A Journey Through the Jianghu, Starting with The Smiling, Proud Wanderer

After staying in the dungeon world for decades, my martial arts still haven't improved much after I came out -_- || In order to maintain the balance of plot and force in the main world, I was still beaten by the people before me. . . It feels like it's broken now. If you don't write about the main world, I think it's still a good idea. Once you write about the main world, it's still a good idea. . . Forget it, give up

One thing to say, the author is pretty good at writing martial arts dungeons, but if he insists on writing about the main world, punching hard in the dungeon, and being chased like a dog in the main world, it's like having to mix shit with delicacies for you to eat. It's still the kind of smelly and long shit, and many logics are not fluent at all. For example, in the second world, he just made an excuse to heal his wounds in order to go to Liancheng Jue. , The problem is that in the previous world, he clearly read the Yi Jin Jing, which was enough to solve the problem, but he still insisted on asking for the Shen Zhao Jing. After entering the dungeon, he hurriedly recovered his injuries and came out. He could use the time to improve himself, but in the main world, he was chased like a dog again.

Kill Zhu Mei first, and then kill the old man. Originally from a sword cultivating sect, he was hesitant and hesitant about doing things. He looked so angry that he was disgusted by the shameless Emei 2.

Although Jianghu Knights have gradually caught the attention of the new generation of young people, it does not mean that they have disappeared. Although as a young man approaching 20 years old, I don't know much about "martial arts novels", I still have some feelings about Mr. Jin Yong's works. It can be seen that the author of this book has a "martial arts dream" and expresses it in the form of words. The beginning of the book has a lot of laughs, from the death of the couple, to various complaints during time travel, and perhaps a small foreshadowing for the preparation of the next book. "Parents sacrifice to heaven, and there are elderly people at home." Getting back to the business, the overall structure and framework of the book The writing is pretty good, and the author has read a lot of martial arts novels. However, the only drawback is that people like me only know Jin Yong, not Huang Yi, etc. Some sexual content at the beginning may take some time to understand and digest. This may be a small flaw in this type of novels. The interesting point of this book lies in the author's profound literary accumulation. There are also many places in the book that touch my heart, using objects as metaphors for people and blending scenes with each other. People have joys and sorrows, and the moon waxes and wanes. A major problem with this book also appears here. As soon as there are too many readers to accept what it wants to express, the words become empty. The author's writing skills are sometimes clever and sometimes hollow, which I think is a criticism. The overall design and content of the book are still relatively three-dimensional, but I still hope that the author can practice his writing skills more so that readers can better receive the information you want to express.

Shushan can be written into a separate book. It is obvious that Shushan is a real good grass.

The writing of the main world is so long-winded, and each one becomes a drag on each other, dragging on, and looking awkward.

This is the best book I have ever read among martial arts time travel fans. It is very good in terms of character creation, plot, story, fighting, and detailed description. Especially in the interpretation of the content of the martial arts novel, the author has a strong writing ability. Specific: 1. This is a time-travel cheating novel, but unlike other time-traveling novels, the author only regards time-travel as the main line connecting different stories, and does not emphasize that it is always fun to cheat, but aims to emphasize the characters and the story itself. It gets rid of the brainlessness of Shuangwen and the clichés of traditional martial arts novels. It can be said that the concept is novel. 2. The purpose of writing is different from other novels. Generally, authors write novels for money and career, but the author of this novel writes more for feelings. For example, he added his own interpretation of classical martial arts novels, his own understanding of the world, and the knight he wanted to be in the author's heart. In the novel, the protagonist overthrew the Song Dynasty and revitalized China as a knight in The Legend of the Condor Heroes. It can be said that this is one of the author's martial arts dreams. 4. Reasonable storyline. In terms of storyline, unlike most authors, the stories written by them are simply bloody to read. It should not happen at all in the novel, but the author can write it, but this novel does not. 5. Successful plot structure. Consider the world where the protagonist lives as the higher world and the main world, while the worlds in other classical novels are regarded as subsidiary worlds for experience and growth. It can be said that this structure is very successful. 6. The power of writing in detail. In most of the novels I have read, they are not very good at describing details, either ignoring details or not writing well, but this author's description of details is still very good! I hope the author will continue to work hard, maintain his style and original intention, and hope to see another classic appear!

I couldn't stand it after reading Chapter 4. The author obviously doesn't understand Xiaoao. Yue Buqun is 1.85 Meters tall, which is not suitable. He is gentle and elegant. You are almost 1.9 Meters tall. Your temperament is inappropriate, right? And why is Yue Buqun a hypocrite? In the early and mid-term, he was a true gentleman, but later he became a black man, which was also forced by the situation. Besides, the protagonist is only 14 or 15 years old. Yue Buqun is sitting with him chatting and introducing various situations in the world? Is this the same Yue Buqun who pays great attention to image in the book? Even a taxi driver who likes to chat wouldn't talk so much with a middle school student, right? Although Yue Buqun is not a bad person, you can tell by his nickname, and he is not passionate. He is a gentle and gentle gentleman. He knows that you are going to Wudang to become a disciple. Unless there are extremely special circumstances, he will not cut off your beard. Moreover, gentlemen are all face-saving. Even if they are really attracted to someone and like it very much, they will not take the initiative to recruit apprentices. At most, they will hint you to become a disciple. Furthermore, the protagonist is a bit too old and is really not the best choice for a disciple. Sigh, it's hard for a true gold fan to find martial arts fan fiction that they can continue to read.

1. The protagonist is a loser. He has practiced Mingyu Gong for 15 years before reaching the fourth level 2. The protagonist is an ancient dragon blower. The four-level Mingyu Gong can kill Dongfang Bubai. Moreover, the fourth-level Mingyu Gong is innate, so the ninth level cannot break the void?

The combat power is so suppressed... I have learned so many secret skills and the Dugu Nine Swords, the second-hand secret skill. I am also very talented, and coupled with the sword speed of the evil-proof swordsmanship... It takes dozens of moves to hit even a slightly powerful one... And even an instant kill is not possible! It's not as good as the original Linghu Chong who learned the Dugu Nine Swords just after he came out! ... The protagonist's fighting power is so useless... I hate it so much... Strong is strong... Don't look for any excuse... His kung fu is superior... It's just a world of difference...

The first poisonous point is that he deliberately lets go of those who deliberately drag him into trouble. The second poisonous point is that he is obviously from a big power, just for a skill, but anyone dares to provoke the protagonist and even kill him, just like the governor's relatives have treasures. In order to get these treasures, even if the governor's son is accompanying the protagonist, the village chief and the mayor and other small people have to fight for it frantically, without fear of offending the big shot.

Determined to live freely? The main world is submissive. After being beaten into a dog, you can only take refuge in the martial arts world in the book. If you don't want to practice martial arts and compete with masters, you will just recruit apprentices to show off. After pretending to return to the main world for less than 10 chapters, he was beaten like a dog and ran away in a book to recuperate. The Divine Condor chapter was even more outrageous. . .

A rare book. There are many writers who write about martial arts in the heavens, but many authors have good ideas, but their fighting style is more childish than primary school students discussing the TV series they watched last night 😰. This book is well written!

After reading dozens of chapters, I gradually became bored and abandoned it, so I came to the book circle to comment. This book is interesting, but also boring. It is interesting because the author's writing style is good and his literary background is also good. Occasionally, the article uses objects to express aspirations and express emotions. It not only expresses emotions, but also uses objects as metaphors for people, blending emotions with scenery. It is unavoidable to feel touching when reading. This can be said to be the strength of this book. But what about other than that? The shortcoming of this book lies in the author's fluctuating writing skills, which are sometimes brilliant and sometimes far-fetched. After thinking about it, I think it depends on the author's mentality; in my opinion, the author's plot is a bit superficial, and many plots and character creations cannot escape a "taken for granted" situation. Personally, I feel that the author did not elaborate or think carefully when writing the article. It was more like he finalized an outline on a whim and then executed it step by step. As a result, all the characters and storylines in this book completely revolve around the author's inner impulse. What's the explanation? The author first thought, I want to write such a taste, and then started to write from the effect to the cause. This results in the plot of the article always feeling fragmented, as if the preface does not match the follower; the protagonist seems to have no principles or goals in his actions, but he is vaguely acting along a hidden line set by the author. Not only that, but the same is true for other characters. Everything is just a tool used by the author to highlight the so-called "jianghu". Including the protagonist, all the characters in the article are puppets with no spirituality. So when you read it, you will find it strange, confusing, even boring and irritating. Some book friends are right, this is a self-pleasure work. Where is Zixi? It's not about bringing in private goods or writing according to one's own ideas, which are understandable, but rather the author's perspective. The author's perspective is very awkward. It contains the detachment of the time traveler who wakes up to the whole world, and the custom of social public opinion. It contains the modern people's longing for the martial arts dream, and the joy and wantonness of daydreams coming true. To put it bluntly, the author has only one problem - insufficient writing power. In other words, ability is not worthy of ambition. You want too much, but your ability is limited. All these factors have resulted in the current situation of neither getting better nor getting worse. All we can say is that we have to endure the pain.

The eyes of the crowd are really bright and they don't want to complain. This is the most rubbish protagonist I have ever seen. He is a loser. He has systematically traveled through time and space for hundreds of years. He is either beaten or on the way to being beaten, or he keeps getting injured. The author likes to torture the protagonist so much? Readers vote with their feet, so the author can enjoy himself...

I'm blind, but I thought this book was okay before. Chapter 50 begins to reveal the true nature!

Most of the early parts can be read, and some chapters are surprising in terms of writing power, but the end makes people speechless... The Condor is very poisonous. The later chapters jump from about 20 chapters, to a hundred chapters, and to the beginning and end of the volume. It is basically certain that anyone who wants to rule the country will be very poisonous. Jumping to the Tang Dynasty, I am poisonous, and I have poison resistance. The cost is not low. The above is for reference only... There are too many private goods to be received, and martial arts and knights are not in place, so you should not expect too much.

After reading dozens of chapters, it is exactly what book friends said: the overall situation is completely lost, the logic is messy, and it is all supported by fighting. Ambrosia and poisonous weed? Book friends, please make your own judgment after reading it. Everyone has different opinions.

I just don't understand why we can't be more low-key and cowardly in the main world. When the first grandmaster appeared and asked for some Piaoxu sword skills, he should have understood that the secrets here were too big and he couldn't grasp them. Even if he doesn't want to let go of the secrets, he has memorized them anyway. Why not just give the secrets to the master, downplay yourself, and investigate in secret? Why are you so stubborn? After beating one grandmaster, another one came. Before entering the Condor Shooting, four grandmasters had already appeared, and he was almost beaten to death. Moreover, he exposed his talent. In the end, it was not because of the secret book, but because he felt that he had become a enemy of the protagonist, a person with great prospects. In order not to be retaliated in the future, he had to kill the protagonist, so he responded to the sentence "This child must not be kept." It's really just creating plot to advance the plot. In short: 1. The Piaoxu Sword Technique is not the most powerful or even the most important martial art of the protagonist. For the protagonist who can travel through time, martial arts are indispensable, so the Piaoxu Sword Technique can be discarded or passed on to others; But the current situation is that everyone knows that the protagonist holds the Piaoxu sword technique, and the presence of a grandmaster is no longer within the control of the protagonist and the Wang family. So the sword technique must be announced when it is time to announce it. Anyway, the protagonist has learned it, and the secrets can be investigated secretly. Give this sword technique to the first grandmaster who appears, no matter how rude he is, in a life-or-death moment, you have to give in. The first grandmaster has not the intention to kill everyone. After escaping, he can slowly come back with revenge in the future. 3. The nature of the protagonist's conflict changed after the first grandmaster failed. When the first grandmaster was dismissed, the main purpose was to obtain the Piaoxu sword technique. At this time, the protagonist gave up and surrendered the sword technique, and there was a high probability of escaping unscathed. But when the first grandmaster failed and returned, the conflict gradually turned into the masters being jealous of the protagonist's talent (internally afraid of the protagonist's rise and revenge), and the purpose changed from asking for subtraction to strangling the enemy genius. At this time, it was already a fight to the death. At this time, even if the protagonist added the Wang family, he could not guarantee that he would escape unscathed. So the conclusion is: the protagonist puts himself and his uncle's family to death for a simple musical score that he has learned and is dispensable to him? Jianghu is not just about fighting and killing. Jianghu is about human nature. If you don't have invincible skills, don't be so stubborn.

I posted a post saying that Lao Yue is not a hypocrite. Someone refuted it and gave two pieces of evidence. 1. At the beginning, he stayed at Fuwei Escort Agency. 2. Feng Qingyang despised him. First point, the ones staying at the station are my daughter and my second disciple. The daughter is only 18 years old, and the second disciple is a housekeeper. Later, the second brother said that Yue Buqun knew his identity, which was slander. Lao Yue really knew that with his meticulous thinking, it was impossible for his second son to steal the secret book of Zixia. A housekeeper and an 18-year-old daughter, how stupid does Lao Yue have to be to let the two of them do such a dark thing? Especially his innocent and brilliant daughter, Lao Yue is really thoughtful and there is absolutely no way he would let his daughter interfere. The second point is that Feng Qingyang looks down on Lao Yue. Is this because you know that Lao Yue's character is not good? No, it's just a simple disagreement in ideas. And in terms of current common values, Feng Qingyang is actually not as good as Yue Buqun in terms of character. The sect was defeated and was in dire straits. Feng Qingyang had the ability to turn the situation around, but he refused to come out and hid in the mountains feeling sorry for himself. Lao Yue really worked hard and endured hardships, but in the end he was ruined. Just like the national crisis, during the Anti-Japanese War, one was a hermit and the other was a martyr. This hermit also has an army of hundreds of thousands and can easily repel Japan, but he just doesn't take action. The martyrs were a little unethical in the later period and used dishonorable means. After repelling Japan, they also prepared to occupy Japan. Which of the two really cares about Huashan? Except for martial arts, Feng Qingyang is not as good as Lao Yue in anything. His reputation outside can prove this. Both Wudang and Shaolin respect Feng Qingyang. Why? Silly, just confused, not a threat to them. Such people should be supported. Look at how these two factions dealt with Lao Yue and Zuo Lengchan. How did he treat Linghu Chong? Linghu Chong is an enhanced version of Feng Qingyang. Not only was he deceived by women, but he also deceived his master and destroyed his ancestors. If he had a conscience, Lao Yue would not have reached this point. Huashan was forced not to even live in the mountain gate, and was almost wiped out. Because of a little personal affair between his children, he still kept the cave swordsmanship and the Dugu Nine Swords secret. After the Wind and Rain Mountain Temple, Lao Yue angrily called him Linghu Daxia. Not only did he not explain the situation, he was also secretly sad, thinking that the people around him did not understand him. Too selfish. It is an enhanced version of Feng Qingyang.

I chose some rubbish skills at the beginning (not counting the sword skills of Ye Gucheng and Ximen Chuixue, but I tolerated it! Traveling through a world like Xiaoao, I also tolerated it! In the end, with several peerless martial arts skills, you let the protagonist practice Huashan sword skills? The golden finger is so open, but you show me this? Are you sure you are not doing it to be funny?

As far as the author can achieve results compared to his writing method, you're going to be damned

There is no happy ending in this book, it is full of indecision! In the state of mind of always being in the 14th Five-Year Plan, when choosing exercises, you can say that you are full of passion and don't care. The first world behind you is said to be a fledgling, but what about the rest? He was just as indecisive when he returned to the main world, and he was still like this even in the second world! It was simply put on the shelves and slipped away... By the way, Shi Lezhi was forced to exit the plot! Is that Feixu sword technique useless? Making a mess? The writing style is seriously broken. When it is good, it is excellent. When it escapes, it shakes off some inappropriate baggage. It is quite dramatic...

Stop writing about pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. It's really going to make me sick. I was attracted by your first part. Don't you want to be a ranger like Wang Lianhua? Why are you pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger? How can you be so cool like this? I really can't stand this pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. In the world of martial arts, martial arts is respected. If there is a ranking of heaven, earth and man, can't you help me move up there? It makes me sick to death if I have to pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger.

It is said that it is about time travel, so it does not use the environment and character background of the original work But it thinks too highly of itself and refuses to follow the plot of the original work So all the original characters are OOC

None of the martial arts chosen by the author are good. Let's talk about what you would choose if it were you. If it were my first book, I would choose "The Wisdom Sutra on the Roots of Control of All Dharmas" to increase mental strength and wisdom. The key is wisdom. The second selection is "Xuan Gong Essentials". After learning it, you can learn any martial arts with twice the result with half the effort. The third book is "The Great Technique of Chewing Iron" or "The Fighting Qi". Just eating can improve your internal strength and temper your body.

The content of the free chapter is good, but the latter part is terrible. It belittles Huang Gujin's martial arts. He uses his own Five Mountains Sword Technique instead of Dugu Nine Swords, Returning Wind Willow Sword, and Baiyun Sword Technique. The whole seven-sentence word is used as a move name, which is self-indulgent. And then the protagonist's main world has many such techniques, and the little people are on par with him. At the beginning, it was said that in this world, the Qinggong was high but the martial arts was low, but in the end, he was in a higher realm than him and his kung fu was terrible, so he couldn't beat him, so he outperformed others in Qinggong again.

On the shelves, I could barely bear to see the shooting vulture, and died of poison.

I really don't know what to say about this book. I chose Jin Guhuang at the beginning. If I choose Jinhuang Wen, but I chose Gu Long's novel, which Ming Yu Gong should I choose? You can choose the Rizhao Magic Kung Fu, or the Wedding Clothes Magic Kung Fu. After practicing it to a high level, you can waste it and practice it again. It's better than Ming Yu Gong and then create your own kung fu. If it doesn't work, you can also use the Yin and Yang Great Compassion. There are also Swordsman and Five Plum Sword Techniques. What other evil sword techniques should you practice? The Five Plum Sword Technique can be said to be simple. You only need to practice one thrust, ten thousand times in the morning, ten thousand times at noon, and ten thousand times at night. The main thing is to understand it. It is no better than the chicken-cutting sword technique. He snatched the Yi Jin Jing, picked up the flowers with his finger, and asked for the Tai Chi Sword Sutra. No matter how hard you were, Daizong still came. When I came out of Xiaoao, I was tortured all the way to the end.

The writing is good, with a martial arts style that I haven't seen for a long time, and the rhythm is particularly comfortable. I just hope that the author will never fail to write, don't let the protagonist's force level go crazy, and don't listen to some people's nonsense such as "you need to be awesome, you need to be domineering, you need to be cool, you need to kill decisively, you need to dominate the world" and other nonsense. Maintaining a slowly growing martial arts worldview is much better than a world shattering with a wave of your hand.