Xunwu All Heavens

There are probably two main reasons for poor performance. First, the writing is too slow. It is difficult to write long stories, especially for less experienced authors. They always try to describe as detailed as possible, but the novel always has a detailed arrangement based on the theme, rhythm, and details, so that it will not be like a running account. The second reason is that due to the current Internet literature environment, the protagonist's advantages are not obvious. As a person who started practicing internal skills at an early age, Jinjing is completely unable to compare with the progress of the original protagonist in the original work. This is also a mistake that many authors, even some accomplished authors, often make. They suppress the protagonist and try not to let the protagonist's strength escape the public. In this way, the better the author depicts the protagonist's innate advantages, the more uncomfortable most readers will be. This is the author digging a hole for himself. You either degrade the protagonist's innate conditions, or you let the protagonist take off. What if the force value is too far away from the public? You can pursue a higher realm, pursue life extension, pursue immortality, pursue the realization of the wishes of your deceased parents, pursue a country that establishes the perfect system as possible, pursue the terminator of other civilizations on the earth, pursue China as the only planet on this planet. I forgot your introduction, and maybe travel to other worlds. Depending on your rhythm and habits, you can do the best in everything you can do in the world you travel to. Then you can write more than a million in a world. The pursuit throughout is strength, longevity, the continuation of the civilization you identify with, strength, etc. It's not that you have to include many complicated elements, it's just to provide you with a reference and stimulate your thinking. It doesn't mean that if the force is too far away from the public, there will be nothing to write about. Wu is the gene of this book, but Wu does not have to be able to show off by fighting with the big guys in the martial arts world.

In your arrangement, the author, if the protagonist does not overthrow the Yuan Dynasty and wipe out the whole family of Huashan and Kongtong, I am sorry for his parents. If you let the protagonist have the same moral character as Zhang Wuji, saving his enemies who killed his father and mother and then smiling away his grudges, you would be waiting to be scolded.

To be honest, just be a eunuch. Don't write eunuch. Just read the first two chapters and you will understand. The first three chapters and the first two chapters directly indicate that the protagonist is a virgin. Then after he travels across the world, you say whether he is a virgin, he is definitely a virgin. If he is a virgin, he will die faster than anyone in the world, unless the protagonist's halo is forcibly turned on, and he is forcibly saved every time. Furthermore, the main character is as strong as a dog. So to sum it up, the eunuch is done, don't say any more. It's useless to put it on the shelves without this talent. Let me tell you, it's the eunuch's fault to put it on the shelves. Because there is no performance, the editor will not recommend it to you.

Recently, due to work changes, I have not been able to keep up with the updates, and I am already in the novice free period. I have stopped updating for five days in total, which exceeds the limit of four days from the starting point, and I will no longer receive any creative welfare subsidies or anything else! Why! However, I will still insist on writing this book with my heart, after all, it is my first book!

It feels like the whole story is a running account, and there is not a single fixed scene. Is this a person who writes diaries?

I'm still a child after reading more than 20 chapters. Everyone knows the direction of the plot and there is nothing new to change. If you write so much, it will only be boring and procrastinating. Write about astronomy. Why not just grow up and enter the main line as soon as possible? Just change the picture and it will be over.

I just want to say that there is very little plot content in each chapter, and a lot of background content is explained, which is very hard on the eyes, laborious, and time-consuming. It is really difficult for people to have the motivation to continue reading.

The protagonist has no sense of presence. .

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After watching it, I felt weird. The plot was too slow. Aren't you Zhu Tianwen? Or do you plan to just pass it all later? , The pace of the times is too fast now, few people will wait every day,

Let's talk about the cover that crashed. The main reason is that there weren't many cover designs after Qidian signed the contract, and then everyone crashed. Just wait until I save up 500 points, and then I'll change it myself!

Taoism has fortune-telling! You, a reborn person, don't practice hard all day long, why are you wandering around? How poor your mental quality is, it makes people confused. No matter how you look at it, it's all a cliché from fan fiction around 2000.

Can you write more about the protagonist? ? ? So boring

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Fire Tongs Liu Ming, I hope there are more details, such as Lu Li and the girl in yellow shirt showing off, such as hooking up with Zhao Min.