I Woke Up to Find I Had a Child!

Having read up to chapter 33, I can say that this daughter is indeed someone I should raise, but what's really frustrating is that she doesn't even have that memory. Why is she always so sentimental and melodramatic? It just feels so inexplicable. If she did have that experience, it would be understandable, but what you're writing isn't even about traveling to the future a year ago, okay?

Because there is not enough reading, the editor's suggestion is to start a new book. I originally planned this, and even sent out the eunuch notice. The more I thought about it, the more annoyed I became. Anyway, I gave myself a reward of more than 20 yuan. Why did I still lose money after spending nearly a month? After some persuasion from a friend later, I decided not to commit to it yet.

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There are too many illogical points. Giving a newborn child to a poor male lead—how could he possibly raise it without parental help? The female lead is also strange; why give birth if she doesn't want to raise the child? Her parents don't like the male lead, and they don't care about their own granddaughter, only caring about the male lead who is still a child himself and has no money to raise. Who will be responsible if he dies? It's just a novel, too exaggerated.

Isn't Zuo Qing the female lead? Why is she being featured so much? It's overshadowing the main character; the supporting character has more screen time than the protagonist.

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It's supposed to be a time-travel story, but it feels like the male protagonist lost his memories of that period. 🤔

Three years have jumped straight into the past? One chapter he was just learning to say "daddy," and the next he's starting kindergarten? Ah… how did those three years even happen? Where's Zhao Jiaren? Moving is a big deal, and the male lead didn't tell anyone, or even arrange a housewarming party? Is this book actually without a female lead?

Although I know the author's performance is poor and they lack motivation, updating only once a day feels like they're on their way to becoming a main character. I think I'll just quit now, otherwise I'll feel bad later.

One major reason for the novel's poor performance is its overly drawn-out plot. It's already 200,000 words long, and the real reason the male protagonist was fired still hasn't been explained. Reading online novels is all about enjoyment, but aside from the beginning, the last few dozen chapters are quite depressing. The reason for the dismissal should at least be revealed gradually, with some foreshadowing and narration.