial arts strength alone, I personally think it should be around a one-star hunter. In terms of personality, Lie is a martial arts fanatic who basically doesn't care about anything else except martial arts, friends and opponents. He does not shy away from murder and breaking the law. He once participated in underground arenas to prove his strength in martial arts and sneaked into a US military base to satisfy his curiosity. He is very generous to those he recognizes, saving his mortal enemy Duo Er and detoxifying the poisoned Saber Fang. Basically equivalent to a freer Zoro.

The most attractive thing about Big Brother Hunter World is the various telekinesis abilities. Your protagonist doesn't have any telekinesis abilities either.

What I want to say is all related to the work, so this book comes to an end for now. The pitfall of writing originally was that the logic of finance during the epidemic was too stable, and there was basically nothing to think about (increasing currency issuance and wrongful killing), so I was very free. However, I have been getting busier and busier recently. In particular, the liquidation of the Asian Tiger Fund made me feel that I needed to start researching more seriously than before. Whether it is finance or publishing papers, only those who have received professional training can be competent, but I entered the pit of writing with an amateur attitude, which really shouldn't be the case. I have put some of the trends and reflections about the plot into the works. I hope that I can write better "Hunter" fan fiction in the future. There are still a lot of places to explore. Goodbye, above.

I signed the contract, please vote and support. Because it is a very long novel, the tentative plan is to fill in the ten years of the Phantom Troupe and the subsequent Dark Continent, so the progress will not be very fast. I am not a full-time author, and I have no intention of becoming popular when I write about this niche subject. I just want to share my imagination of the hunter world. My personal opinion on Nen ability is more towards JoJo than One Piece. Those with telekinesis abilities are extremely rare to begin with and cannot be everywhere in the streets, and they will not easily expose their telekinesis abilities. So, unless a good reason can be found, it is impossible for the protagonist to come into contact with all those with telekinesis. This is very basic logic. For example, as the protagonist becomes stronger, there will definitely be more and more people with telekinesis abilities around him, and all of this must be done step by step. One of the essences of a full-time hunter is the ability to read, I admit this. But what attracts me most about Hunter World is its huge world view. After all, One Piece and JoJo also have many super powers. The writing of this book is still based on logic. Whether it is a decent person or a villain, a set of logic will be given that suits them. There is no wisdom, but there will not be five emperors fighting six emperors, and it is impossible to be evenly matched with everyone. Basically I will not delete comments, I will keep both good and bad ones. Whether this book suits your taste or not, I hope you will click in and take a look. The rules for adding updates are tentatively limited to 500 recommended votes, and an updated chapter will be added during the recommendation period. (Recommendations are related to reading and other data, so don't keep reading books to survive) Finally, please vote for support, thank you for the parts!

According to what you wrote, the protagonist should be a person who prefers justice. In the end, when the whole family is given red eyes, he will probably rebel directly, right?

The contract is about to be signed. I will send the contract on the 26th. The status will probably be changed in March. Please invest, collect, and recommend.

I feel that the author is a little unclear about the strength and personal character of King of the Sea. Personally, I think that King of the Sea is definitely strong, and he is not weak in Blade Tooth. Especially if he learns to read, I estimate that he is as strong as Killua and his father, and should not be weaker than Chrollo. In the first few chapters, it was really embarrassing to read. A person who lost consciousness and lived on porridge fed by his sister must not be in good health. I don't know if the author understands that those who are seriously ill really have no strength. They may have no strength to walk and kneel directly on the ground. Then I went to fight for gold. This is really a bit outrageous. I know that fighting skills are fine, and I also know that skills are very important, but without a better body, I can't use skills. Then Ai Yong in the back, I am really embarrassed when I see it. Ancient Chinese martial arts are killing skills. As the author described the strength comparison between the two, I feel that Liehai Wang can kill Ai Yong in an instant without having to read. I really don't have a good grasp of strength. I don't have a good grasp of the fan power system when I write it. I really want to write it well, but it's impossible. I hope the author can grasp it himself and sort it out.

Spiders are terrorists, and you ask the protagonist to join them. Do you want to be banned from the book?

I read some of it, how to describe it - it feels a bit like an urban novel. It is recommended that the dialogue be changed so that it does not favor a Chinese realistic style. Some subjective narrations do not need to be written, but if they are written, it will be superfluous.

If you want to cleanse the brigade, you can only clean it at the very beginning when they have not started killing and committing crimes. They must not kill innocent people indiscriminately. Otherwise, they must all be shot without any innocent people.

How it feels like a hodgepodge.

As for this book, I feel that the author wrote it quite well. But the disadvantage is that the author made the protagonist a strong character from the beginning, but then he became weaker as he wrote it later?

Liehai King, resurrected! (Hu↘ka↘ci↘!)

Detailed explanation of Ming Jin, Dark Jin and Hua Jin in traditional martial arts. 1. Ming Jin: When practicing, the rules must not be easy, the body movements must be gentle and not surly, the rising and falling of the limbs must be neat and not scattered. The Boxing Sutra says: "The square one should correct it." This is what it means. 2. Dark energy: The spirit of practice should be stretched but not restrained, and the use should be flexible and lively but not stagnant. The Boxing Sutra says: "The round one corresponds to the outside." This is what it means. 3. Hua Jin: The whole body and limbs are rotated during the training. Do not focus on rising, falling, advancing or retreating. Use it exclusively with your mind. Although it is an application of divine will, the formal rules are still the same as the previous two and cannot be changed. Although the whole body is moving without exerting any effort, it cannot be completely without exertion. It is always under the penetrating ear of divine will. The Boxing Sutra says: "Three turns and nine turns are one form." This is the meaning. 4. A detailed discussion of Ming Jin, Dark Jin, and Hua Jin 1. Ming Jin Ming Jin is the strength of the fist. Yigu means practicing the art of transforming essence into Qi, which is the way to Yigu. Because the innate Qi in the human body does not match the acquired Qi, and the constitution is not strong, the way was invented. When ordinary people are born, their natures are always good, their bodies are not unhealthy, and their roots are solid. They are all innate. From now on, when knowledge is opened, the spiritual orifice is closed, the sequence is inconsistent, the yin and yang are not connected, all are due to the acquired blood energy. Therefore, the blood energy is prevalent and the healthy energy is weakened, so that the body's muscles and bones cannot be strong. Therefore, in the past, Master Bodhidharma passed down the two classics of Yi Jin and Marrow Cleansing to strengthen people's bodies and restore their original appearance. In the later Song Dynasty, King Yuewumu expanded the meaning of the two classics and made them three classics: Yigu, Yijin, and Marrow Cleansing. The three classics were made into boxing techniques, and the use of the principles of these classics was invented. The Boxing Sutra says: "Staticness is the essence, movement is the function", which is different from the ancient five-animal and eight-stage training methods that have a body but are useless. Because boxing has infinite magical effects, it first consists of bone-changing, tendon-moving, marrow-cleansing, yin-yang mixing, hardness and softness melting into each other, soundless and odorless, and the whole body of the void. Therefore, only with its overall emptiness and spiritual power can it have the magical effect of deifying the unexpected. Therefore, the fist has one internal and external Qi, one source of movement and stillness, and one body function. Therefore, tranquility is the essence and movement is the function. Because man makes a small world, everything is consistent with the principles of heaven and earth, but the changes of yin and yang in heaven and earth are easier. Since a person's body is consistent with the principles of heaven and earth, how can it not be easy to be weak and stubborn? Therefore, the way to change is to change the weak to the strong, the soft to the strong, and the rebellious to the harmonious. Therefore, the three sutras all change people's temperament to restore it to its original state. Bone Yi is the bright energy in the boxing, and it is also the way to practice the essence and transform Qi. Collect the scattered Qi in the human body within the Dantian, impartially, harmoniously but not flowing. Use the scale of the Nine Essentials to train until the six Yangs are pure and strong, that is, the upper and lower parts of the fist are connected, the hands and feet are connected, and the inside and outside are the same. At this point, the power of Ming Jin in the fist is exhausted, the power of Yi Gu is complete, and the power of refining Qi is also completed. 2. Dark Jin An Jin is the soft Jin in the fist (soft Jin is different from soft: soft is weak, soft is not weak), which is the way to practice Qi to transform into spirit and to change tendons. Practice Ming Jin first, and then practice Dark Jin, which means Dan Dao Xiao Zhou Tian Zhi Huo and then use Da Zhou Tian Kung Fu. When Ming Jin stops, Xiao Zhou Tian is taking a bath. The dark strength of the hands and feet stops but does not stop, which is the bathing of the four righteousnesses of the Great Zhoutian. The force used in the fist is to combine the form, energy and spirit (spirit means intention), and pull the hands back with force (there is contraction force inside). The intention is like pulling out a steel wire. Use both hands back and forth: push forward with your left hand and pull back with your right hand; or push forward with your right hand and pull back with your left hand, which is like tearing silk; or like pulling a hard bow with both hands. It means to pull it apart slowly with force. Turn your hands or right hand outwards and crosswise, and wrap your left hand inwards. Or the left hand is turned outward and horizontally, and the right hand is wrapped inward, just like practicing the two hands of Shao Xing, or practicing the wrapping fist of chain boxing. The Boxing Sutra says: "The one who is wrapped is like the one who is wrapped but not exposed." Pushing forward with both hands is like pushing a heavy object with wheels. It means that it can't be pushed forward, and it also means that it doesn't move when pushed forward. Use both feet to exert force. When the front foot lands, the heel of the foot touches the ground first and there should be no sound. Then, when you land on the ground, the force you use is just like pressing your hands down and down. Push hard with the back foot, as if taking long steps to cross the ditch. The Boxing Sutra says: "The feet are used to gather information and the intention will not fail", it is the front foot; "The news depends entirely on the back foot", it is the hind foot; "The horse has the ability to trace the hoof". They all mean two things. The two feet advance and retreat, with bright and dark strength, and the footwork of the two steps is the same. However, if the bright energy has sound, the dark energy will have no sound. 3. Transforming energy Transforming energy is to practice the spirit and return it to weakness, which is also called the Kung Fu of cleansing the marrow. This is to practice the An Jin until it is soft and supple, which is called the ultimate point of suppleness and the end of An Jin. The Alchemy Classic says: "The yin and yang are mixed together, and the hardness and softness are transformed into each other, which is called ripeness of the elixir." The end of soft strength is the beginning of transformation into strength. Therefore, by adding kung fu and training the spirit to return to the void, until both form and spirit are lost, and in harmony with the Tao, to the point of becoming silent and odorless, this is called removing the elixir. The Boxing Classic says, "There is no boxing in the boxing, the meaning is unintentional, and the true meaning is in the unintentional", which means transforming energy. After training the spirit has returned to weakness, and the work of cleansing the marrow has been completed. Transforming energy is different from practicing paddling energy. Ming Jin and dark Jin also have scratching power. Stroking strength means that the ups and downs of both hands are short, which is also called short strength. It's like grabbing a wall with your hand and making a stroke, but the hand still comes back to you, so it's called stroke strength. The form of practicing Hua Jin is the same as the previous two steps, but the strength used is different. The Boxing Sutra says: "Three turns and nine turns are one form." This is what it means. In the third chapter, practicing essence turns into qi, practicing qi turns into spirit, and practicing spirit returns to emptiness, that is, bright jin, dark jin, and transforming jin. For the third round, light, dark, and transforming energy are one form; for the ninth round, the nine turns are pure yang. This is the principle of turning into nothingness and returning to pure Yang. When practicing, move your hands and feet in accordance with the pattern of the first two steps. Don't use any force. It's not that you are stubborn and don't use force. Use your ears with your true intention, both inside and outside the body. The force used in the movements of the hands and feet is there but not there, real but not there. The use of the Qi in the abdomen is not intentional, but it is intended to accumulate the spiritual ears of the ethereal spirit. Breathing seems to be there or not, which is the same as breathing when Yang is born to the full extent, taking it back to the furnace, sealing it to stop, and taking a bath in Dan Dao Kungfu. Therefore, everything that seems to exist but not exists is the true breath, which is the wonderful use of one spirit. Zhuangzi said: "The real person breathes with his heels", that is what he meant, it is not about holding his breath. Practice without interruption until you reach the point of emptiness, where the body has no body, and the mind has no heart. Only then will the form and spirit be wonderful, and be in harmony with the Tao. At this time, you can be in the same body as Taixu. In the future, by practicing the Tao of Xuhe, you will be able to become still and still, and you will be able to understand everything through your senses. There will be no entry but no self-satisfaction, no direction but no way, and nothing is impossible. The Boxing Sutra says: "Those who strengthen the spiritual roots and move the mind are martial arts; those who nourish the spiritual roots and calm the mind are practicing Taoism"

The character of Lie Hai Wang in the original work is seriously suspected of insulting China. The author based his creation on this character, which personally disgusts me.

Embodied Dragon 🐉, the embodied dragon has the power and operations of a transformational dragon. You can usually command the dragon to fight, or you can possess the dragon and turn it into a tattoo to improve yourself. Possession can multiply your strength several times. This ability is good. Have an idea

The protagonist is not a saint, but a pure person or a very pure person. A pure person who does a few good deeds is not called a saint, let alone a Holy Mother. The protagonist is pursuing the limit of martial arts. This does not mean that he has no selfish desires. Becoming stronger is one of the selfish desires. I hope readers will not make up the settings and understand the logic of the protagonist's actions.

The place names have been changed in the fourth volume. This book is a single hunter world, but I really lack place names and people's names, so I opened a collection building for supplementary players.