Immortality Begins with Getting a Daughter from Old Age

After reading about ten chapters, I didn't finish it. After I got the gold finger, I just lost two chapters in upgrading my skills. Some settings are quite unreasonable, such as it is a gathering place for immortal cultivators and there are dirty shantytowns.

Not bad, I like this chapter😍

For a newcomer, the writing is pretty good, but I don't know if I can finish it.

Chapter 56: Where did it go? It's gone.

The first chapter persuades him to quit. Are the living conditions of immortal cultivators so poor? It's just that the location of the house is linked to the concentration of spiritual energy. No matter how bad it is, it's impossible to live in a smelly ditch. Since I gave up, I might as well enjoy worldly things, so I just refused to leave. There is also a realm that is hard to describe in words.

He is actually interested in sewage channels, his soul has been polluted, and pig's feet are evil cultivators!

There are two major poisonous points: 1. Knowing that giving birth to a child can unlock the golden finger, but instead of considering taking in concubines or having another child, there is a large description of improving skills such as alchemy, regardless of priority. Changed the reproductive golden finger to the panel golden finger 2. He was too entangled with the widow, and gave up safely retreating with this foundation-building family for the safety of the widow and her daughter, and ignored the safety of his wife and daughter for the widow. These two points have caused death

I've only read chapter 12 and can't stand it anymore. At the beginning, I moved from the city to a shanty town because I had no money, which is similar to the beginning of many articles. Old fashioned, but acceptable. The wife gives birth to a daughter, thus starting the family system. There is a neighbor who has evil intentions and wants to use the baby to make evil elixirs. I originally thought that the male protagonist would improve his cultivation and combat effectiveness through golden fingers. Either improve your alchemy skills, improve your earning power, and move out of the shanty town. As a result, after the protagonist refined the elixir, he was afraid that the store that originally sold the elixir would find out that his alchemy skills had progressed too quickly, so he preferred not to sell it to the store he had cooperated with for many years and went to another, larger one. It turns out that when the boss of that shop learned that you had a daughter, he still accepted one less spiritual stone as a gift from you. I think it's a bit humane. Anyway, I don't like what I see here. After I got money from selling the elixir, I didn't think of a way to move, but to buy some wall-fixing charms. I spent a total of 11 spirit stones, and the rent in the market was only 10 spirit stones. (Later, the author may have noticed that readers had opinions, saying that rents in the city have increased or something. But I don't know yet at this time.) Hey, even if I have money, I won't move. I also came back to give my next door neighbor three spirit stones as a meeting gift. The reason turned out to be because my children were noisy? ! Come on, this is a shanty town in the world of cultivating immortals. It's not uncommon to kill people and seize treasures. This reason is too funny. Also, I was kicked out because I couldn't pay the rent of 10 spiritual stones, but now I get 3 spiritual stones, which is 3 months' rent. Although the author later said that this neighbor told him that the evil elixir maker seemed to be conspiring with other neighbors, in order to show that the money was worth the gift. But I still feel that the main character is SB.

Even if a book like this can achieve success, it can only be said that the quality of novels nowadays is generally getting worse and worse.

It's strange, why there are so many novels about immortal cultivating families recently, they always get married and have children. Is it possible that the higher-ups should guide the leeks from an ideological level to grow one crop after another😪

It's not enough, the more you look at it, the better it gets! Hurry up and recruit more women! ! ! Master Lu Fu has almost 30 wives and concubines! There are almost 50 children

Extremely Toxic: Running to a dangerous shantytown without money ➡️ Make money after turning on the golden finger ➡️ Chirping every day, afraid of danger ➡️ Going out to shop maids every day to give money to ask if they are safe, but they can't spend the money for a gift to rent a house in the city I can't stand the poison, even the copyist sect can't write, so I went back to see the Talisman Master

Ancestors in the foundation-building stage can use magic to communicate with the dead, and they have been dead for several days. The dead people whose whole bodies are burned can not only communicate, but can also see the appearance of the murderer before death. Anyone wearing a scarf can see it. I wonder if you are too far away. I want to write some new tricks to follow the trend. The premise is to consider rationality. In the foundation-building stage of the second stage of cultivation, there are magical powers at the level of Thirty-six Tiangang. Wouldn't the Yuanying boss be able to create something new?

Yes, there's nothing serious about it. The author doesn't know how to play emotional dramas, so let's use less women. Since Goldfinger is about family, it doesn't have to be limited to having children, establishing a family, recruiting casual cultivators, adopting children, buying servants, establishing a family base, etc. As the family grows, the luck increases every day. It's easy to change now that there are not many restrictions on the golden finger. Opinions only, of course, subject to discretion.

He was driven to a shanty town. He had 1 spirit stone per month. There was a system, and his wife had just given birth to a daughter. There was an old monk in the shanty town who wanted his daughter to refine infant blood pills, but the protagonist was particularly ambitious. After relying on the system to sell 30 spirit stone pills, He spent 5 spirit stones to set up protection for his wife, and also bought some spirit animal meat, but he would never return to the accommodation area where 10 spirit stones were spent for a month 🤔🤔🤔 This is less than 10 chapters.

An ordinary cultivator can condense a house with just a single spell, but ends up spending spiritual stones to buy a shabby house. It makes me laugh out loud. The cultivator in this book is so incompetent. 😅

What a poisonous novel, everyone, it's only about 10 chapters, with more than a dozen poisonous points. Let's not talk about the small poisonous points. Let's talk about a few big poisonous points. Instead of renting a house in a safe place with hundreds of spiritual stones, he has to take his wife and daughter to live in a slum where robbers, rapists and murderers gather. Originally, they were all slums where poor people live. The protagonist directly pays three months' rent to the neighbors. He knows clearly that the spiritual energy in the spiritual fruit is not as good as the spiritual rice, but he still spends 20 months' rent to buy it and try it out. This Shennong couldn't resist being poisoned to death.

Chapter 1 Are you serious (⊙x⊙;)? No matter how low-level an immortal cultivator is, he cannot live like a beggar! 🥵 No matter what, you won't live in a place where sewage flows and the stench is everywhere. What difficulty does it have for a cultivator to build a better house and keep it clean? Mortals can do it, don't low-level immortal cultivators not pay attention to hygiene? The quality of the residence in the world of immortality should be different from the aura and safety (formation protection)!

What's so great, it's extremely off-putting

Are there evershanty towns? Don't add drama to yourself! You are in the world of cultivating immortals, not a beggar gang. What is the value of force? Where is the hands-on ability? What if he is really a good-for-nothing, a god who can cultivate shit?

Immortal cultivators have become refugees. Did it start with that grandson?

The author has a look. It is purely for discussion. If you feel it is inappropriate, you can delete it. Every book has a selling point, so what is the selling point of this book? The author explains in the title and introduction of the book that when you get old you get a daughter, wife and daughter + points + system + Gou Dao + alchemy training. But looking at what the author has written, almost every aspect of the selling point is too rough. First, there is no emphasis on old age. To win a girl when old age comes, you must emphasize old age. What's going on with a young man? If you want to write an old man with a gray beard, and if you want to write someone who is harmless to humans and animals, look at your protagonist, he has become a King Kong! Second, wives and daughters are not related to adding points, so why do you write so many women? It's not like writing pornographic articles. You need to highlight your own selling points rather than follow others. Third, add points. This must be meticulous. Look at how many thousands of points you added at once, and then add them up. There is no sense of expectation at all. This is your selling point. You must write the kind of expectation that makes people look forward to it, and the hard work that is hard to come by little by little. Only then can you feel super comfortable after adding some. Only then can you have a good selling point. Fourth, I won't talk about the system and alchemy since I'm not familiar with it. Let's talk about Gou Dao. What you wrote is called Gou Dao? Gou Dao is a cunning rabbit who has three burrows, and will run away immediately when trouble comes up; Gou Dao is to make good friends and not be enemies with others; Gou Dao is to study hard and not take risks; Gou Dao is to be patient when encountering difficulties, to be ruthless in attacks, and to be stable afterwards. Look at your protagonist, which one does he fit in? No retreat was prepared in advance anywhere, No close friends were made In case of trouble, one did not investigate and prepare in advance, blindly acted recklessly, and did not know how to eliminate traces afterwards, blindly hoping that the opponent was a fool. This positioning is completely contrary to your selling point. People come in based on your book title and introduction, and they come here for this selling point. If you deviate from this selling point, how many people can you retain? There are also books about recklessness, but their selling point is their recklessness. If this continues, the book may collapse.

Really disgusted! In order to suppress the fighting power, all the efforts were wasted and the water was re-watered.

Can you block the author?

Why is this book so popular? It's a bunch of poisonous points. It feels like it was generated by AI. How could a human write such a mindless thing?

Let's put it this way, the author is already a relatively good author in terms of handling the details of his writing, but he still lacks a lot of control over the overall situation. For example, people who play Taoism are careless when they feel a little wronged, and they are too licking female cultivators. Be careful to distinguish between grooming and licking women, and learn to refuse requests that are too outrageous. You should learn to stay away from female nuns who have little value for you, and put the world of society into your novels, so that you can stand out. Based on my experience as a bookworm of more than 10 years, the author is capable, but in this book, the details are well handled, but the lack of brains and the licking of female nuns are the biggest poisonous points, which cover up your advantages and create a mediocre impression. I feel that the author summarizes a lot, and after writing two books proficiently, he has the potential to become a god. I will withdraw it first and collect the author's next few books.

Why are there so many books about getting married and having children recently? Could it be that the state is taking action?

I read this book for the second time. Although I didn't have the same passion as the first time, I still read more than 160 chapters. After I got the clone, I couldn't read it. After reading it for the second time, I still don't understand. Why the clone?

Damn it, respect your teacher and give me your monthly ticket

The current trend vane ~ cow🐮