Starting from the Heavenly Path of Mars

I wrote a long rant and deleted it. Hey, it's a very innovative novel, but unfortunately I can't stand the way the protagonist does things...

The author's path has been narrowed. It's all about Mars and Heaven. If you don't develop Mars, every chapter will be about Blue Star and humans. The format is too small. No one will read this kind of writing.

Comprehensive evaluation author, the will of the planet you wrote is really too weak. The most important thing is that in the Cthulhu mythology system, Cthulhu is not a very strong existence. He is at most an upper-middle class. All the Old Ones you wrote are his food.

Tiandao, if you don't write about immortals, why should you write about Cthulhu in fantasy?

After reading more than a dozen chapters and a few comments, I came to the conclusion that you should not read this novel with your brain, because if you read it with your brain, you will find that the plot and design are very unreasonable, and the author must not have checked the information completely. I tell you, author, you should never write about complex science in this kind of novel. You either have to write it without brains and have more imagination, or you can be very rigorous and become a god directly. If you write like this, you have to use your brain and do not check all the information. It is completely thankless, easy to be scolded, and easy to fall into the street.

Can be renamed "Survival on a Chicken Planet"

When I saw the word "Tiandao", I thought it was for cultivating immortals. After reading a few chapters, I saw that it was both technological and genetically mutated, and that the "Dao of Heaven" was so weak. The four basic powers of the universe were better than this! ! ! ! ! 😥😥😥

It feels a bit weird. Although two satellites were indeed launched in the last century, the speed in the last century was really not that fast... There is no alien life near the solar system for at least a few hundred light-years (I dare not say that it is far away). The two small rockets launched in the last century could not fly a hundred light-years in ten thousand years... [ Fn=31]🙂🙂Then the question comes. On the scale of the universe, it can be said that within hundreds or thousands of years, the satellite and the earth will be close to each other. If an alien civilization can discover those two satellites, there is no reason why they cannot discover that the size is much larger than the satellite earth. Of course, this is what I see so far, and it may be a little wrong 😥😥😥

It is recommended that the author learn more about the system of the Cthulhu Mythos. The first is Cthulhu, which not only represents dreams, he also represents water. Then if you really want to copy the template of the Cthulhu Mythos. First of all. The mythical creatures in the Cthulhu Mythos are not only the Deep Ones, but also the Shattuck Bird, the Ancient One, the Hugoth, the Ghoul, the Chuchu Man, the Man-Faced Rat, the Byakki, etc. Secondly The highest god in the Cthulhu mythology is Azathoth, the god of blindness and ignorance. Then there are three more that have the same level as Cthulhu. Cthugha, the Fire of the Four Elephants. Among the four images, Nyarlathotep represents the earth. And Hastur, who represents the wind among the four images (Note: There are many famous clones of Latotip, including the swollen daughter. Of course, he also often appears as a black villain, and what Nyarlathotep likes to see most is chaos, because his Wei brother, there is also a "chaos" hanging in it, and his other One is said to be "Wriggling Chaos") (Note: Hastur mainly appears as the "King in Yellow" and the "Distant Reveler". His body was imprisoned by the old gods on the planet of the star Pleiades in the Pleiades cluster, in Lake Hali near the ruins of the ancient city of Carcosa.) Let's talk about this first. I really hope the author pays attention.

Good guy, there is something wrong with the basic logic. Author, if you extract all the data yourself, you will find that the combat effectiveness has collapsed. If you said that human beings are a 0.8 Civilization, I wouldn't say that, level 0.3? 10 Grams of antimatter? Can 400 7kW-equivalent nuclear bombs destroy a "god tower" that has an individual with level 2 civilized combat power and is protected by a level 1.8 Or higher civilization? Are the 14,000+ nuclear warheads in the world joking with you? (Not to mention the secretly super high-yield nuclear bomb...) 10,000 nuclear bombs, the f2a tower is absolutely gone, but why can't it destroy the spaceship used by a mere level 1.7 Civilization to destroy a level 0.3 Civilization? Could it be that those spaceships are flagships? Author: Do you use tanks to shoot rhinos when hunting?

Books are for readers, who cares what your character is. It's not fun to read, and readers will definitely BB it. Of course, you can also write it yourself and read it with others who share your taste.

It is foolish to use human thinking logic to speculate on the thinking of another rational species.

How can I say that the male protagonist, as a god, does not even have the ability to create a barrier between thoughts? ? There is something that must be discovered by humans on Earth. The lowest form of heaven in history.

When I saw that humans landed on Mars, I immediately felt that there was not much to read in this book.

Can't we write about Mars when we are already on Mars? Why do we keep emphasizing the earth?

Western mythology? Why are there no Eastern myths, such as those from Japan and China? Not better than Western mythology?