The Crooked Naruto of Konoha

There are too many poisonous points. The protagonist Kizaru was turned into a yellow dog, and even the river water in the village could destroy his fruit ability. His body was constantly controlled by Naruto's soul to do stupid things, and he also played random tricks. I saw the protagonist Kizaru in the Bell Robbery scene playing with the tricks of picking up his hair. I couldn't hold it anymore. To sum it up, it's like selling dog meat on a sheep's head. I'm here to see the fruit power user Kizaru, not the comedian Huang Gou.

I am the man who wants to become Hokage

The fruit is not afraid of water, it is the substances in the water in the pirate world

The author's update is so scary, like a monster 😏

Luffy version

Devil fruits, especially the natural type, are basically unsolvable in other worlds. This is not a rule-based ability and needs to be used in this world. Devil fruits transform the body of the eater and are medicines, serums and the like Just like Dachao, as long as the sun in other worlds is not a magic energy body or something like that, there will be no problem. Could it be that when Dachao goes to other worlds to play, he will bring a few pieces of kryptonite to fear that he will not die?

The subject matter is very good, but the writing style is very poor.

There is a substance like Sea Tower Stone in the water in the One Piece world, so espers are afraid of water. Could it be that the Sea Tower Stone has also traveled through time? …

It's outrageous. There is a Sea Stone factor in the sea water in the world of Pirates, so it can restrain people with abilities. Where does the Sea Stone factor come from in the Naruto world?

The writing is okay, but the strength is forcibly weakened. There is something called Pyrobroin in the sea water in One Piece. This English word first appeared in the dialogue between Sky Island Zoro and Paigea in the comics. Because of this factor, the Devil Fruit will be powerless when it touches water, and its abilities will be ineffective. So is the sea water in Naruto the same as the sea water in One Piece? If this is a second guess, just pretend I didn't say it

Although it is good to be funny, if it is funny when there are key plot points or turning points, it is not funny but embarrassing. It makes people feel embarrassed to read it and then delete the book.

Kizaru is just lazy and not funny, these are not like Kizaru

Aokiji and Akainu can fight for ten days and ten nights, and Kizaru, who are both three generals, cannot be weak. Moreover, in the pirate world, except for long-range attacks such as snipers, there may be no need for combat professions. Devil fruits, swordsmanship, and physical skills all rely on physical strength. In addition, Kizaru has lived in the pirate world for so long, will he give up physical training?

I can't stand it anymore, I feel like I don't have any combat experience at all.

Part-time author (currently a senior high school mathematics teacher) Therefore, updates are made twice a day, approximately at 12 noon and 8 pm. Each time I finish coding after get off work the night before and send it out the next day. No more, it really can't be done. After the college entrance examination, there will be enough time during the summer vacation, and updates will be available by then.

The subject matter is good, but the logic is a bit unreasonable, and Kizaru is overly polished, but the writing style is on the level.

This kind of writing is still too early for human beings

This guy is a gay who has traveled through time, right?

The complaints in the comments are indeed correct.

🙂 Then when Naruto Ape transformed into a girl, his mouth was crooked. Jiraiya was probably going crazy.

To be honest, it's very ordinary. It can be seen that it is the author's practice writing.

I remember reading a novel about the mastermind series. Many people in the pirate world became Pokémon.

I don't know what the basis for the pirate's claims is, please bring out the data. Don't be stabbed in the back by Oda. Oda likes to be stabbed by pirates.

No, I'm laughing so hard 😁😁

It feels like the character is a bit broken, which makes me think it's not Kizaru anymore. Is it my imagination?

In the original work, it seems that the reason why Hailou Stone restrains people with abilities is because the structure of Hailou Stone is similar to sea water. Is there a sea floor stone in the sea water a second set?

I haven't reached the stage of squinting my eyes yet.

What is the main character's ability? Suddenly, Qing Bi Jin Jian's Seven Heavenly Lock and 100% being caught with bare hands appeared.

I couldn't help it after seeing the division. According to the author's understanding, I really don't know how Kizaru became an admiral.

Why is this book even finished and still in the new book section 😂