Signing in to Protector at the Beginning

Why do most books have to have a senior sister, junior sister, female apprentice, female master at the beginning, and then develop them into a wife or one of them?

The book is good, but it's a bit ridiculous that all the disciples are women.

I hope the protagonist changes his mentality. You must have a heart toward the Tao.

At the beginning, there are all kinds of women, being chased, being engaged in various engagements, brainless, shy and blushing, and having an ambiguous relationship with the master. Isn't it disgusting? Author, you sent your daughter to school to have an affair with his teacher? 😅😅

After reading the second chapter, let me say one thing. In the second chapter, the previous generation leader was buried, buried, and a monument was erected at the end. 1. As both disciples, why is it that only the protagonist sees the master off and accompanies him on his final journey? 2. When erecting the monument, we won't talk about this person's achievements on the monument. At least you should let people know who this person is, right? The tomb of the old leader? Which old boss? Which generation? What's it called? Let's not talk about how rigorous you need to be. At least you have to have common sense.

Feeling good(´-ω-`)

With this cast of characters, I don't even want to see it! It started like this and then it got worse later, it's just disgusting

I am very happy that my first investment was successful, thank you very much! 😁😁😁😁

If I were the protagonist, I would definitely change the name of the sect first, and then establish the outer and inner sects. After setting up the sect environment, Xuanmen would be changed to Taoism, which is divided into three paths, Taiqing Dao, Yuqing Dao, and Shangqing Dao.

Although I haven't read this novel, this is what I want to say. As an author, you cannot blindly follow whatever genre is popular. What you should know is what do readers who like this genre like to see? Rather than using the name of this genre mixed with various poisonous points from the past.

In this era, you still play harem sex, and your brain is wet.

To be honest, the protagonist's behavior in the Xuanyin Dynasty is inconsistent with his strength. If he wants to find the truth, he can just say no directly. Why does he have to go through so many tricks?

Female version of Ye Fan, female version of Shi Hao, will there be a female version of Chu Feng? Is this going to include the perfect trilogy?

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Speechless, I can always say a modern vernacular, it's so funny

I hate that the male protagonist accepts a bunch of female apprentices, and then admires the male protagonist and becomes his wife. Women will only affect the man's speed.

I'm really convinced, you are really cool. No wonder he rushed to the street

One page has 20 pages, and the inner drama takes up more than 10 pages 😰

About that?

The author has never seen women, they are all female

This writing style, madman rambles here and there. He doesn't explain some parts clearly and just rambles on about other things. Damn!

Too much poison, I lost interest after reading a few chapters←_←

It's a lot of verbosity, and I still don't know what the main plot is. Moreover, the character creation of Pig's Foot is a mess, and the apprentice is more like a template. I didn't even remember a character with outstanding character. In order to prevent his apprentice from being retaliated against, Pig's Foot went so far as to kill his entire family. For a time traveler, his personality change was too sudden and a bit inexplicable.

After you finish writing, read it again. Aren't you embarrassed?

Any random little person can enter the mountain service.

What is this writing about? One moment is training the body, another is foundation building, and the other is holding elixirs... Is the name of this realm okay? After reading this, I just want to give the author's female elder a pill!

I endured reading ten chapters, but I couldn't stand it anymore. It seems that I have read it, but it seems that I have not read it. There is too much nonsense. I found that many novels nowadays have good titles, but the content is not as exciting as the title, and they even make headlines.

We have to protect the Tao from the beginning, and all that will be left is the lust of a coward born.

Haha, as expected, the author is a eunuch, so just say no.

Recommended book: "Unbridled!" The Poor Monk Wants to Transform You" Invincible Novel, the decisive and decisive killing is not the Holy Mother, it is refreshing to read! The writing and plot are excellent, and it is a book not to be missed.