Abandon the Universe

I really don't know what to write, the various names are long and drawn out. I have seen that I have become an Immortal King, but I still only know three moves for Seven-note Killing. I still know the third move when I became an Immortal King, and I have been using TM for the first two moves for so long. I still know only one style of Seven Soul Slash, and I don't use it yet. I use the Divine Soul Stab every day. I just tried it when I first started cultivating immortals. It can also stab other people's Immortal Emperors! Also, the complete Thirty-Six Divine Powers of Tiangang and the Seventy-two Divine Powers of Earthly Evil constructed from the universe model can only be transformed. You described those moves so well, yet you didn't even learn them? Why keep it? Keep it for watching? When do you plan to learn? To achieve the highest level, study again? The combat power is also completely broken. The protagonists usually kill enemies in a few smaller levels. It would be better for you to directly kill enemies in two large levels. The Immortal Emperor is also described by you as being like a vegetable. There are as many as dogs and he can kill them casually.

To be honest, I was very disappointed. I thought it would be a unique new novel, but it turned out to be a novel about killing monsters and upgrading in the spirit of revival. There is nothing new at all, and the switch is still a bug. If you say it is a good eye-catcher, just pretend I didn't say anything.

Ninth is really not good. The best thing about Fifth Brother is that the heroine is well written. However, when writing Ninth, the heroine was not highlighted at all. The first heroine was too hasty and the world view was too grand. After dozens of chapters, he ran to Fairy Star and left the Milky Way directly. I don't understand this. Some astronomical people, how did you know that Andromeda is a galaxy next to the Milky Way? And when you first go to the fairyland, you are told that it is dusk in the fairyland, and you have to save it. This is really unnecessary. If Brother Wu is lucky enough to see it, remember to highlight the personality of your heroine. This is your advantage. The heroine values ​​love. Zhongyi is not like other novels. The two people get together after a few words. If you forget, just read The Strongest Abandonment, which has more than 1,800 chapters (once you are tempted, he will not fall in love with you). These two chapters are written according to this idea. You can't go wrong. I believe that people who read the novel I don't care about a single heroine or multiple heroines. From the perspective of the protagonist, why can this woman be with the protagonist? Many novels are all about getting something from the protagonist. This kind of woman is the most annoying. I hope Brother Wu can sort out your thoughts. Take the first Dandy Maniac as an example. It's true that your fairy tale part is very immature, but this book is really good except for the little fairy tale part in the middle, especially Han Yuxi, Han Yuting, and Su Jingru. These three heroines are really brought to life by you. I won't talk about the second book, but the third one is the strongest abandonment, starting from the 200th The hundreds of chapters before meeting Ye Yimo are also very bad. There are about 500 chapters. Many people have abandoned the book before they see you going to the world of cultivation. This book is wonderful starting from the time you go to the world of cultivation, especially Zhen Bingyu who went to the fairy world. This opportunity is so well portrayed, and the final chapter The last few chapters are almost perfect, and I also like the portrayals of other female protagonists in it, such as Luo Susu, Ning Qingxue, Chi Wanqing, Mu Xiaoyun's emphasis on love and righteousness, Song Yingzhu's stubbornness, and let's talk about the Gate of Creation. Who doesn't like Ji Luofei in "The Gate of Creation", who crosses the border to meet the male protagonist? The desert is to be closer to Ningcheng after death, and to trust Ningcheng when his mother framed him. Shi Qionghua, when I read Fortune, I always regarded her as the number one heroine. This is also the biggest style of Lao Wu, including the previous books. Anyway, I really like the portrayal of this heroine. In the painting, she gave up her nine-life pure yin body for the protagonist, and she has such a good personality, Yan Ji. This heroine may not have much affection, but the writing is not artificial at all. If you like it, you will like it. For the hero, you can consider giving up your life. Let's talk about immortal mortals. Fifth Brother is in this book He no longer cares so much about the portrayal of the heroine, especially because a woman on earth left a bloodline for him. Originally, this book was a good read, but suddenly there was a chapter that mentioned the woman who killed him in his previous life and the person who always liked him in his previous life. From here on, I felt a little distracted while reading the novel. I hope this woman who has always loved the male protagonist will appear. In the end, the male protagonist returns to the earth and finds that she has died of old age, leaving behind a granddaughter. It would be great if she was resurrected, but a tomb was built for her. I really don't think the heroine Ling Shuyin is that good, but the male protagonist keeps thinking about resurrecting her. Yan'er is still very good. Finally, I would like to recommend a few books to you. The book is unique in swordsmanship and the artistic conception of this book is invincible. If Jin Yong is the first person in the writing world, the author of this novel is the person closest to Jin Yong. Unfortunately, it is unfinished. The fifth brother can only be ranked in the third place, Ancient Martial Arts Fighting Emperor, this The heroine in this book is also very well portrayed, and the writing is probably more perfect. The Flower Protector is in the City, the only urban novel with multiple female protagonists that is not annoying. The coldness in it is simply perfect. It can be said that you may not recognize who Xia Tian is after reading this novel, but you will never forget it. Leng Bingbing, this is very similar to Fifth Brother. She is obviously not the first heroine, but her portrayal is too perfect. She outshines all other women. This book can be regarded as a model of a single heroine. If you can't write about the heroine, write less. It can still be very exciting. The only drawback is that the protagonist is promoted too quickly. I also feel that the world view is not big, but the book is still very good-looking. If you like Fifth Brother's books, you should also like the ones I recommend to you. Of course, there are a few other books, but I won't recommend them. I hope that those who read this will also recommend a few books to me, including those about fantasy, cultivation, and modern immortals. The most important thing is The heroine in it should value friendship and have done many things for the protagonist. I highly recommend current novels as the best, but don't recommend that after rebirth, you will not let down the beautiful woman or the queen, and then start having all sorts of ambiguities with other women and studding around. It doesn't matter whether it is a single heroine, but it must emphasize friendship. If you recommend to me Immortal Rebellion, Mortal Cultivation of Immortality, and Covering the Sky, don't blame me for slapping you through my phone. Finally, I really don't think Tian Muwan in Creation is that hateful. Fifth Brother should write her into one of the female protagonists in the Good Fortune Gaiden. Otherwise, there would be no need to write this Gaiden of Creation. Even though it has been many years, I still can't let it go. I also hope that Brother Wu can have a breakthrough in this book.

I like Part 9 so much, I've read it five times 😁😁😁

At the first level of the Immortal Realm, on the first square of the chessboard, your own great path begins. Ordinary cultivators have one grain of rice, you have two. At the second level, ordinary cultivators have two grains, and you have four... Entering the ninth level, how many grains can you guess? Then entering the God Realm, Wuji Xiaobu's own avenue increased geometrically. It was not a simple one plus one! How many levels did you advance to the medium universe? How many levels did you advance to the big universe? If the gap between you and ordinary practitioners is getting smaller and smaller at present, obviously it cannot withstand scrutiny. This is similar to a math problem. There are not many squares on the chessboard. The top players in the universe are not as good as Little Pudding and Wuji who have just arrived in the universe. If it had to be written that the gap was getting smaller and smaller, Lao Wu should have set it that they only cultivated their own way before coming to the big universe, and the chessboard had just been laid out. Don't tell me that a slight gap is a huge chasm. I'll just ask you, do you know math?

I read hundreds of chapters to upgrade and change maps, hoping for a wonderful ending, but it ended up being so bad? ? ?

Why is this book like Lao Platinum the same as Xiao Bai's novel?

The main plot is very interesting and interesting, but it is poisonous, very poisonous! There are too many brainless plots. Like urban novels, the protagonist is sometimes strategizing and sometimes brainless. It's very contradictory.

I really like the author's writing style. The story is strong, no nonsense, no chicken soup, the logic is clear, and it meets the storytelling requirements of web articles. Those who don't like it can read the Four Great Classics. I don't want to give you a reading reference either. My personal feelings, no need for your evaluation!

It's better to upgrade faster, otherwise the three Taoist brothers Ye Mo, Ning Cheng, and Di Jiu will always be short of three if they want to play mahjong while practicing in the chaos.

Ever since I read Lao Wu's book, I can no longer read other books. Is there anyone else like me?

When is Lao Wu going to publish a new book? Your book makes me feel happy. It upgrades quickly and maps quickly. It's a completely enjoyable book.

The ending is quite good, leaving you with endless reverie! ! ! Otherwise, the invincible protagonist would just lie down and sleep every day! ! !

When will the follow-up to The Ninth World be released? I personally like to watch it.

I have read more than 80 chapters and I can't help but leave a comment. If it has been corrected later, I will delete the comment. Why take one planet in one bite? ? ! Level 4 is a scientific and technological civilization planet, and level 7 is also a scientific and technological civilization "planet"! How big is this planet? It's as big as the Milky Way, right? If not, why add a "planet"? Really, I can still tolerate the comment section saying that all species in the universe are "human beings" and the level 5 technologically civilized planet "The Great Emperor" running around all over the place. But I really can't stand this "planet". Adding a "planet" gives people a civilization, a pit and a "ball". In our real estate civilization on earth, some people talk about Mars colonization, but you still have a level 7 civilization "planet"! You can fold space and exceed the speed of light. A level 7 civilization can rule at least one galaxy, right? If it's higher, it's like a star cluster or something. Why can't the "planet" be removed? How good is level seven scientific and technological civilization? Isn't it good to let the readers make up their own minds and make the logic self-consistent? When you need to write about a certain planet, why don't you mention the subordinate planets of a certain technological civilization? If you want to go deeper, you can describe the level of technology, strategic level, geographical location, remoteness, etc. It's hard to fix these common sense bugs. Musk even called Mars colonization...

The books are just so-so, almost the same

When I first watched it, I thought Lan Xiaobu meant the abandoned son of the universe. Looking at Lao Wu's structure now, it's not a big deal. It completely erases Pangu's merits in creating the world. I'm afraid I will abandon this universe later and build my own so-called parallel universe (only my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it, thank you).

When I saw the last sentence, I had a million 🦙 passing by in my heart

What is this? It's a rambling rhythm.

Seeing Lan Xiaobu reminds me of Xiao Feng's heroic spirit. The hero has appeared. Where is the beauty? Spring Rain with Apricot Blossoms in South Beauty Oil-paper Umbrellas in Stone Alley Twilight Time Heroes once formed an alliance by the candlelight Horses grow in the wind at Yanmen Pass Pastoral promise ends in illusion In the apricot forest Still remembering the beauty of beauty for the first time

Since everyone upholds the unspoken rules, isn't it too childish for a disciple of a Taoist temple to go to one of the top ten Taoist temples to ask for sermons?

If you can't continue writing, end it as soon as possible. Stop trying to count the words here. I'm really crazy about money.

Go your own way and let others tell you

Xiaobu is so awesome, it would be great if I could give him a monkey

Ye Mo is here 🤭🤭🤭

😡Abandon the Universe Voting List😡 With so many people voting every day, but not being able to make the list known to the world (especially to let Lao Wu know who is supporting him), isn't it like walking in brocade at night? Therefore, this voting registration list is set up. All the goose fans who insist on voting hard every day are invited to register here after voting and name their names on the list to comfort us and other scholars for their support of Lao Wu's fist! Of course, I also hope that Lao Wu will see this list every day, turn shame into strength, and add more updates! 😃😃😃 Brothers and sisters, come on, come on, stand up and post it, so that Lao Wu can see it every day, and you can be named on the heavenly list, or you can flood it! 😁😁😁

I also worked hard for Lao Wu's new book! 😡 First make a helmsman. As for how far you can upgrade, it depends on Wu Zai's performance! I am looking forward to the reappearance of the update mania from back then! 😎

The earth has indeed entered the stage of spiritual energy recovery. In the past few days, I searched for the Yi Jin Jing on the Internet and practiced it. I can feel the energy flowing in my body, and I feel that my whole body is full of explosive power! I'm moving bricks at a construction site now, and my boss wants to give me a salary increase!

😭 The plot of these chapters made me sick to my stomach. After being reborn, I wanted to help my ex-wife (it was still an unrequited love). After cultivating the meridians, I first went to take revenge, but the inexplicable enemy threatened me with my wife from the previous life. I want to ask the crocodile gang why they judged that the protagonist would be threatened. Their relationship has never started. Later, I threatened the Lou family again,,,,,,, at this point, I can forcibly understand that this is a character drawing, but the drawing is a bit embarrassing. After finally entering the main line of Kunlun Mountain, I had to fight Qianyin's boss first. How could it be such a coincidence? That's Kunlun Mountain! How did two people bump into each other in a place like no man's land? Two people visiting the scenic spots in tandem may not necessarily run into each other. Also, when we arrived at the flying saucer, we found the flying saucer quickly. When we entered the flying saucer and it was taken away, did we press fast forward? The source of spiritual energy is not even explained. Is it brought by the spaceship or the ball itself? I won't round it up. Then the flying saucer recognized its owner and went down to find food. In the vast sea of ​​​​people, the heroine met him in the Qinling Mountains by chance, and he saw it at a glance. The emotional scenes of the heroine also came inexplicably. A young lady did not listen to the family's advice for the answer to a paper. It was confirmed that she was the Virgin. She also leads the protagonist into the mountains, and when she encounters danger, she lets the protagonist go first and says she can't escape. We've only known each other for a few days, and we've already begun to depend on each other for life and death. If we've known each other for a longer time, will it cost her her life too? It's much more comfortable to complain. Summary: too many coincidences, little foreshadowing, and the plot is weak and fast. It feels like you want to quickly enter the main plot, but you are dragging the plot to dig holes and fill them in. So the author didn't think about how to write, it was difficult to start writing, and he deliberately procrastinated.

Abandoning the Universe is basically written in the same way as Mortal. First, the common point is that the map jumps too fast when one shot is taken and the location is changed. Second, the protagonist basically runs away after establishing his power. The leveling up is very fast. It takes tens or hundreds of thousands of years for the protagonist to reach the same level. It only takes the protagonist a fart. The biggest thing the three have in common is that the male protagonist is always looking for the female protagonist. After finally encountering her, she disappeared again without much effort, still chasing the heroine. There is too little emotional color. This book is basically the same as Mortal, but its performance is much worse than Mortal.