People Are Amazing at 0:00 in Tokyo

According to my many years of experience, it is best for authors to write stories about man defeating nature and the like, which are in line with our country's ideology, otherwise there will always be someone who is cheap and reports it! It's best to have positive energy

The protagonist is a hypocritical weirdo, and his brain is not very good. After being killed several times by ghosts, he fought back. Later, with the support of the state and the oppression of ghosts, there were conditions for becoming stronger. He doesn't work hard to improve himself, goes to work to make money (without using his own life money, feeling that he is not worthy 🙂), and goes to school to waste time (rebirth), all he wants is to wait for the lottery.

I can't stand it until I reach chapter 28. It's a good thing that two skills are given at the beginning to help the protagonist stand out from danger. Just starting from the twenty-something chapters, the school part suddenly started to play multiple episodes, and the Riddler was also played, without any foreshadowing. From the author's perspective, the author knows the plot, so it seems okay. From the reader's perspective, I just feel that the Riddler is suddenly created, and the protagonist becomes stronger without telling any reason, just acting as the Riddler. All I can say is that this book is very consistent with the results. I suggest removing the invincible from the tag. There are invincible files in the tag, and the introduction and plug-ins are awesome. When it comes to the plot, which set of dangerous moments can get good things? Everyday moments are garbage. Chapter 28 is another transcendental one, another old-fashioned upgrade. It's another fake invincible article's old trick of upgrading. The introduction states that there is no heroine, but in the 28th chapter, there is a witch who likes the protagonist, and two yandere girls. There is no heroine anymore, and you write a lot of scenes of interaction with the supporting actress, and remove the introduction for others to see. Who would think that there is no heroine? I still have to remind you that I have already written an invincible article. Can you write it freely? Plug-in to eat*? There are a lot of pseudo-invincible novels that look like this. The introduction says invincible. As a result, they all have an upgrade stream for pseudo-invincible novels. Do you know what invincibility is? If you can't write an invincible article, then remove the invincible label and make a normal plug-in upgrade flow. The most important thing about an invincible article is to act like a saint in front of others. If you don't write this point well, it will be called a piece of invincible article.

Doesn't the introduction say there is no heroine? What does it mean when the TM girls jump out one by one? And create a Shura field? Do you want to disgust me? Accepted😡

There are too many foreshadowings, and there are people all around who understand, but the main character is blind, and it is very confusing to watch.

Why do you have to work? You don't need the money? Isn't it better to save a few hours to practice magic than to work? Isn't it pretentious? Is this sick?

Stop writing about classes in school. We have traveled through time and we still have classes. What is the reason for going to school? It's not just money. The protagonist has the skills but still lacks money. I have nothing to say. This is an old joke.

I saw that there was no female protagonist, the first twenty chapters were pretty good, and then suddenly three women came in who were all disgusting. Well, I saw you said that these three would be G at the end of the first volume. I was ready to bear it for a while, but when I saw it, wow, the first volume of Good Guys has more than a hundred chapters, okay, I will persist, and it turned out to be 50 chapters. I finished the 30th chapter, and there is no hope at all. How can people watch this? Obviously the setting is pretty good, and the main character is very good when he is alone. If I insist on feeding it💩, forget it, give it up.

As soon as the witch appeared, the plot began to fall apart. It made a good start, but was not sure of it. The steps were too big and too fast, and instead fell into a cliché.

After reading Chapter 17, it is tasteless to eat and it would not be a pity to throw it away.

This book started well in the first 10 chapters and then it got so good that I flipped through the table of contents and clicked X.

I suggest you start reading from Chapter 17 to Chapter 31, and read what's written Others provoked, saying that the male protagonist would save his energy at night to have sex with the female protagonist The male protagonist would play ball with others, and apologize if he loses. Others said that the male protagonist would run naked if he lost, I bought it, it made me laugh to death, Do you think this is a harem story? I won't say anything when harem stories are written like this. After all, harem stories are not all like that. However, the heroine likes him inexplicably and is jealous of him. Anyway, he is like, hey, I don't like you now, but you have to like me and be my licking dog. Your behavior is also like that of the Holy Mother. Be a human being. Why write it so viciously? If you want to have sex with women, just ask them out, take off your skirt, go straight to it, Momojiji, where is the pavilion, let's talk first, chapter three to five hundred, you like me, but I don't like you, but I won't refuse, Another chapter three to five hundred, I regret that I like you but the heroine no longer, the protagonist goes to find the heroine, or is sick, why do you do it Novel, be direct, why don't you keep it? Finally, the protagonist is a bit of a virgin, and her writing style is not fluent, like a primary school student writing essays.

Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Not without a heroine! Run! ! ! ! !

When I saw Chapter 16, I originally thought it was just a setting when I saw the witch. Then I added this time. I came first, and my back felt cold. I thought of Madoka, so I left.

If someone can keep reading this book, I admire his ability to resist drugs. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye 😰

It's so disgusting, so disgusting. Is this a heroine-less place? ? ? Isn't this all about female protagonists? The plot of a bunch of girls vying for favor with the protagonist is full of emotional drama. Do you think that if the heroine is having an affair with a bunch of girls, then you don't know what the heroine means?

I suggest you change the profile to be more concave. It's still invincible. Amazing? 🙂 (It is also fake if there is no heroine)

Let me tell you something, this novel is a bit mindless It's really not suitable for normal people to read, it's a nerd's yy

Chapter 27 I have nothing to say! A bunch of women come up to compete for the male lead, which is inexplicable. I know that the author has some foreshadowing, but there is too little foreshadowing. Rinko could have done more foreshadowing, helped the male protagonist a few more times, and left out the character. The second time we met, you became a psychopath and schizophrenic, and suddenly good and evil merged. My mind is full of questions!

The beginning was good, but after a few chapters I became confused.

..., Be logical and don't follow the same path as this book.

I read Chapter 24 and I can't stand it anymore. The plot development is quite abrupt. The pace of the Japanese story book with a weird beginning is very good. My reborn girlfriend and my wife are the reborn bosses like the guide for a few games is also good. In this book, there are so many characters that pop up suddenly that the readers can't react. I'd like to read the author's thoughts.

Now that I have seen the paid chapters, I personally feel that the first part is a bit messy and skipped a few chapters, but the content in the later part is okay. Some supporting roles are not very fleshed-out, but the several permanent characters created are okay (just a lot of them are thrown away after use, like the sister who can replace the boy, and the one who uses smoke) (Old Night Watchman) The switch from the weird world to the world of magic technology is very fast and a bit dazzling, but the feeling of the mastermind behind the scenes is quite strong and very good. Overall, it is still a novel worth looking forward to. I wish the author will write more smoothly and achieve better results, hehe 😁 ps: e mm... After reading the comment section, I got a feeling: It turns out that there are still people who despise the second dimension these days, hahaha😂, it's because of Japanese things, so they must have improper ideas, okay, I don't dare to say anything And what is this book review? There can't be one without a female protagonist. Girls exist, and when they have power, they must be invincible. Even before the plot is over, I feel that the author's arrangement is too silly. What is this? These days, others are not allowed to bury hidden clues. It's because I have read too many novels, and I don't like reading to be rational. Hey, novels are really harmful 😅

Let's wait for the exposure, there are too few chapters now

It's so short and weak, it would be nice if there were more

Actually, I want to ask why the protagonist didn't call the police in the first place? After all, the park is not as safe as the police station. And don't our countrymen always call the police if they are in danger?

Okay, Chapter 23, I understand, it's pretty good, but I don't like the harem genre of Japanese comics. The writing is okay, keep up the good work.

It's well written, but I'm a little afraid of writing it as an autobiography.

When are you going to give the protagonist a bloodline that permanently enhances his physical fitness? In fact, the protagonist now needs to improve his physical fitness and physical vitality. The ability of blood badness depends on the physical fitness of the user. As long as the physical fitness is high enough, the power of blood badness will be greater. Now the protagonist is too fragile, and the power of blood badness of the protagonist is not as good as in the game life. Speaking of which, is the protagonist returning for eternity?

😅 The writing is quite good, why are the grades so poor?