Dragon Ball: Tien Shinhan, the Grandmaster

I remember in the original manga, Tien Shinhan's power level was at most a few million, while Cell's second stage power level was estimated to be over a billion. Even with a power difference of a thousand times, he managed to hold his own against Cell for a long time using the Air Cannon. I think that under the same power level, unleashing the Air Cannon would be absolutely invincible.

I hope the female lead is number 18, and not this bald bastard.

Bulma

One is as good as two 😎

It's incredibly embarrassing for a martial artist to be unaware of their own strength.

After reading over forty chapters, the protagonist has consistently been portrayed by the author as a fool who can't see the bigger picture. At first, it was fine, but if it continues like this, readers will become very annoyed.

Dragon Ball is a shonen fighting anime, but you're asking me to write a story with a protagonist who's a lazy, reclusive type, which is seriously inconsistent with the title of a martial arts master.

Fan fiction with secondary settings is fine, but have you changed the basic Dragon Ball settings? Shouldn't you at least refer to the official setting materials when writing a novel? A queen has appeared on Planet Yadtra? Where did a queen come from on a planet with an elder system? Instant teleportation is now a skill invented by martial artists on Planet Yadtra. What the hell?

No. 18

The surviving dumpling is quite eye-catching, and surprisingly, Launch's tank top and Tien Shinhan's pants are actually matching outfits.