I Don't Want to Fall in Love with a Villain

Chapters 68 to 74 can be skipped, they are too toxic.

I think the writing of this book is good, and the emotional description is also very good, which makes people look forward to the sweetness later. Of course, there are two small disadvantages. One is that the charm value of women is constant -1, which may not matter to others, but I still think it is better to change the charm value of the female characters who can be conquered to -1. No one wants to be hated by women all over the world. And although negative favorability is interesting, it is really difficult to start the strategy. I hope that the protagonist will not be written as a bitch or aggrieved, and it is easy to overturn, especially after establishing a relationship with the first female protagonist. The second is the protagonist's aunt. Firstly, the protagonist is too uncomfortable when facing her. Secondly, the character is not lovable. She marries into a wealthy family and plans family fortune. If she is made one of the heroines, she will be discouraged. The author thinks that it is good for mothers and daughters, but I hope that the strategy is not licking or kneeling, and it is not too long, just incidental. Or change the previous article and change the bad attitude to a milder one. The reason is that iron cannot be made into steel. Change the part of the will to keep it for the protagonist. Doing housework is voluntary for the protagonist. Otherwise, I really won't like a married strong woman. The ending may be happy, but I was persuaded to quit at the beginning. In my opinion, this book may be popular. It mainly depends on how it is written later. After having the first heroine, if the subsequent heroines have no outstanding points (the appearance can even out the shortcomings of negative innate favorability), it will be fine. If readers are disgusted, it will collapse immediately (it seems to be the same with other books...). But conversely, if the character is good, it will be easier to attract readers. And it is a bit strong to determine the relationship with the first heroine without having any ambiguity with other heroines. It depends on how it is written later. In short, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. For now, this book is worth reading.

The male protagonist was out of place in the early stage. It felt like a game and he didn't integrate into it (needs a cache time). Personal suggestion: Exchange sincerity for sincerity. Treat Xiao Xiaoshu sincerely or treat everyone sincerely.

The author has never read a book🐴 Art can be ungrounded, but it cannot be grounded 😅

Don't mention traveling by yourself. If this is a game or something, the reading experience will be much better.

Although I have always convinced myself that this is the plot of a game, it is normal for it to be a bit bloody in reality. But the plot is a bit too childish, poison? Gathering around to look at beautiful women before the college entrance examination? A few people can understand, but they can't all be fools...

All I can say is that your novel is too two-dimensional.

When I first read it, I thought it was good grass, but after reading about twenty pictures, I overturned this idea. It was okay in the beginning, but starting from the exam, the plot became outrageous. You can always guess the plot without telling the plot, and the plot there is very ridiculous and ridiculous! I waited until chapter 29, and then saw the plot between the protagonist and the heroine Zhang Zhishi. It was really poisonous to me and I couldn't understand it at all. As a reader, I find it really hard to accept the protagonist's attitude and treatment of those disgusting female supporting characters. It makes my brain hurt just to look at it. If you can continue reading after reaching chapter 30, I would like to call you the first person to resist drugs 🙂

Why is there no one who looks so good?

Even if the game is a romance RPG, you can't copy it when writing novels. At least you can't just start with a bunch of strangers and harem members because we haven't read your outline. So much information is pouring in at once. Who can remember? Moreover, the college entrance examination is about to start and the name of this person is really retro to me. Even the naming style of Burial Love and Second Ape is better. In addition, the charm value is -1. The family is not well-off and they are treated badly. This start is too hellish. It is a bit far-fetched to rely on the system to turn over. Finally, the college entrance examination is about to start. I still have the heart to pick up girls and date. How big is the protagonist's heart? Or, the system you designed, the author, can even a pig use it to marry Bai Fumei and reach the peak of life. Then what does the protagonist need to do?

Write 5 chapters for a 2-minute plot. I skipped 10 chapters and didn't even see the next plot. I gave up...

It also paved the way for the system to appear. I really laughed to death. I don't know what to think at all

Chapter 29: Being drugged out by the exam, the author looks like he never went to high school

Alas, I originally liked the setting, but the whole plot is just one word, crap. Moreover, this book should be about the male protagonist starting in hell and then conquering it. Is this different from the simple mode now? The heroine gains 20 favorability points in one event, and the learned skills are directly copied. Is it also called hell mode? Also, I was very unhappy with how the male protagonist dealt with the characters who generally hated him. There was no reasonable response at all, but the result was inexplicably good. And if the male protagonist knows that his charm is always negative, how can he still play tricks with others? It's embarrassing to watch.

I want to see the plot of Tui Mu Yun's poem. The author, please tell me if you see this plot later. If so, I will definitely follow this book