Magic Tower Paradise

Although it is necessary for the plot, I am afraid that the author will force the plot of adding a female character in the future. (The snake spirit disease almost became a god and forced a woman, and the result was an avalanche) For the normal paradise style, please refer to a certain god's ** Paradise or a certain author's Dimensional Eclipse

I really can't read the early stage. The author wanted to create a protagonist who is fierce and decisive, but his writing skills are not good enough. He wrote a neurotic fool who has no clue about what he does. The background is not enough. It makes people look confused. Even the bright lines require a lot of thinking. The buried hidden lines are even more of a big hole. Ordinary readers who have no patience can give up.

The gap between this article and imagination is huge. . . The author also said that girls like Samsara would be beheaded, but I read Chapters 10 and 11 and almost all of them were girls. . Just a soy sauce man. And there is also a plot where a man dies and a woman is saved. . . , Three men on the ghost bus were obsessed with a female ghost and the protagonist refused to save/remind her. As a result, as soon as the two female students came up, the male protagonist immediately reminded them that they were getting off the bus, and also forced the protagonist to issue a task asking the protagonist to protect the two girls. If they are all dead, erase them. . .

How should I put it? The content has nothing to do with the character introduction. It may be a matter of my understanding. The author of this protagonist may have been portrayed in a selfish and cold style, but he always uses the mission as a reason to save people. There is also a typical killing of men and saving women. However, I only looked at the first dozen pictures, and I really can't stand it. If you are high in drug resistance or like this type of friends, you can try to watch it 😎😎

"Profit comes first, anything that gets in my way will be killed." Is the protagonist's introduction true? I feel like this description is completely different from the protagonist of the text.

After reading the author's words, he said that a cousin should be left alive so that she would not die, so I will focus on this sentence. I won't comment on the content. If you want to write about the style of killing the sister Su, no matter how you learn from it, it is still a skill. If you keep the sister without killing her and it will be a drag on her relatives, I'm sorry, I gave up. To be honest, I think the author's writing is okay. I don't find fault with the content of the writing. I can still read it when my cousin and aunt suddenly appear later. But the author told me that they won't stick around to drag down the protagonist. Sorry, I really can't stand it anymore. Either you can write a Madonna throughout the novel, such as the novel The Healing Game, which is good. The main character is a Madonna throughout the whole story, too, at least it's not contrived. Either the dark novel doesn't need to be anything particularly evil, at least don't be selfish about the Holy Mother. This kind of novel is disgusting. If the author plans to write about the cousins ​​and aunts, even if they add some cats, dogs, or indentured servants at the end, I have no problem with it. As long as they can't be dragged down by relatives, then I will go back to the trap. If you insist on writing like this, then abandon it.

Because it is an original world, there is a huge demand for the world. If you have any good ideas, or characters you want to join, you can also mention them, whether they are supporting roles or supporting roles. The content of this book is grand and there are many worlds, so the demand in all aspects is quite big.

There are too many background narrations that are the same. If it weren't for unlimited streaming, I wouldn't be able to watch them. The inheritance system is really messed up. If you just pick one up and massacre the novice village with a full-level account, what's the point? In order to highlight the protagonist's reputation, each world is forcibly increased in difficulty. You can just drag an alt to get ratings. In a world, the player levels are too different, and the protagonist can still get by with his skills and talents? Why can you fight against a world-destroying person? This world-destroying person is too good and has no restraint. He can recover blood and mana without regaining his energy. You can't withstand 30,000 pigs besieging you for three days There is also the skill of independent resurrection, or the ability to resurrect in space after death. He can actually appear at this level... He also took great pains to cause trouble for the protagonist Cousin, the inheritance system, the author has really considered it? A novice inherits, even if it is a second-level copy, producing half a million? There are also newbies who go to the second level, and the whole body is the best. I remember that the equipment seems to have a percentage increase? Not all but most of them. Even if a new egg attribute is a 1.2 Superior attribute, can it be exploded with equipment? Can the skill be used? Another flat-A version of the warrior?

Can the author not show off your pitiful bad taste? The ability and attributes of the items were not told to the readers at the time. It's disgusting to read.

The more I write, the more I feel uncomfortable, especially when I write about a cousin character, I am trying to persuade her to quit.

There is a cousin and an aunt in the back. I said before that I have no relatives. The cousin entered the magic tower because he followed the protagonist. What a bloody plot.

After reading Chapter 17, I feel that starting from the bus is very similar to part of the plot of "The Strange Is Coming to Me" by Takumi Tenryo

You can't watch the good guy protagonist, he saves a married young woman at the beginning

We can learn from it, but it doesn't have to be 70 or 80% similar. It's not as good as Samsara. It's really poisonous.

The part about the barbecue restaurant looks familiar. There are two novels with similar settings.

I feel that the setting is quite like a reincarnation paradise. In the early stage, the master is more powerful. I hope there will be no female protagonist. Good luck to you, the author.

It's just average writing, the women in it are always annoying in all kinds of ways

It was pretty good at the beginning, but it dragged a little bit in the middle, and then I was anxious when the results were not so good. I obviously felt that the author was a bit anxious The world view was a little bit broken, and it was not attractive. Since it is a paradise, the description and layout of its own abilities also seemed messy and disorganized. The development of abilities, Promotion, breaking through the upper limit of gold attribute points, and talent growth are rarely described, and are rarely seen later What attracted me at first was the sub-career of dark cuisine, which is different from Bai Ye's alchemy potion There are many development directions that can be used for reference, such as the urban bald dragon's heart cuisine Served with The dragon-slaying ability of the sword master or the tonic angelica dish of the ginseng postman (the master's sword skills are indeed a bit overkill for cooking 😅) In the protagonist, I see a little bit of Alliance Yon's feeling, especially the return value of the shield and recovery. I don't know if I am the only one who thinks so. But the double swords are really handsome 😁 There are also Jinxian and Daluo. The style of painting has changed too fast. The protagonist has only been promoted to the first level, and the ninth level and true immortal have already appeared (this setting is outrageous, why is it an immortal Buddha). The problem of the seventh level of the magic tower being able to cut leeks is directly exposed, and there is no suspense at all. A new world will be opened next. I hope I can sort out the abilities and describe more about the environment inside the magic tower. Also, a knife has 13 equipment special effects. Fighting depends entirely on special effects (I hope it can be simpler, or it can be integrated into itself with a peeling scroll). The growth characteristics of this knife reduce a lot of additional resources to cultivate. It is a good choice to improve skills. Killing requires a lot of fighting to grow. This setting is very interesting. The two complement each other I also have an interesting idea. A large number of killings gave birth to the spirit of the magic knife, and the protagonist is peeled off when being eroded by the spirit of the knife. Make another knife, kill and cut the body, and the magic knife cut the soul. The master of double swords is so terrifying, just add a beheading effect and it's done The sword skills are all masters. The panel still has the attributes of master, proficient, beginner, and basic, divided into categories. Category, (please integrate it, obsessive-compulsive disorder is uncomfortable 😵), mainly because when using the sword skill promotion scroll, the skill was directly promoted before reaching the full level, and a new level calculation was opened on the panel. The original one was not covered, which made people a little confused.

The protagonist doesn't have anyone to implicate, so why does he have a sister?

Most of them are copied from Samsara Paradise

The writing is okay, but it lacks highlights and has low appeal.

It feels a bit like copying the reincarnation paradise.

He is cold and ruthless in the front, but turns into an ordinary person in the back, and cannot understand the character description.

I just want to know how this quality is divided