Hogwarts Emerald

This book is the one that surprised me the most. Before reading the book, the results were average, it was not a high-quality product, and there were many trolls in the comment area. At one time, I thought this book was just an average HP novel. After skipping this book, I read several HP novels, and finally chose to read this book for two reasons. One is that the number of words is not too many, so I can enjoy reading it without getting tired, and the other is that the protagonist is a girl, which is still rare in HP novels. In the first five hundred chapters, the plot is smooth and the writing is very comfortable. Just reading the first five hundred chapters, this book is already a good HP novel. After five hundred chapters, the plot begins to go crazy and reaches its climax. The protagonist is decisive in killing but also cherishes family and friendship, which is very endearing. In terms of supporting characters, almost every major supporting character has been brought to life. This is not a difficult task for writers, but in fan fiction, it is not easy to depict the characters that fit the original characters. To sum up, this book cannot satisfy everyone (of course this is nonsense), nor can it satisfy all readers who like HP, but this book is indeed a rare HP fan classic. The lack of high-quality products may be related to the fact that the author is a novice (if this book was written by a lv5 or a master, it would be much better to order it uniformly, and high-quality products are not that difficult)

When I saw the conflict between the protagonist and Porter, the whole book became boring at the beginning. It was far less interesting than when I didn't see Porter, especially when it came to the ball game I wanted to steal Porter's glory and highlight the protagonist. I wanted to write about Porter and I wanted to write about the protagonist. It was not pleasing to both ends. This is purely a personal opinion, please do not comment 😌

I feel that the time-travel setting can be completely discarded. The protagonist's various behaviors are no different from those of a 10-year-old child. The souls who have traveled through time are young people. Youth is between 15 and 30 years old. I'll count you in your 20s. You are a 20-year-old mixed with a group of teenagers, as if you have the same mind as them. What kind of deductors are there? At first glance, you feel that the protagonist has the mind of a teenager. What would a normal person do? Normal people contradict the teacher when he asks a question during the first class? Could you please mention your mental age, please?

I feel like McKenna's face suits Ada very well 🤔

I have a suggestion, if the protagonist can't remember the plot, just write that it's too far back and it's blurry, so don't write anything that gets blocked. Both of them ended up not remembering the plot, but the latter was a poisonous point.

Find a loophole that is not a loophole Snape would not target students. Even if he had the same eyes as Lily, he might pay more attention but would not deliberately target them. The reason Snape targets Potter is that he has the same eyes as Lily, but his style is the same as his father's and his surname is Potter, which is a bit like the feeling of hating iron for not being able to become steel (The above is a personal opinion)

I just asked weakly if there are any boys like me watching this, am I still normal? 🙂

Why are female protagonists on male channels?

I also have an opinion to make. The third person of the protagonist, whether it is "he" or "she", should be fixed. The character in the plot is called Ada "she", and the author refers to Ada as "he". It is very confusing for readers to read, unable to sink into the plot at all, and it is very dramatic. As a transformation novel, if the author does not intend to write a plot driven by the conflict caused by the difference between psychological gender and biological gender, then become more thorough, clearly distinguish the gender of the protagonist, unify the third person of the protagonist, and do not write it in a way that is neither male nor female, embarrassing, neither superior nor inferior. ps: Personally, I prefer "her".

The family drama really irritated me to death. The way a big aristocratic family handles conflicts is by shouting and killing. How the protagonist's father falls in love with the protagonist's mother is also written in a very stiff way. The protagonist suddenly gets close to his grandmother whom he has never met before, and the characters are OOC. Without the characters established in the original work, some of the original characters are extremely uncomfortable.

The heroine

I want to see the twins marry the protagonist🙂

Why do female channel novels appear in male channels? Really...

This book is the story of an indigenous heroine, and you can't tell she is a time traveler.

I've seen enough of the movie version of the plot, it's rare to see a serious version of the original work... I'm so touched 😭

To be honest, I really hope that the heroine and George will be together. George is still great among the twins.

After reading it carefully, this is personally the best HP fanfic I have ever seen. The characterization and plot are both great and very reasonable. The only regret is that AD died... It might have been better if he didn't die, but maybe being buried with GG would have been a better ending (*☻-☻*)

It's rare to find a female protagonist, but the fact that the Weasleys who disgust me the most in the entire series are actually male protagonists really makes me unable to stand it. 😰 Are there any HP stories in which the Weasleys turn evil or stand against the protagonist, and end up either dead or in Azkaban for life?

Finally someone writes about Gemini. Although it's not cp, it's so warm 555

The heroine has no love. It is lighthearted, happy, humorous, and not excessive. Except for the regret that Dumbledore is still dead, there are no shortcomings. The protagonist is even a little decisive in killing, and it is perfect. When I first looked at the ratings, I thought it was average. After reading it, it was very good, not much worse than the top books.

As the title says, although the parts describing political struggles and family feuds are quite sloppy, the atmosphere created is perfect and worth watching🧙🏻‍♂️

I don't have money to watch the original version. It's definitely worth a read if you're short on books and can accept a female protagonist (no emotional line). The writing style and sense of magical atmosphere are very good for everyday use. Part of the plot cannot be carefully scrutinized, but HP fans are just like this, there is nothing they can do.

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