I Really Don't Want to Be a Monster

Dear author, I would like to make a few comments. First, the relationship between Xu Ya and Li Ruoxi was written by me as an expert. It was a bit poisonous. She was evasive at the dinner party, but later she threw herself into her arms when she encountered something strange. Moreover, she even said her father's official situation directly. , Not rigorous enough, poisonous point two, and Xu Ya has just seen the protagonist's mysterious demon form, and is still scared. You didn't comfort her, and you didn't explain. You just let Xu Ya fall into your arms again. With all due respect, the poisonous point is really obvious. I hope you can change it and pay attention to this aspect.

Now the system's erasure will really dissuade a large number of people.

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How many heroines? Single girl, multiple girls or no heroine? The harem chased her

What are yours like?

The author. After reading books for so many years, I would like to give you some advice: Don't have too many emotional scenes in a book like this. Even if there are some, don't have too many. It's totally poisonous to write an emotional drama right from the beginning. Anyway, when I saw these, I didn't want to read them. Your weird book is about catching ghosts and killing spooks, not an urban romance. There could be less emotional drama. After all, emotional drama is a major drawback for this type of book.

It feels like it's a fire thing, it's a mysterious demon. What's going on with those skills? It seems that the Devouring Soul, Shadowless, and Traceless skills have never been used.

This is sure, it will be popular, it will be invincible, okay?

There is a rhythm of development towards the harem, which is not to say that the harem is not good, but I always feel that the title and introduction of this book give people a very novel and interesting feeling. When there are many women, I always feel that such a good title and introduction is wasted (I feel that I wasted my expectations, I always thought this book would be good when I put it on the bookshelf, but...), It's like it can only be written with female characters. Yes, I don't know why. The character of the protagonist of this book feels like the one I read two years ago. Now I personally prefer the steady style, just like me in the world...: We are just Chen Xue, not the protagonist of Lao Shizi.

Is it okay to write a semi-horror story and just write it well? After reading 18 chapters, 8 of them are emotional dramas, and you start to engage in two. In what age are you planning to write a harem story?

Alas, there should be less emotional writing. Weird and stable basically can't write about emotions first, and their writing style is not enough. Second, I don't have enough control over myself. Unless those great people can handle emotional issues well.

{"NickName":"bucai","UserId":216209259} If you want to write multiple female protagonists. I recommend you to watch it. My dear, if you listen to my explanation, this is definitely a god-level way of dealing with the scumbag Bundo and the heroine. You won't feel awkward or nauseous at all. On the contrary, you will feel happy. You will definitely want to laugh when you read this book.

I would like to recommend to everyone the new book next door "This Earth is a Little Cruel"