A Hidden Treasure

After reading it for an hour, the theme is relatively new, and I can tell that the author has deep knowledge and must have put a lot of effort into it. The opening chapter imitates the "Preface to the Lanting Collection", and the article also touches on a lot of literary common sense related to Wang Xie. It is not difficult to see that the author wrote very carefully. He devoted a lot of ink to the scenery in the chapter and grasped the narrative rhythm well. Generally speaking, this book is an excellent work among Qidian Guyan. However, the details still need to be paid attention to. There are many typos in many words, but this is excusable. After all, no one can guarantee that they are completely good at calligraphy. The punctuation marks in some places also need to be paid attention to. The questions and conjunctions in some places seem to be a bit superfluous. Of course, the meaning that the author wants to express can be read in these places, but it always seems not clear enough. You can try another way of saying it. For example, when the heroine's father returns home, gifts are delivered to Wang. Regarding Wang's psychological description, the author tries to describe Wang's psychological changes through several "buts" to show the drama. However, the readers have a bad impression of "Is the author out of words?" Because of the consecutive "buts". Ah, I'm so verbose. I just hope that this book will get better and better. After all, I have invested in it. I am optimistic about you, the author. I hope this book will get better and better~ (๑╹ヮ╹๑)ﾉ🌸🌸🌸

Congratulations on signing the contract, the writing is very good 🙂

There is something wrong with the heroine's character. The previous description is of a woman who has experienced vicissitudes of life, enjoyed wealth and war, and finally saw through the world. However, when she returned to Xie's family, she became a very young child.

The heroine, a prisoner, actually said that she would exchange her life for another child's life. She was going to die laughing, okay? I haven't had a cerebral thrombosis for ten years and I can't come up with such a wonderful line.

Congratulations on your promotion to Qingyun 🤭

Good works cannot be buried, look forward to a big hit!

It's hard to wait for updates every day. I hope I can sign the contract soon and get more updates.

It's so well written🙂

😭😭😭😭It's so good, I was moved to tears

The text is so contrived that I can't read it any more. The author is your own boss, just read it for yourself