Pirates: Split a New World with One Knife

Xd Are you a new writer? Let me give you some advice. When writing passionate fan stories like pirates, you should pay attention to combat descriptions. To enhance tension, use the environment instead of things that cannot be directly described, such as shock waves, sound cones, storms, mountains and earth melted by powerful attacks, cracked islands, tsunamis, blown clouds, etc. There are also appropriate use of roars such as wyyyyyyyaaaaaaa to enhance the atmosphere | ᴥ•́ )✧. I have read a lot of books, but they are all lacking in this aspect. If the new book can consciously strengthen this aspect, I think it should be able to gain a lot of popularity.

If anyone is watching it, please give me a recommendation vote, at least let me know that someone is watching it. If my writing is too bad, I don't need a recommendation vote. You can just scold me a few words, so that I can know that someone will read it.

{"NickName":"Qingmengjinghan","UserId":227134893}[fn==③③]Creativity is to be good at connecting unrelated and impossible things together, revealing the meaning of the correlation between the two, and creating a related association.

Chapter 71 is well written. You can create a solo dungeon for the protagonist to show off his personality and strength. There should be a mini-boss in Chapter 120. The protagonist also needs to have a big move in the early stage. You can't always draw A. Even if you are a swordsman and you don't have a big move, otherwise the fight plot will be too bland.

There are so few people! It's almost 200,000 and the author hasn't signed a contract yet? 🙂🙂🙂

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

I saw a brother voted for me, not a robot. Thank you

The paragraphs are divided into one point, it's a bit crowded.

Can you recommend any good devil fruit abilities?