Teammates in Global Reincarnation Offer Sacrifices to Heaven with Boundless Magic Power

The surface is the flow of the wise, and the inside is the flow of the extreme 🙂

One chapter a day, about 1,500 words per chapter, I am torn apart

I would like to give you a suggestion. Can the author write an attribute panel to display the status of the protagonist? Otherwise, if you, a teammate, sacrifice to the heavens to strengthen, I don't know what state is displayed.

Let me give you a comment. The author tells the truth. Do you think it is possible for reincarnated people to pay taxes? The country will not do this, and even if someone wants to do this, they will not agree to it. Isn't this more rebellious than this reincarnation person! And the protagonist can completely awaken on his own, so why should he be exposed? I really don't understand. And I have a feeling from your book that the protagonist has been living under other people's routines. For example, the squad leader really has a purpose from the beginning. I see you want to rewrite and give you a dragging suggestion! The country doesn't have to be so dark. If you want to write about a dark country, let the protagonist develop and overthrow this capitalist country. If you think about it, the country can collect taxes without paying anything. Who do you think will pay? We usually pay taxes because the country protects itself and uses money to train soldiers. This is also a transaction of interests. If you collect taxes without paying anything, isn't it clear to make people rebel?

When teammates offer sacrifices to the gods, they still need to cheat themselves. It is better to call them cheating teammates or selling the system to teammates. The subject matter is good, but the writing is still young. The heroine enters reincarnation. I thought she realized the importance of strength after the incident and entered with the protagonist. There is too little space to operate the fifty cavalry at the beginning. Except for the protagonist, it is difficult to operate. But it's not a big problem, Shuangwen is not a problem. Come on.

I don't know what the author thought about it. But let me give you an opinion. One of the reasons for this book is that there are too few updates. Each chapter has about 2,000 words. Updated once a day. There is nothing wrong with your writing. Your thoughts and ideas are also very clear. But now. The act of losing popularity is that what we expect is to see your protagonist doing things in the dungeon event. Because the reality line in the work is still foreshadowing and foreshadowing. There hasn't been any incident conflict yet. Now you only have two choices. One is to increase the amount of daily updates to quickly promote your plot. Another one. Just try to take fast forward measures for the actual layout. Briefly describe it, and write less about reality. Write lots of copy. I can see that your reality line is actually in your works. It accounts for a lot, especially in the later stages of your outline, the reality line may be very important. But your pace is really too slow. Moreover, the second update cannot keep up with our expectations. Now, drop the powder. Lose popularity. The most important point is this. Your writing, imagination, and design are absolutely fine.

Well, the author gave up. It's been seven days. It was a somewhat popular book. Even if you find it again later. There is no going back to the past. Popularity has been lost. Come on, I don't need to wait any longer. I'm going to take this book off the shelf.

One update a day is too outrageous, at least two updates a day

Hey, there is another eunuch😭😭😭

I want to say, if your teammates die, your kung fu will be strengthened. Then why form a team? Just kill them all with a trick. Then you can strengthen your kung fu infinitely.

I don't understand why I have to write about the best in the world. I can obviously dig deeper for original plots. For example, the ancient gods can be said to be part of Cruise and the cavalry can be said to be part of Dragon Gate Inn. Moreover, the wheel management bureau is particularly poisonous. There were reincarnators in 2004. This policy tilt is making trouble.