The Brain’s Technology Tree

Here are a few things I dislike about science and technology articles: 1. They claim to be about science and technology, but end up writing about business warfare; 2. They are Chinese people, but they set up their company headquarters overseas; 3. They portray all countries as enemies, also known as "going it alone".

If the protagonist were to leak even the slightest hint of brain development, he'd be doomed; the entire character would be ruined. Imagine if you directly told someone about a technique to unlock brain power—they'd be horrified. Back then, qigong still had a market. They'd think, "So the protagonist was just an ordinary person after all, he just got lucky and somehow obtained this thing.

Do not build high-tech companies abroad.

How do you plan to survive and return to China after starting a high-tech company abroad? After living for over 60 years, how could I not know what Western countries are like?

Naiveté: Exam-oriented education is the last act of kindness the state offers to the common people. The polarization of social classes is a natural law of society. Exam-oriented education is the only chance for children from poor families to rise in society. Those who constantly advocate for holistic education are either stupid or malicious.

No country would tolerate such technology slipping out of its control. I mean any country, understand?

This is full of flaws. One minute you're praising your own countrymen, but the whole article is rife with distrust of the country and your own people! You keep repeating the same thing about studying abroad again… why? Because you want to avoid potential harm from your fellow countrymen! Are foreigners really that trustworthy?

The entire narrative is devoid of substance and soul; a poor review.

The writing is a hodgepodge, tinged with patriotism, admiration for foreigners, technology, and fantasy. It doesn't aim to change the motherland, but instead creates an island to rule and dominate.

There's too much science content, and a lot of it is irrelevant to the plot. Sir, did you just copy and paste it? The large sections of scientific information disrupted the flow of the actual storyline, making the content bloated and not concise enough.