My Sister Is Very Good at Making Trouble

I felt a little embarrassed when I first read this author's book I felt that the author's handling of emotions was too simple I almost quit when I saw it in the middle and early stages However, in the middle and late stages When the author filled in the first hole The book suddenly became fuller The unnatural tearing feeling of each character when they first met From then on, it faded little by little Every time The appearance and posture of a character are all derived from the past experience The arrangement of each character's behavior is an extremely perfect performance The first time I saw it, I didn't know why, but the second time I know why I don't know the origin, but I know the truth The cause and fate of the present world, the old results of the past Don't simply draw a bad conclusion about this book Although it seems to be a book written by Xiaobai in the early stage But in the later stage, you will Only then can you discover how many foreshadowings the author has buried in the early stage Only then can you realize how sophisticated each of these foreshadowings is I recognized a lovely sister across ten thousand years Saved a Sanwu girl Build a salvation ark Killed a real saint Leaded a group of monsters who drank blood Transformed the Sanqing and taught Taoism Taught Wukong Created Li Tang Saved my parents Fighted the base of human traffickers So I got a saint (probably) sister A ferryman Xiao Aijiang A heavenly palace A way to break the situation A holy throne A good thug A strange lady A magical life In response to the first card I had - reincarnation Cause and effect, reincarnation is endless

This book is quite good, the progress is 50%, and it is not toxic at all. However, the frequent occurrence of double/triple perspectives in a chapter can affect reading. If you read quickly, it will feel fragmented and the plot will be incoherent. Although there are dividing lines, the character transitions are not smooth enough. The two Mo brothers and sisters both have the same name, so it is easy to misunderstand them.

Is the male protagonist always hiding his head and tail like Wang Ling in the fairy king's daily life? Have you never let others know that you have super powers?

I just finished reading the second volume of Turning Death into Life, and I remembered that the author seemed to have said in the article that he would actively post book reviews and make suggestions, so he shamelessly shared some thoughts. If the author felt inappropriate, he could pretend that he didn't see it. It would be better if he could indeed find some points that he had not paid attention to before. After all, if the author writes well, the readers will read it better. To get back to the subject, the second volume gave me a less intense feeling than the first volume because it was too fast. Too fast means that the rhythm is too fast. Logically speaking, the world view of novels with this theme (paranormal recovery) should be as grand as possible, which is what many novels of the same type do. But precisely because of this, novels tend to collapse. I don't think the author's writing is bad. The author has taken care of most of the foreshadowing, but maybe the description is not in-depth enough? So much so that I felt an inexplicable sense of inconsistency with the appearance and behavior of some characters in the novel (maybe I read too quickly?) For example, the portrayal of the conflict between Taro's loyalty and the samurai's dignity seemed a little less interesting and not strong enough? The appearance of Biru Li Ling'er also seemed a little unexpected. Although I know that I have actually done some foreshadowing and told the background of the Li Tang clan before, it is really difficult for people to associate with this. There are actually a few more examples, but I just finished reading them and there are still some messy things in my mind. I will make up for them later when I have time. The plot advances too quickly, which makes me, the reader, feel like I am being pushed along. To be honest, it is not very pleasant. But that's secondary to me. In comparison, what I care more about is "personality". Compared with the characters in the first volume, many "big bosses" appear in the second volume, and several legends emerge one after another, and they have even paved the way for the saints in the world. I know that the author has worked very hard to describe and portray these characters. These characters are not just facial expressions, which is good. But it can actually be better. Maybe this has something to do with the rapid advancement of the plot? I'm not the author, so I don't know much about it, so I won't comment. However, it is precisely because of the appearance of these "big guys" that the characters who appeared in the first volume, as well as other character descriptions, seem to have been taken away from a part of their "aura" and become a bit dull. Human energy is limited. I have read novels in which every character is vivid, and some characters are deeply rooted in people's hearts, just like reality. But I won't demand that every novel should reach this point, because it would be easy to "want it all, but fail to write it all." Fast work may not be a bad job, but careful craftsmanship can always make it better. Finally, this is not a suggestion, just a complaint: Yun Zhen, the cat girl, was obviously very good when she appeared, so what's the point of pushing the progress like that at the end of the second volume? Can't you be more patient and give out more candy? ! This is the first time I want to give the author a big blow, I'm so angry! !

How should I put it... This is a novel that was delayed by the title, but if it weren't for this title, people like me who are too lazy to read serious novels and just use light novels to pass the time would probably not open this novel... The early stage of the novel is an ordinary light novel. There is a younger sister, Long Aotian, and there is also a card-playing element. The early plot is actually not that good. To be precise, it really becomes interesting in the second half of the second volume. (It's not that the Mountain Temple is not interesting, it's just that it hasn't entered the state yet.) Although it is interesting, in fact, I only read the Chang'an chapter and the Tiangong European chapter as Long Ao Tianwen... It was after the Reincarnation chapter that I really started to take this book seriously. The reason why the relationship was too fast in the early stage was revealed, and when I went back to look at it, I actually had a feeling of "if life is just like the first time we met"... Now the epic feeling of this "Dedicated to the Brilliant Person" has been laid. I haven't felt this way for a long time. The last time I felt like this was the last time, no, it was in "Poor Man" and "Secret". I'm not saying that this book is already as powerful as "The Secret", but it does have potential. But the title of this book is really bad... I dare not recommend it to others

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The early content is mediocre, but it's pretty good and can be enjoyed. But in the middle and later stages, the content has an overwhelming sense of epicness, relying on the author's wild imagination and meticulous and logical descriptions to interweave various characters and events. The protagonist is a good person but not a virgin. The supporting characters are also fleshed out and interesting. The (pseudo?) Harems are all described in detail, and each has its own past with the protagonist. It is not like some romance novels where they just set up their personalities and go through the motions. And most of the villains are not black and white. And although there are various digging plans in the early and mid-term to expand the world view, at present, there is still no collapse in the later stage. Maybe some small plots are not right, but I think it is not harmful. Overall, this is the novel that I can't put down the most after reading Anecdotes of Abnormal Creatures two years ago. Anyway, I don't know how to describe it specifically, but I really like this good-looking book. I believe that the author will one day become a platinum master.

The first is the conclusion. The beginning is okay, but the mid-term is too poor, and the late stage takes off, and it is a pseudo-harem. I personally have not found any surprises, so watch with confidence. To be honest, if I hadn't read the comment section where everyone was talking about starting low and going high, and seeing all kinds of girls crazily posting in the early and middle stages (a bit like introducing girls for the sake of starting a harem), I would have wanted to run away, so I would have read on. But starting from the first reincarnation, slowly starting to fill in the holes, it is really a wonderful thing for people to meet each other for the first time and meet again. The narrative rhythm seems much more comfortable, making it more attractive to read on. However, it is still great to string together the various timelines, and I also have my own thoughts and opinions. It can be seen that the author has tried his best to write it well. According to this momentum, it will be a good book to end. (It's much more comfortable to read than some high-ranking novels) 78-year-old Internet article about white prostitutes, a starting point only recently, a dog's head to save one's life

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[Card] [Sealed Item] Collection Building, everyone can use their imagination. If I want to use it, I may change it slightly to suit the world view. If you have any urban weird stories, you can also send them to this building.

The effect of reincarnation is as follows: Effect 1: After this card is sacrificed once per round, it will remain in the hand. Effect 2: When the price is paid, there is no need to pay the price. Others are not described, but you can probably guess Pseudo effect three: world reset.

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Blue Mandarin

Some people may not find this very interesting in the early stage, but it is true that around 100 pictures, there will be a small climax. And the author's control of the characters is also very precise. Especially about the relationship, to be honest, the author wrote it very well.

It's a pretty good novel, but it's 90% available now. The author of Violent Death is quite humble. A first order of 200 is sufficient. The average first order of 200 is not even 50. The problem is that the current situation is that even an initial order of 200 is difficult. Too few people read it, there are too few fans, there are too few comments, and the chapter is too little. People who read it may not subscribe, and those who support the first order may not necessarily support the equal order. A 600 guarantee is fine, but there is no point in making money by subscribing. The guarantee is 3,000 per day, but there is no guarantee for Duan Yitian for three months. If you earn some pocket money, it's okay, but if you want to make a living with this thing, forget it~ Let me start by saying, I will definitely give it to the first order, but I will definitely not give it to the second order. It depends on the author, I am very happy to read the novel, if it is just a first order, I will die suddenly.

Not pretty. Not recommended. If you really want to read it, don't click on my comment. The early and middle stages were fine, except that the protagonist had no vest, but at least it was interesting (he put on the vest so that if something happened in the future he could run away without involving himself, and then immediately asked the vest to accept him as his apprentice and his own sister as his sister, it was so funny. Then what is the use of your vest? If you can't find your vest, why don't you just go to the person closest to you??) The reincarnation plot later is the biggest drawback! So much that it makes people uncomfortable! 1: Crazy about the identities of the protagonists, Fuxi (Human Emperor), Demon Emperor Jun, Taozu, Sanqing, Subhuti (Master Sun Wukong), and Jesus. Want any identity, otherwise it seems that the protagonist cannot be shown to be awesome. With all due respect, this method was outdated ten years ago, and it is as low as a cheap novel from twenty years ago. 2: Forget about taking on so many identities, the things he does become less and less like what he wants to do. In the later stage, the protagonist becomes a tool who follows the plot, just to complete the plot and teach you what this identity does. Especially in the plot of Sanqing, I feel that the protagonist's mind is hanging up and his body is just following the plot. This creates the third drawback. 3: The protagonist obviously traveled from later to before to "follow the plot", but it feels like he doesn't remember how it will develop later. There is no thought of changing the plot. ① Knowing that Taichi will bring a lot of trouble to the world in the future, the protagonist just accepts him as his disciple as if he doesn't know. ② He knew that there was a big problem with demon slavery, and watched countless low-level demon clans being oppressed and died, but he would not use his status as emperor to promote reform, and he did not care at all that the demon clan was also his dependent clan. ③Knowing that the fierce conflict between the human and demon clans led to the tragic battle of the Gods, the protagonist never thought about changing, but just wanted to follow the old path. ④ Even though he knew that Daji was cheated in the Battle of the Gods and left a deep psychological shadow, the protagonist never thought about changing. In other words, the author playfully found a reason to tell the readers that the protagonist wanted to change but failed. It's ridiculous to think that someone who is already a saint is acting like a child's play. ⑤ Let's talk about the so-called saint level. The conditions to achieve it are really like a joke.

No matter what, it is natural to treat a person who can crush all affiliated forces with one hand as a dog, just like a person treats an ant as a dog and kowtows to the ant willingly. It is outrageous. However, many novels set it like this, and there is no reasonable explanation. It is outrageous for a mortal with no talent, morality, incompetence, greed and arrogance to reach the apex of power and no one dares to move but to pay a bunch of people to protect him.

The character of this protagonist is very suitable to my liking, he is casual yet human. I used to feel disgusted and awkward when I saw those who forcibly distort people's thinking and accept their subordinates or heroines. The protagonist still maintains the bottom line in his heart, is principled and not pedantic. He is still able to cherish life after gaining power. He is one of the few good protagonists in online novels who has a positive outlook on life.

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Nice! Moreover, the author has a good ability to dig holes and fill them in. However, I feel that the reincarnation chapter goes too fast. Even the plot and setting at the end are not developed through the plot, but through oral narration, which affects the reading experience. Then the foreshadowing in the early stage was a bit long, and it was quite abrupt compared to the later flight. Moreover, Li Yuan'er's plot was so outrageous at the beginning that the character couldn't be integrated into the character in the end.

It's too serious that it doesn't match the title of the book. Yun's scenes with this relationship are even better than Mo Yue's.

Did you see the one behind it? Is this a single heroine or a harem?

Zhuo, it's you. Why do you look so familiar to me? It turns out I'm chasing another book of yours.

NB perfect time closed loop

It is recommended that Xiaoyi expands his field. In addition to playing cards, he can also set up games. The spells in the cards can be used as traps and the characters can be used as monsters. After all, it is difficult to highlight the coolness of combat by just playing cards. After a long time, the aesthetic fatigue will always occur. Secondly, the strength of the enemy and ourselves is also a serious problem. If you do not highlight it now, it will become a big problem later, such as the limit of epic cards and so on. Next are the suggestions made about other fields. Feel free to adopt them. It doesn't matter if you don't adopt them. I will write them here. "The Domain of the Maze Master": 1. After use, you can set up a maze according to the existing cards. Each use requires at least one physical card as the carrier of the wall, such as: After using "Dust of Breathing Soil", the maze wall has self-recovery and defense effects of certain physical attacks and spell attacks (ignoring the enemy and ourselves) Note: However, if you use contradictory and irreconcilable cards, the maze will self-disintegrate 2. Hero cards can be used as "maze blockers" to prevent people who want to pass the level. For example: "Caesar" can be used to summon troops to attack the enemy Note: Hero cards cannot be summoned continuously, and there is a time interval 3. Spell cards can be used as traps (exclusive trap cards are not required), such as: If a trap is triggered after using "Nine Heavens Divine Thunder", that piece will be chopped by the Nine Heavens Divine Thunder for a period of time 4. When all the surviving people clear the level or the maze owner chooses to cancel it, the maze will automatically collapse. Finally, I hope this can help Xiaoyi. If there are needs in other fields, I will continue to write suggestions and thank you. It is inconvenient to type on mobile phones. If you don't like it, please don't comment. Thank you.

There is something good about writing my first novel after so many years. I can't say it's great, but it's not bad either.

How can I put it this way? The setting is okay, but the rhythm is not very good. It was a bit uncomfortable to read and I skipped it.

What was the author's previous vest? The book is very nice👀😁

Why can't Mo Yu's character card come back 😆