The Blossoming Spirit

Dear readers, if you think it's bad, please leave a comment before you leave, I beg you! 😭

It's great, I support it! The genderless protagonist is awesome, I'll never be afraid of boxing again.

There are too many flaws. As a protagonist, any personality is acceptable, but stupidity is the worst thing to do.

The plot falls apart as soon as they enter human territory...

Finally, a word of advice to the author: a comedic protagonist won't last long. Most readers prefer stories where both the protagonist and the antagonist are intelligent, so it's important to develop well-rounded characters. A good story involves wit and courage, using intelligence to escape death and defeat enemies—something that's satisfying to read, with a particularly engaging plot, avoiding…

I hope the protagonist is a bit wicked; giving away cultivation techniques directly is too unreliable.

What do writers do when they're not writing? The first three forms of flowers And the Dynamax form after transformation

It's well-written, but this type of story is still a niche genre for light novel readers, so it's unlikely to achieve good results. I suggest posting it on a light novel app.

It feels alright, but things just feel different after I went to the sect; before, I couldn't stop wandering around. What is it about that sect that makes the protagonist stay, and for so long? I really don't understand. Everything else is fine.

Giving away cultivation techniques is the biggest problem. Giving them to a little girl like Chu is fine, but giving them to those greedy people is... Well, you know.