When the Salary Is in Place, Kill the Immortals and Demons

The cultivation level belongs to the original owner, so what is the use of this system?

A harem story about an old cow eating young grass?

The front is pretty good, but the back is straight to the point of Journey to the West. I'm speechless, a good subject matter is ruined.

It makes sense that your book, which has more than 300,000 words, has not made any progress

I feel like the protagonist is like a licking dog, and the love line appears inexplicably. If the author doesn't know how to write about love, then he shouldn't write about it. Although the setting is very novel, the writing of the heroine is too bad.

The setting is very interesting, but the content is a bit unbearable.

Could it be that he is a pig... Novel? 😰

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Harmful. . . You can see that all your review authors have responded. It shows that the author did not write the book for money. Just to fulfill the ideal in my heart. So don't complain. If you don't like watching it, just leave without comment.

I'm speechless about the protagonist. The first mission asked him to save one person. He wanted to save a group of people, but he didn't think about what kind of scum he was. He was a scumbag who was building a foundation and had so many other things. If a mission came up later and asked you to save a group of people, wouldn't you have to save the world?

I still have a group number 682719584. Do you guys want to come?

My cultivation is mine, why do I have such a thing as a system?

It feels a bit disgusting to negotiate peace with someone who invites foreign enemies to invade.

This protagonist is suitable to be a killer

You might as well write a whole novel. It would be strange if you don't hit the streets with your current setting. A good subject matter has been ruined by you.

I was disgusted in the first chapter, but it's okay. The problem is that you are poisonous or do you have to lead Quanqin?

The hero can find a way to get out of the system! For example, one clone can be created, and three clones can be created. One can choose to practice Buddhist techniques, one can choose to practice demonic techniques, and one can become a demon clan, which can be called a tree. If something goes wrong, it can be discarded. This body can also be made into a Shinto cultivation method, so that they can compete with Buddhism for faith, and can also bless the east with good weather.

The first twenty chapters are quite interesting, but there are a lot of places in the back that I personally find to be very dramatic in writing. Things like "guess my friends, and those who are interested can calculate the probabilities themselves." There is a lot of writing like this, which affects reading. For water numbers, you can adjust small details, such as whether the left half of the butt touches the ground or the right half when practicing. Details of the fingers when eating, whether the mouth is pouting, etc. There are a lot of numbers to write, and they won't make people feel abrupt. Just like you wrote, it's fun to do it once in a while, but if it's too many, you'll be discouraged.

After reading the first chapter, it is obvious that the author deliberately suppressed the protagonist's strength and personality, and also moved himself.

It looks like it's turning into Journey to the West

The concept is relatively novel and the plot is okay but there is too much nonsense. When writing a novel, just write the plot. There is no need to complain about rhetorical nonsense in the middle And everyone has different views on things. What you think is right may not necessarily be considered right by others. And the tone of the rhetorical question gives people a feeling of "No, no one thinks differently than me", as if having a different point of view from you is heresy I came to read the novel, not... I'll figure it out for myself

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Chapter 6 I looked over and over, but I still don't understand.

Reading the introduction, I thought I was being commissioned to slay demons, but emmm

Why does it feel so much weaker than a mortal cultivating immortality?

Xdm, I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 17, please come on

Why not take revenge? Isn't it just a few breaths away? Moreover, the protagonist still inherits his memories, and Golden Finger helps him perfectly control Taofa's body. Why not kill the enemy while there is still time for this mission? Still not going? ? ?

I've read a book with this setting, and I really enjoyed reading it. It only has about a hundred chapters, but I really feel that the author's writing skills are lacking. Come on.

After reading the first two chapters, I really couldn't stand it. . .