Savage Game: Obtain Directional Selection Permission at the Beginning

It's okay, but it's just a little bit sparse and not enough to watch.

The writing is good, I like to read it, keep it up (ง •̀_•́)ง

Chapter 71, the protagonist's monster golden eagle pet flies 8 meters per second. . . . ! ! ! Are you serious? (⊙X⊙;) This is worse than a sparrow

The titles of this issue of Sanjiang are longer than the last, but the quality is not very good.

Let me, Kangkang, who is still reading novels during the Chinese New Year?

No? It's just the protagonist who is so big, but it turns out that all the supporting characters behind you are stronger than him. Aren't all the 7 billion people on earth dead? Anyway, even if you pass the novice level, you will still be crushed, exploited and made a slave by others. . . What the hell is this setting? I thought it was for people on earth to develop together and then deal with aliens. The result is that they are all scattered among a bunch of indigenous humans, which is still a foreign territory, and everyone is a big player who has been developing for N years. . . This is not called survival, this is called providing benefits to the indigenous people. . .

5 Recommendations plus investment, indicating at least hay to grain

A very typical studio work, it should have been written by a different person after the newbie trial. The world view and various settings are numerous and complicated, and the explanations are not clear enough, which makes people confused. The copy of "Insect" is too long, I guess the collection will drop out quickly, and it ends hastily, which makes people confused. The author keeps leaving messages to make people believe that he can write it well, which is also quite funny.

When I saw the plot where the protagonist went to the monkey, I didn't like it. The protagonist was too easily moved and trusted, and the monkey made the protagonist docile with just a few words. I was also drunk. The protagonist believed that intelligent animals are safer than humans. I knelt down for the protagonist. Aren't humans also animals? The essence of the world is that the weak eat the strong. People with intelligence are just complex manifestations of evil and good. Primitive people are also simple, but the last human beings are the embodiment of the evolution of intelligence. Personally speaking, as long as there is intelligence, no matter what race it is, it may be deceptive. Unless it is a fantasy creature angel, the protagonist must not be vigilant, and it is a big failure.

I can still see it from the front, but it's getting worse and worse from the back.

How should I put it? The setting that the Supreme Bloodline can swallow other bloodlines is a bit hasty. Not to mention that it is useless before encountering other bloodlines (1.2 Times the attributes?). Even if the bloodline is swallowed, it will definitely start at the Yellow level and the Mysterious level. Then there must be something to "remove the impurities of other bloodlines" and then it is probably just one bloodline plus a small talent (probably). I always feel that any fantasy physique is higher than this Supreme Bloodline (Chaos Body of the Heaven-Swallowing Demon Technique)

Write slowly and don't let the protagonist lose his IQ. The protagonist's IQ in this latest chapter is obviously not up to par. In this world where the weak prey on the strong, pretending to be a pig can only lead to constant troubles. Only by pretending to be a tiger can one become stronger and stronger.

You can read it before the dungeon. After entering the dungeon, I suggest you throw it away.

After more than 30 chapters, we started to get further and further away. A lot of treasure chest items were written together without separation. It was a messy batch. The first copy taught the monkey technique, which was outrageous and unlimited. There is no limit on this thing and you can give it to others at will. How did you write it? It was okay before 30 years ago, but I didn't expect that I couldn't read a hundred chapters.

What can I say? It was quite enjoyable to watch at first, but after it was put on the shelves. . I thought it was because of me, and then I decided to take care of it first. I skipped reading in the middle. Today, when I read the comment section, everyone seemed to think so. My impression was that the coolness disappeared. How should I put it? You cut off your own unique selling points and left the advantages alone. There is something wrong with the focus of your writing Moreover, I don't know about other people, but I don't like the rotation of these so-called gears that set destiny. Disgusting I feel that the general development direction of your outline is correct, but there are problems with the branches and even the main line in the near future. The golden finger is the key point, but look how often you use it now. Where were you before it was put on the shelves? Maybe you want to learn from the master, but let's not exaggerate too much until then.

The copy you wrote recently doesn't feel like anything at all. The fights are not exciting, and the development is not attractive. The copy before it was put on the shelf was okay.

I asked the protagonist that such a huge advantage at the beginning is still so dangerous in the dungeon, as if he is just showing off, so what is the use of the advantage at the beginning?

In a certain game, this kind of survival is all over the screen, including elevators, sky islands, seas, caves, high-rise buildings, wastelands, and red envelopes. Anyway, in one sentence, I was born to fly, to walk on the ground, and to swim in the sea. It seems like someone is still writing about outer space. And the options in this novel are similar to a book I read before, Tower of Babel, and the two brothers who climbed the tower. The protagonist is the younger brother, and it is also a fixed option at the beginning.

The more I write, the more rubbish the protagonist becomes. He is satisfied that he will become a boss and the younger brother with eternal strength. Once he is almost invincible, he will be changed to the map.

How to put it this way, the current starting trend is to have no heroine, but after so many years of reading books, it is basically not a big deal if the heroine is a virtuous wife. The focus is on personal writing skills. The content is too greasy. In terms of communication, the protagonist is suppressed or taken advantage of by the heroine. Basically, it can be declared gg, although I think the gender There is no such thing as who takes advantage, but after reading so many books, it seems that everyone doesn't like the protagonist to suffer a disadvantage, or suffer a disadvantage in terms of women. And the most important thing is, don't put too much of your own feelings into it. It's a big taboo. As you said, this is how you and your girlfriend get along, but no one buys it.