Global Catastrophe: I Am Cultivating Immortality in the Shelter

After reading a few chapters, the subject matter and creativity of the book are very good, so I give three recommendations for this. Here are some suggestions for the author: 1. Write an outline. Many things are inconsistent without mentioning them, but they are really messy 2. Check as much information as possible. Many common sense mistakes can be avoided if you pay attention when surfing the Internet 3. Put the character of the protagonist and the overall environment first. Define it, otherwise it will collapse The disadvantages of this part: 1. You need to check how much recoil the Desert Eagle has. I touched a relatively weak pistol in a shooting range, and the recoil already required me to hold it with both hands. The Sand Eagle is really a bit... 2. What is the use of having a Barrett cannon? Do you want to run and jump with this thing while fighting monsters? 3. Unmanned reconnaissance drones and fighter jets have come out, do you want to shake things up (you can ignore this, the system has come out, it doesn't matter if you have this) 4. What is ten watts of electrical power per hour? Do you think ten watt-hours or ten degrees per hour would be enough? The power output of ten watts per hour did not choke me to death 5. What is an artificial sun? Nuclear fusion? If it were nuclear fusion, it wouldn't be a generator with only ten watts per hour. 6. Have you ever farmed? Or do you know the basic common sense of farming? Water, air, light, temperature, organic matter and inorganic matter (nutrients) are just these basic elements. You can even get a bathroom heater 7. What are you planting? The nozzle sprays for ten minutes every day, still indoors. Even dripping for 10 minutes is outrageous I haven't read much, that's all I'll say. I really like the subject matter of this book. I really don't want this book to collapse or become an eunuch, otherwise I would just abandon it, and I wouldn't say so much. Off-topic: The writing style and content of this book always give me the feeling that the author is in junior high school, and he should not be too old.

Let's not talk about what this book is about. Technology is not like cultivating immortals through technology. What is written in it? I don't even know how to copy books. What kind of disaster does it look like to get through it so easily?

After watching it for a while, the writing was okay. The pace was a little faster. But I still have to complain when I should complain. In my opinion, it was okay. After watching it for a while, I had to curse.

Seeing twenty-eight die of poison, what does it mean to be sorry at the end of the world? So Xiu Xian brought it to watch a show? Is the system used to watch a show? Grab it to watch a show? A little girl who is afraid of being powerless? Afraid of middle-aged people who have no power to tie a chicken? Then what kind of immortality do you practice? You want to tell me that after cultivating immortality, you can't even beat a little girl? So this is also called a shelter? If you don't have the conditions and ability, I'll admit it. Your ability and conditions are beyond comparison with others, and you tell me it's because you're sorry in the last days? Let me tell you that the character of your protagonist is completely broken. I intuitively say that if you have a female protagonist, you are not worthy. If not, that's normal. If this book is not a dark text, it is funny. If this book is a dark text, it is nondescript! ! ! !

I would like to comment specifically. I don't know what the author's mentality is when writing a protagonist with this kind of character, but I know that if China encounters a disaster, it will never deal with it in this way. And the Chinese, protected by those anti-Japanese warriors, will never have such a selfish and emotionless protagonist. I hope you can understand where we are. In such a country, we should have enough confidence in our own people instead of being suspicious. No one is perfect, but the Chinese are bloody in the face of disasters. If everyone is wise and protective, then China in the past can survive to become a big country today, but it will only be completely destroyed in the future. I hope people who think this way can reflect on it. Novels can affect the state of mind, not just novels.

It's so messy, why don't you write about technology, or not just about cultivating immortals, but also about power grids and missiles, why not write about time travel and rebirth? It's too fake.

At one hundred degrees below zero, all living things outside should be dead except for bacteria and those on the bottom of the sea. Are there rats, sparrows, lions, and waves? Your book is devoid of any logic. I agree and give it a thumbs up.

I would like to make a suggestion. I think the protagonist's mentality can be more positive and optimistic. There is no need to guard against everyone, as if everyone will harm him. It is true that in the future, people's mentality will change and there will be many people with bad intentions, but there will definitely be good people, just fewer. But the protagonist's abilities are getting stronger and stronger, so you don't need to care about those. As the novel often describes, powerful people call those who are much weaker than themselves ants. Are you afraid of ants harming you? ! The protagonist is surrounded by either robots or dogs! It always feels weird! Although they are said to be intelligent, they are definitely not human beings! It is really sad for a person to come to the point where he only trusts robot animals! There will definitely be many orphans in the last days, and we can adopt some children who are good in all aspects. Be your own true helper! I always feel that the protagonist has deep hostility towards human beings! It's really not necessary!

The most disgusting statement in this book is that the first one is in the apocalypse. . . The second revenge of nature. . . A selfish and cowardly dead man is perfectly presented.

It was like shit was stuck on my face. . . I've only read a few chapters and you've written too much. The gap between the books you imitated is too big.

What a disgusting protagonist, forget about being selfish, after all, it's a catastrophe, but he still gloats about misfortunes when he shouldn't laugh, his IQ is not online, scientific research has upgraded so many levels, and the life fire that he spent a lot of money to exchange for is actually used in ordinary cars and trucks. No wonder he didn't get it even if he ordered it at fifty.

It's a pity for a good subject. The author thought it was a myocardial infarction that the evolution of the base and the protagonist's strengthening route were messy and unsystematic. Especially when the scientific research base was upgraded, it felt like there was an extra product on the supermarket shelf. There was no technology tree at all, which was an insult to scientific research.

I don't have any idea when others criticize the main character for being selfish. It's just a novel. Other novels are all about killing decisively. It doesn't mean that the readers who read him will do the same. But I have to say that the author's basic knowledge is terrible and there are many loopholes in common sense.

Isn't the human science and technology tree quite weak? The weak monsters in this plot can't withstand the attack of ten thousand guns no matter how many there are (don't underestimate our country's production capacity)

After reading the first chapter, shouldn't the second chapter be the end of the book? Is anyone still alive?

The author always said that this is nature's revenge? That's it? Are you sure the universe is not taking revenge on the earth?

I don't want to talk about this book anymore. Stop writing it now. What the hell is this? It's so speechless and poisonous.

Read this book as a fun read. Don't use your brain. Don't get too entangled. Don't take the numbers seriously. Don't do calculations. It's definitely not going to work.

Regarding electricity, 100 watts? ? ? Elevator? ? My desk lamp is 40 watts

Damn it, I didn't add enough poison resistance...

If you don't be a saint, it's normal. If you don't be a human being, you'll be awesome.

Author, can you still come back and write 😭