The Era of National Beast Masters

Isn't this a fucking copy of "The Evolution of God's Pet"? The names of the characters in the plot are all the same

Can the author use less protagonist names? Two or three protagonist names in a relationship almost make me vomit. I am more disgusted when I listen to the novel than when I read it. You can use (him) instead of the protagonist name appropriately.                                                                                                                                                                                                                          We keep using the protagonist's name, but there is no sense of immersion at all 😐

The emotional scenes written about pets are really not good at all, especially the heroine who likes to be weird. I have a bad review.

I just want to know whose child will be kicked out tomorrow night and will not be allowed to go home on the night of the college entrance examination. Is this shit something a normal person can write?

Poison, even my father's sacrifice to heaven doesn't have boundless magic power...

Newbie reporting, please give me some advice. If there is anything wrong, please forgive me.

Song Yi

You wrote this for primary school students, right?

Not bad, but the old routine of parents ascending to heaven at the beginning should be brought back.

How do I remember that there is a story similar to his?

If there is anything wrong in the future, I hope you can point it out so that I can correct it.

Sorry, I really like reading beast-controlling stories, but when I saw Chapter 8, there was no foreshadowing of the protagonist's parents directly offering sacrifices to heaven, and I was immediately poisoned and died. How can there be such a development? Originally, I watched Beast Control as a half-hearted daily novel. Even if it is cruel, it is for the villain. How could there be such a wonderful twist? I am speechless.

Chapter 8 is really too embarrassing. I forced the pig's trotters to have both their parents die and then gave them pig trotters. Oh, I'm really embarrassed to death if I don't tell you.

To be honest, this sister can be said to be a failure. I can accept this character, but the protagonist doesn't feel like a sister to her. Even though her father is dead, she still only wants to eat.

Your parents sacrificed themselves to heaven, and this is how you do it? Why don't you go out and look for something? Are you still trying to persuade people like this?

I vomited and was kicked out of the house before the college entrance examination.

To put it simply, I have read more than 30 chapters The characters have no thinking at all and are like wooden people The plot is really not as good as some short stories and children's compositions The monster is injured and screams next to me. I don't know how to write it like this The parents died in less than ten chapters and then the mother came back There are so many typos, almost ten in one chapter Who knows who will be poisoned to the banquet tomorrow (personal opinion)

With a foreigner as the protagonist, no wonder the results are not good! !