Playerunknown's Battlegrounds: 100,000 Saint-Level Choices at the Beginning

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Rabbit-eared twins! Picture. Jpg

Now that I think about it, there are still a lot of holes left unfilled at the front of this book. Does the author want to gain a reputation as a cheater and go home?

(4) Valkyrie!

(5) Butterfly Girl

(1) Gorgon Medusa!

(3) Functional! Cute pet cow!

Studies have shown that eagles can detect rabbits up to 10 kilometers away if they have good vision.

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Book Friend of the Emperor of Heaven The God of Ziwei and the Firmament of the universe came to report. . . .

It feels good to follow it up to now, there is no obvious poisonous point, and it is a qualified and enjoyable article.

The content is so funny, just right for my taste. Oh, I like it so much~ The author will update it soon

Boss, here we come! 😁

I feel like this book is very well written and I really like it.

Is this a novel about red envelopes blowing up crowds?

(6) Monster girl!

1. Twin rabbit girls! 2. Cat girl! 3, Dragon Girl! 4. Cow! 5. Mermaid! 6. Robot girl! 7. Treasure Box Girl! 8, Valkyrie! 9, Mu Nainiang! 10, little devil! 11, pig girl! 12, Mushroom Girl! 13, vanilla girl! 14, Whale Girl! 15-10000, to be determined.

This is gone🙂🙂🙂

Uh () = convex, just gone

Let me share my opinions about the author and the book: 1. I would like to ask whether these female supporting characters have identities or are they just satisfied. Didn't I say that there are many races? I feel that it would be better to add some side plots. For example, you can use this to introduce those races. It feels better (actually it saves trouble, the characters, the plot and so on are more smooth and full). If it is just simple, it will feel less interesting. 2. I hope the author can be more fluent in describing emotional dramas. These chapters are a bit awkward, uncomfortable and abrupt. Some descriptions always feel like reading a mindless white text (some places feel like reading Japanese), which is very dramatic and lacks a sense of reading experience. Of course, if you originally planned to write it like this, just pretend that I didn't say it. 3. The background described by the author is very large. I have only mentioned three places so far (the vast land, the deep sea, and the sky (I can't remember the name of the third one)). There are also many uncertainties, races, and populations. I hope the author will not overwhelm the plot and keep it smooth. The setting of this book is still acceptable (although I seem to have seen a similar setting 🙂). 4. In addition, the big main line is survival and deciphering the secrets of this place. I hope the short-term main line (or branch line) should be clear, otherwise it will become less and less attractive as you read it. The climax is not easy to make, or there is no previous background and the atmosphere is not enough. 5. It is suggested that the author can learn from the rankings of game novels (although the author has already written it, but it feels not rounded enough, but it is actually not bad), talk about the supporting characters, and have more interactive meetings and cooperation. This part seems to be enough for now. 6. Is this a non-stop single-player survival? (Single-player: developing alone, the opposite is the kind of living with a group of people and establishing a base) (At present, the plot direction does not look like a single-player survival, and the female protagonist of the system does not count) If so, it will be difficult to write well in the middle and later stages, because it is relatively boring, the audience is small, and there are many books. It is recommended that the author consider it before writing. 7. Finally, there is the protagonist. The protagonist's IQ is still online (for now), but the description of character, structure, vision, ability, etc. Is not in place, or can't be seen, and has no vitality. It gives me the feeling that a large part of it is written in Japanese (it can be seen that the author has potential and ability in this area🐶). I hope the author can shape the character well, otherwise he will become a member of the army of face masks and have no recognition. The above content is only personal speculation and suggestion, please don't comment if you don't like it🐶. {"NickName":"Zhishuihao","UserId":302225389} (I followed you because of @you. If you don't reply, I will unblock you🐶, hehe)

This book has entered the palace 😰

Finished? ? ? 🤔🤔🤔

I thought of a question, wasn't the snake girl skewered by Poseidon, the god of the sea? So the protagonist doesn't mind? ? ?

Brother, why did you cut it? Even if you cut it, don't delete the group. I won't blame you. Isn't Shuishui Group delicious? (Helpless. Jpg)

At the beginning, I wanted to see the options, but later on, are you planning to develop into pornographic literature?

Why did it get cut off😥

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