Very Ordinary Diary

The ideal green dragon of dnd (beautiful) The green dragon of dnd in reality (ugly)

Signing warning! ! ! It is expected that the author will sign a contract in three years. (The author will be an adult in three years!) Crying and scattering flowers 😂😂

Um, I want to know how many friends are watching. If you are really watching, please come out and let me know^ω^.

Well, after reading a few chapters, let me say a few words. I feel that the author's writing style is a bit too dry, and the language accumulation and scene description are still not very good. Considering the experience and age (if true), I just need to improve slowly, and the courage to write a book by myself should always be encouraged. Others, as a bookworm of more than ten years, I suggest not to pay too much attention to readers' opinions (including mine). Some supporting characters or interesting jokes can be added appropriately. When it comes to the main line and key settings, you must stick to your own ideas. I have read a few books that may It's because the author pays too much attention to the readers' opinions and changes some settings to cater to the readers. It's not obvious in the early stage, but after a hundred chapters, it feels like something is wrong. Only you know what you want to write. No matter what others say, they can only be suggestions. If you really can't accept it, just let them abandon the book and leave. In short, since you can't sign a contract now, you might as well practice your first book and write a complete story with a complete plot and self-consistent logic. Don't cut off the details and don't cut off the end. It doesn't matter if there are few people reading it. Consciously practice scene descriptions, accumulate more materials, and then read the works of the great author of the fantasy book, to prepare for the first book that can be signed.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Bubble, come on, I wish you a successful signing

As long as the emotion is written well, it will be perfect.

Author Zhou Chang😂😂

The ideal silver dragon in dnd The silver dragon (ugly) in real dnd

Writer, no matter how well you write this book or whether you can successfully sign the contract, you must persevere. I support you! Because I am also an unknown writer who has published several books, so I can understand the difficulty of being a novice writer.

Finally finished reading it! Overall, I feel it is very well written. The protagonist, who has a starting point that is one of the few at present (emphasis added), looks very comfortable. Although it is a pseudo-dnd, there are also many original things. It's just that the current chapter is a bit uncomfortable xwx Looking forward to the continuation, come on!

Um, is the protagonist the Silver Dragon or the guy like Xiao Yan? I think if it is written like this, the Silver Dragon is his mount. We are watching the Silver Dragon, not the cultivator.

You have to work hard and have a happy new year!

If you haven't signed a contract for 6.5W, come and sign up 😐

Move the battlefield! Take the initiative to attack! Blade Blade Supreme Blade A Cart 😜😂

I forgot which book I read about it. The silver dragon in DND likes to transform into an elf or a human, and then mixes with the mercenaries.

Not to kill Zhao Sirong? Just because of his behavior of chewing on the protagonist, he should not be allowed to stay overnight.

The writing is very good, keep up the good work! 😃