The End of the Tao

The author has left the palace! ,, Alas, the previous book was beautifully written, but it was too eunuch. I don't know what I thought. I have been working in Qidian for many years, I believe my vision is pretty good! The starting point is to get ahead⇒The first thing is persistence. No matter how rubbish your writing is, it must be relatively complete and complete, otherwise no one will subscribe to your novel.

Yuanshi Great Heavenly Lord: I heard you want to see me 🤓

To write about the beginning of the Yuan Dynasty, you still have to watch Zhai Zhu's "Emperor"

I've watched almost half of it, how can I put it? The plot is bland, there are few descriptions of supporting characters, and it is a bit too fast-paced. The originality of the world is good, but there is almost no plot. It just travels to the past and directly builds forces to dominate the world. There are not many descriptions of the subordinates, and the sense of substitution is too low. Although the original world is very good, it looks too bland. He established his power in a short time and then directly ruled the world. There were too few interactive plots between the supporting characters, which gave people a running account. And the character of the protagonist is really annoying. What good things are completely thrown away, what is for human beings, what race is supreme, how many worlds have you traveled through, and there are humans in every world. Are you afraid of death? What does the people in these worlds have to do with you? Your ideals are too lofty. Most of the people in the novel are just ordinary people. People below you will not resist you if you throw these things away. To be honest, your thoughts are too wonderful. Personally, I suggest you read the novel Go Away and Copy Official Documents, which may inspire you. It's not a good place, for example, every world is original. Although many worlds have shadows of other novels, it is generally good, there are not many poisonous points, and there are many novels to read.

I don't like it very much. This native world is not round enough and too rough. Especially Golden Finger, it feels like it will collapse.

When I saw the chapter about Daohua and losing control, I couldn't help but feel overwhelmed. Not interesting

Author, why don't you update the old book?

Another Hunyuan is added to the Yuanshi lineage

The idea of ​​​​pig's foot Datong, which wants to allow human beings to evolve together and make various selfless contributions, has been poisoned to death.

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The main world's cultivation system will not work if it travels to a world where spiritual energy is poisonous.

After reading the latest chapter, I feel that the protagonist will follow the path of Emperor Li Anping and establish the utopia of mankind.

If you are not familiar with the world of Astronomy, don't look at it.

It would be better if I wrote about the world I know

It feels good, but some places feel unclear. The character descriptions are not detailed, which makes it not very impressive.

I gave it up, I can't stand this kind of novel where time doesn't move.

The first part was fine, but when it comes to soldiers, it doesn't work.

I don't feel anything else. I seem to have seen a utopia, a world of great harmony. I particularly like this.