The Demon Tower Amusement Park

Although it is necessary for the plot, I am afraid that the author will force the plot of adding a female character in the future. (The snake spirit disease almost became a god and forced a woman, and the result was an avalanche) For the normal paradise style, please refer to a certain god's ** Paradise or a certain author's Dimensional Eclipse

I really can't read the early stage. The author wanted to create a protagonist who is fierce and decisive, but his writing skills are not good enough. He wrote a neurotic fool who has no clue about what he does. The background is not enough. It makes people look confused. Even the bright lines require a lot of thinking. The buried hidden lines are even more of a big hole. Ordinary readers who have no patience can give up.

The gap between this article and imagination is huge. . . The author also said that girls like Samsara would be beheaded, but I read Chapters 10 and 11 and almost all of them were girls. . Just a soy sauce man. And there is also a plot where a man dies and a woman is saved. . . , Three men on the ghost bus were obsessed with a female ghost and the protagonist refused to save/remind her. As a result, as soon as the two female students came up, the male protagonist immediately reminded them that they were getting off the bus, and also forced the protagonist to issue a task asking the protagonist to protect the two girls. If they are all dead, erase them. . .

How should I put it? The content has nothing to do with the character introduction. It may be a matter of my understanding. The author of this protagonist may have been portrayed in a selfish and cold style, but he always uses the mission as a reason to save people. There is also a typical killing of men and saving women. However, I only looked at the first dozen pictures, and I really can't stand it. If you are high in drug resistance or like this type of friends, you can try to watch it 😎😎

"Profit comes first, anything that gets in my way will be killed." Is the protagonist's introduction true? I feel like this description is completely different from the protagonist of the text.

After reading the author's words, he said that a cousin should be left alive so that she would not die, so I will focus on this sentence. I won't comment on the content. If you want to write about the style of killing the sister Su, no matter how you learn from it, it is still a skill. If you keep the sister without killing her and it will be a drag on her relatives, I'm sorry, I gave up. To be honest, I think the author's writing is okay. I don't find fault with the content of the writing. I can still read it when my cousin and aunt suddenly appear later. But the author told me that they won't stick around to drag down the protagonist. Sorry, I really can't stand it anymore. Either you can write a Madonna throughout the novel, such as the novel The Healing Game, which is good. The main character is a Madonna throughout the whole story, too, at least it's not contrived. Either the dark novel doesn't need to be anything particularly evil, at least don't be selfish about the Holy Mother. This kind of novel is disgusting. If the author plans to write about the cousins ​​and aunts, even if they add some cats, dogs, or indentured servants at the end, I have no problem with it. As long as they can't be dragged down by relatives, then I will go back to the trap. If you insist on writing like this, then abandon it.

Because it is an original world, there is a huge demand for the world. If you have any good ideas, or characters you want to join, you can also mention them, whether they are supporting roles or supporting roles. The content of this book is grand and there are many worlds, so the demand in all aspects is quite big.

There are too many background narrations that are the same. If it weren't for unlimited streaming, I wouldn't be able to watch them. The inheritance system is really messed up. If you just pick one up and massacre the novice village with a full-level account, what's the point? In order to highlight the protagonist's reputation, each world is forcibly increased in difficulty. You can just drag an alt to get ratings. In a world, the player levels are too different, and the protagonist can still get by with his skills and talents? Why can you fight against a world-destroying person? This world-destroying person is too good and has no restraint. He can recover blood and mana without regaining his energy. You can't withstand 30,000 pigs besieging you for three days There is also the skill of independent resurrection, or the ability to resurrect in space after death. He can actually appear at this level... He also took great pains to cause trouble for the protagonist Cousin, the inheritance system, the author has really considered it? A novice inherits, even if it is a second-level copy, producing half a million? There are also newbies who go to the second level, and the whole body is the best. I remember that the equipment seems to have a percentage increase? Not all but most of them. Even if a new egg attribute is a 1.2 Superior attribute, can it be exploded with equipment? Can the skill be used? Another flat-A version of the warrior?

There is a cousin and an aunt in the back. I said before that I have no relatives. The cousin entered the magic tower because he followed the protagonist. What a bloody plot.

The more I write, the more I feel uncomfortable, especially when I write about a cousin character, I am trying to persuade her to quit.