Survival Game: My Cells Can Swallow Supernatural Powers

Xiaobai has been writing books for a few years, but this is the second time he has actually come to Qidian. The first time was actually five years ago. Xiaobai had just started writing novels at that time, and he just wanted to write out the story in his mind. As a result, he was frustrated and failed to sign a contract after writing 1.2 Million words. Later, he went to learn a lot of skills outside, and found that Xiaobai, who was pretending to be a slap in the face or forcibly demoralizing Xiaobai, had no sense of empathy, so he came back this time. To be honest, Xiaobai learned a lot at Wireless, but he also took many detours. The purpose of returning to the starting point this time is to write a story that is both witty and exciting for Xiaobai, but at the same time, I also hope to absorb more suggestions from readers and make more progress and improvements So if you have any ideas, you can comment or leave a message for Xiaobai. Xiaobai will definitely reflect on it and improve it Xiaobai's book is not a funny and light-hearted book, but it is not too serious either. It is a fast-paced and infinitely fluid writing style that breaks the situation. I hope Xiaobai's book can bring you great happiness, Xiaobai is very satisfied Finally, Xiaobai paused and thanked you very much for coming.

I may be a bit more traditional, and I don't have much exposure to new things. Recently, a popular term is "cyberpunk". I originally thought it was the mechanical future and technological wasteland world described in the game 2077. But today, after listening to the new program of Fantasy Sea Voyage, I realized that cyberpunk is not just that. According to Huan Hai's explanation, the imagination of the future world and the development of science and technology all belong to cyberpunk, including "I, Robot" and "Do Androids Dream of Goats"? It is said that as long as human beings are based on the development of science and technology, their imagination of the future belongs to it. Then Xiaobai would like to ask the truth to all readers, is Xiaobai's book considered a cyberpunk genre? Xiaobai's inspiration for the book was of course a series of classic works such as "The Killing Game" and "Chainsaw". Later, he also read "The Killing Game", "Slay City" and "Darwin's Game", etc. I felt that this realistic background and the story of characters with superpowers should be very interesting and can also trigger some thoughts. However, because Xiaobai is not a pure science fiction fan, I really haven't paid attention to research, so I suddenly want to ask everyone, do you think Xiaobai's unlimited power flow in the future background can barely be regarded as "cyberpunk"? If Xiaobai adds "cyberpunk" to the label next month, will he be criticized?

The plot is so renaissance, in Chapter 6 a sister comes to save the brother. How should I put it, apart from the plot, I can't say any specific shortcomings, but I don't have any desire to watch it. 🤔

Indeed, it becomes more and more attractive as it goes on. The first story is relatively straightforward, but the second one immediately adds to the atmosphere.

More and more exciting👍

The author is so humble! Support you👍

Why not kill Fangyuan? With such a big poison, a person who just wanted to kill me didn't kill him. I'm numb.

It's really boring, the plot is cheesy, are you still looking for a girl these days? If you want to kill your own people, you can work together with your backhand. It's awesome.

You don't know how hard it is to write a book when you read it, but you don't know how hard it is to write a book until you write a book. Every line of writing brings a line of tears, and a night of lighting a lamp and cooking oil. When I wake up in the morning and look down, I am exhausted from overthrowing and starting over. Dear readers, raise your hands high, the author can't encourage you more. Novel is not writing an article, so why bother to be picky and critical. I hope you enjoy writing it and I hope I enjoy reading it.

Very well written and has great potential! People with no taste can't understand

Let's talk about a few minor shortcomings: ① The second copy is too long and the rhythm is not well controlled. For other infinite streams such as 48 Hours and Thriller Paradise, the copies generally do not exceed 20 chapters, and a dozen chapters are a better length. There are two chapters to introduce the character background, about ten chapters of the plot can be a little more, and one to two chapters to conclude. This rhythm is probably the popular rhythm of this type of infinite flow. ② The character creation is not very good, and the characteristics of the players are not highlighted. In this kind of killing game, players can be neurotic, but they must be calm, rational and cunning. There are undercurrents of mutual testing, but these characteristics are not expressed. I personally feel a sense of "playing a role" (It is not ruled out that novices or players who enter the game for special reasons will show special characteristics, but the reasons are best explained) ③In fact, the plot design is not bad. Many problems are common problems for newbies. To summarize, it is what should be highlighted and what should be improved. The balance is not very good. That's it in general. The subject matter has great potential, and I recommend it in my circle, but the overall impression is not very good. I suggest the author not to have high expectations for this book. It can be regarded as a newbie's practice work, and I will continue to follow it. ps: Looking at the author's own posts, it seems that he went to TVB to sharpen his skills for a while. No wonder the character creation and plot development are relatively rough. On the starting point, if it is a battle of wits theme, it is customary to write more delicately in terms of psychological activities, puzzle solving and background. It is not a character that is used continuously. It can be shaped into a facial expression, but the characteristics of the character must be clearly and neatly created. Characters move smoothly and motivations (when they should be explained) are clear. Others can be omitted appropriately based on space. When arranging suspense, you can highlight the core of "suspense". The main thing is to be crisp and clear. The most important thing in this type of article is to be crisp and clear. For the writing style, it is recommended to refer to the copy of Thriller Paradise. ps 2: To be honest, the first dungeon was not very good. The character Fang Yuan was not developed at all. The core logic of the dungeon was submerged in repeated turns - what is the logic of the trap designed by the protagonist for the first time, where is the confidence, where are the places to gamble... Etc. For some dungeons with complicated narratives, the author will often pause to sort it out for the readers, while some authors with superb narrative techniques are able to tell the story to the end without leaving the readers confused. There is no distinction between these two, they are just different solutions to the same problem.

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It's not easy to persevere in writing a book 👍

Not enough! Continue to follow 👍

I feel like the protagonist is a bit useless, and a person with such a powerful ability is still so rubbish.

Yes, I have collected it. Welcome to return and interact

Wow! The master paid attention to your work! Good 😊

All are good reviews, so why are there so few?